MDT UNNAMED V2.0 SHIVIKA : (17,20)

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Posted: 8 years ago
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PRE STORY:Who ever ream my UNNAMED same start but,difference is as some one and me wished Anika's kids.

Bass last part change keejiyega nahen tho delete keejiyen aur yahan padhlena.

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PART 1 1

PART 2 1

PART 3 2___

PART 4 3

PART 5 5

PART 6 7

PART 7,8 9

PART 9 10 _______________________________

PART 10 11
PART 11 13
part 13
part 14 15
part 15 16
PART 16 18
PART 17 20
PART 1

Ru "Bhayya Anika dee ney naukri chooddee hain ,mainey daadi ko bathaathey waqt suna thaa?"

Om "What? Kyon kyaa huan ussney kuch kahan ?Daadi ney maan kaisey lee?"

Shivay was struck with the memories of previous night ,a mistake he though a grave one he is trying to understand his emotion at that moment. Moments of weakness it brought him memory of life or regret of life.

Ru "Bhayya Anika dee ney aapsey kuch kahan kyaa?"

He remembered her words

"No nothing who mujhsey kyon kahegee ."

Ru "Who itnee jaldee kyaa thee unhey job chodney kee."

Shivay "Tum mujhsey kyon poochrahen hon ,I didn't do anything I don't control ones decision." Furiously.

Om " Shivay issmey serious honey kee kyaa baath hain.Woh bass randomly poochrahan hain ."

Shivay "Om din mey kayee employees job chodtey hain kayeen nayen join hothey hain ,why are you worried about her ."

Ru "Bhayya jaroor applogon key beech kuch huan hain ,aapney unhey kuch kahan hoga who job choodee hain."

Om "Ru saheen kehrahan hain jaroor tumney kuch kahan hoga."

Shivay "Mainey kuch nahen kahan ussey and...I don't know who naukri kyon choode hain."

Ru "Bhayya kal thak sabh theek thaa, infact who mujhey cake laaney waalee thee aaj aur aaj who job chodkey jaa rahen hain.Aap unhey kall drop karney bhee gayen they,Kyaa huan thaa raath ko."

Memories float on Shivay's mind of moments of weakness he is equally scared of them.

Anika "Kuch nahen huan hain Rudra ." came with a cake packed in a box.

RU "Dee aap waapas aayen Aap job kyon chodrahen hain bhayya kee shaadi abhee poori nahen huin hain."

OM "Shivay ney ."

Anika "Kuch nahen huan hain koi jhagada nahen huan hain."

Anika "Mujhey doosri naukri miley hain Mrs Saloni Patil key pass."

Anika "Unhoney aaj mujhey subaha phone karkey poocha pehley internship hain baad mey mujhey permanent kee jayegi unkey direct neechey."

Anika "Thank you Rudra sabh tumhaarey wajah sey huan."

Ru "Mainey kyaa kiyya ?"

Anika "Tumney kall mandap key photos net mey daaley they naa.unhey bahuth pasand aayen fir unhoney mera baarey mey enquire kiyya aur mujhey job dedee."

Soumya "Wow ,she is one of the biggest event organizers in India."

Tia "She charges 1 C for a day and her company is top in class .congrats "

Ru "Fir aap kabh aaogey."

Anika "Patha naheen mujhey aaj tho Bangalore jaana hoga wahan who ek event organize kar rahen hain ."

Soumya "Sahil ??"

Anika "Sahil ko bhee who sponser karr rahen hain ,unka beta bhee handicapped hain naa donon ko saath mey rakhney ka plan hain ,hum ghar bhee shift kar rahen hain."

Om "Aapney Daadi ko sabh bataadiyan"

Anika "Who bahuth khush huin aur jaaney key liyen aashirwaad bhee diyya.Fir mujhey yaad aayan mujhey Rudra ko cake denaa thaa so main waapas aagayee."

Rudra "Kounsa cake mainey kuch nahen ." winking at Anika indicating Soumya.

Anika "Tho main abh chaltee hun.Mujhey sarey packing karnee hain."

Shivay "I will drop you and payments bhee clear karnaa hoga." Tone strong.

After bidding farewells.In the car.

They both tried to speak at once but Anika decided to finish in.

Anika "Jho kall raath ko huan thaa ."

Shivay "Main bhee .."

Anika "Usska koi matlab nahen hain.Na aapko naa mujhey ."

Shivay "Yes it has no meaning." SSO style.

Anika "Hum ussey bhooljaana chaahiyen ." told suppressing tears and emotions.

Anika "Yeh baath bass hummarey beech mey rehega ."

Shivay " Its just a mistake I already forgot about it you are making issue."

Anika "Main bhee bhool.."

Car stopped with a screech as it reached Anika's home .Anika got down.

Anika "Hum shaayad kabhee na miley ." Anika rushed inside without looking behind.

Other side in Mansion.

Ru "Daadi aapney poocha hotha tho jaroor dee rukhjaati."

Daadi "Jaroor rukh jaati lekin main nahen chhahthee who ruk jaayen."

Om "Daadi aap kyaa kehrahen hain."

Daadi "Tum donon ney dekha who kidney badal gayen hain.Jabh Anika ney mujhsey poocha thaaa who mujhsey kuch chupa rahen thee ,usskey mann mey naa kuch dard dikhrahan thaa who humsey nahen khudko samjhaa rahen hain iss naukri key baarey mey."

Ru "Aap kehna kyaa chaahthey hain."

Daadi "Undonon key beech jaroor kuch huan hain bass humsey chuparahen hain shaayad khudsey bhee chupaarahen hain."

Om "Iss time mey who saath hongey hee tho accept karney ka mauka milega."

Daadi "Abh pass nahen door rehna hain tabhee unko patha chalega whu doosrey key baarey mey kyaa mehsoos kar rahen hain."

Om "Aapko lag rahan hain yeh kaam karega,it could also go terribly wrong who kabhee miley hee naa tho."

Daadi "Jaroor milengey.chaahey bhee naa chaahey bhee jaroor milengey."

After one year.Obviously you know who shaadi kabhee hoagie nahen.

Ru "Bhayya mujhey kuch samajh nahen aayega aap mujhey kyon punish kar rahen hon."

Shivay "That's not an excuse Ru you should start taking responsibilities."

Ru " but aaj kyon."

Shivay "Aaj kyon nahen ?"

They reached the reception .

Shivay "A suit ."

Rec "ID sir"

Shivay giving her an Id .

Re "Purpose "

Shivay "Buisness conference."

Rec " 1310 sir" giving him a key card.

As they were going towards their room .

Ru " Anika de."

Shivay "Anika .Kyaa kehrahen hon "

Ru "Bhayya who Anika dee lift key pass." He could see her now .

She was in white and white chudidaar holding something in his arms a kid few months old baby.

Shivay was shattered seeing this unknown emotion running through his mind.

Ru ran to greet her.He covered her eyes it took just a try for Anika to identify him.

Ru "Dee aapney pehchaana kaisey who bhee ek try mey."

Anika "Perfume.Main jitney sey milee hun koin yeh perfume use nahen kartha."

Anika "Waisey tum yahan kyaa kar rahen hon."

Ru "Main Bhayya key saath aaya hun koi boring conference key liyen." It brought a shiver in her spine realizing who is standing behind her.

Ru "Aap yahan kyaa kar rahen hon."

Lift opened and they entered inside.

Anika "ISL opening event ,who contract Saloni madem ko milee hain issliyen."

Ru "Bhayya aaapney suna ,Event kabh hain."

Anika "Sunday ."

Shivay was trying to glance at the baby he is trying to be stable.

Ru "Kounsey room mey hain aap."

Anika "1359 company ney arrange kiyya hain."

Shivay "Tumney bataaya nahen shaadi kee hain tumney."

Ru was confused at the question then looking at the tiny creature.

Ru "Dee main aapkey saath aaon event mey."

Anika "Tumhey koun rokhega." As the lift stopped in their floor.

Shivay "Tum jaakar luggage andhar rakho humey jaldee jaana hoga baad mey we can speak."

Ru "Aap ?"

Shivay "I will make a call and come."

Ru "Dee sham ko miltaa hun."

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Posted: 8 years ago
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PART 2

Anika "Door rahiyen mujhsey?"

Shivay "What's wrong with you? Mainey kyaa kiyya?"

Anika "Aap jaanthey hain aur main jaanthee hun.Aapko mujhsey door rehnaa hee behthar hoga?"

Shivay has his eyes on the baby.Anika aware covered him with her dupatta and moved towards her room without looking back.

Shivay was sure of one thing he wanted to stop her but couldn't muster the courage up.

Shivay "Anika ,rukho."

Anika didn't want to stop but neither wanted to make a scene so stopped.

Shivaay "Tumney...muj...mujhey bathana ...bathaaya nahen."

Anika "Kyaa bathaana thaa?"

Shivay trying to look at the baby he is covered.

Anika "Merey personal baathein merey hain ,mujhey aapko bathaaney kee jaroori nahen hain."

Shivay "But baccha humaara hain."

Anika "Nahen ,baccha nahen bachey aur sirf merey sirf merey it does not mean anything."

Shivay was confused on what she was speaking and by the time he couldn't see her anywhere he went back to his room silently.

Rudy "Bhayya aapko kyaa hogaya aap itney sad kyon hon."

Shivay "Kuch nahen tum jaldee ready ho jaon humey meeting key liyen nikalna hain." He said keeping his luggage in cupboard and going outside.

Rudy "Aap kahan jaarahen hon."

Shivay "I have a call."

Ru "Tho yaheen baath karlona bahaar kyon."

Shivay "Is there any problem If I have to go out."

Ru "No problem."

Shivay went silently and Ru was surprised.

Ru decide to report the improvements to mission control room.

Ru "Han daadi humney Anika deee ko dekha hain ,"

Daadi "Kahan ?Kaisey?"

Ru "Kolkata ,who bhee hummarey hotel mey hee rehrahen hain."

Om "Who kyaa kar rahen hain."

Ru "ISL opening event organize kar rahen hain ."

Daadi "Miley they kyaa."

Ru "Merey saamney jyaada baath nahen huin but I am sure they spoke behind me ."

Ru "You know bhai ney unkey shaadi key baareyt mey poocha."

Daadi "Kyaa ?" puzzled

Ru "Main aur Anika dee baath kar rahen they and suddenly "Tumney bathaya nahen shaadi kee hain.""

Daadi "Normal they yaa kuch gadbad dikha tumhey."

Ru "Anika dee ney mujhey pehchana jabh mainey unkey aakhein bandh kiyya thaa in a first try."

Ru "Like she never forget us she remembers everything every detail of us."

Ru "Jabh Bhayya ka baath aayi tho who ek second like everything stopped ,Bhayya ka tho kuch aur chal rahan hain who bahar nahen aarahan hain I mean jabh main Anika dee sey baath kar rahna thaa tho usska poora concentration baby par thaa."

Om "Kisska baby ,Anika ka?"

Ru "Patha nahen.Anika dee ka baby kaisey ho sakta hain unka tho shaadi bhee nahen huan."

OM "Shaayad usska boss ka hoga"

Daadi "Event kabh hain?"

Ru "Sunday."

Daadi "Tum patha laga who kabh thak wahan rahegi."

Here Shivay knocked door no 1359.Anikaopened the door expecting someone else.

Anika "Aap yahan kyaa kar rahen hain? Stopping him from entering inside.

Shivay "Anika we need to speak."

Anika "Koi zaroori nahen hain,there is nothing to speak."

Shivay yet trying to get a glance he could see two miniatures in the bed ,Anika kept pillows on all sides .

Shivay "Anika who merey bhee bachey hain.I have right to see them."

Anika "Koi sabhooth hain aapkey pass ,Mr Oberoi "

Shivay "Why are you doing this ,tum jaanthee hon."

Anika "Main aur kuch bhee jaanthee hun mR Oberoi, mujhey yeh bhee patha hain merey baachey key liyen kyaa theek hain kyaa nahen."

Anika "Aur merey bachey key uupar aapka nazar bhee lagna ,yeh saheen nahen hain.Its not good for them."

Shivay was getting furious at her words.

Shivay "Kyon kar rahen hon yeh sabh? You are taking revenge?"

Anika "Main koi badala nahen ley rahen hun. Aapko iss baarey mey baath karney kee koi zaroori nahen hain ."

Shivay "Mujhey dekhney do ek baar?"

Anika was fighting her inner turmoil too ,she too wanted to see her kids in Shivaay's arms his kids their kids but she know its better not.

Anika "Mr Oberoi plz jaayiyen yahan sey."

Same time Mrs Patil came there .She entered inside looking for them Shivay was waiting .

Mrs Patil "Anika Aayu kabhee soyega kyaa,mainey na issey aaj thak sothey huen nahen dekha."

Anika going near the bed.

Anika "Aisa kuch nahen hain bass,I guess apko dekhkey excited hain .Woh Anirudh hain Aayu nahen,Aayu left mey hain"

Mrs Patil "Kyon Aani ,line maar rahan hain mujhey,late hon ,koi baath nahen."

Anika just smiled as other just woke up crying wanting his mother.

Anika just picked him up cooing to him and came near the door and closed it completely on his face.

It shattered him completely he wanted to touch them hold them and he didn't even get to see them.Tears coming in his eyes.

He went back silently but a moment of happiness in his face he wishpered their name "Anirudh ,Aayu."

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Posted: 8 years ago
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IT all starts different but end the same.
I am being a roadie posting this

else all readers will trash me when they understand the end.

But I will post however.

SAKIV ! VIKAS Chandra
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Posted: 8 years ago
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it is just awesome
loved it very much
so shivika have to babies aayu and anirudh
hmmm plzz do continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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😲
Wait wat wait...ill read it and come back and comment😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Sakiv/vikas the ending will be a happy one right? 🤔🥺
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: ISensedYou

Sakiv/vikas the ending will be a happy one right?🤔🥺



ending hogee tho happy hee hogi,


warning

jhootey,tomatos,eggs,sticks rods kp doir rakho

lekin merey jyaada stories kabhee incomplete mey end hothey hain.

no beating me plz.

my writing depend on mood buddy,
so I write based on the track running in show
so once some track ends my emotion changes along with the track and mostly I could not connect back with story.

I always pray I don't break writing it hurts me.more to stop in middle sorry.
I will try to entertain you as much possible as long I write I ensure I do best,

don't worry UNNAMED is still on only half part is left to write I can post it tomorrow,

there is no break at present for both UNNAMED this is version 2.0 by the way
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: SAKIVIAM



ending hogee tho happy hee hogi,


warning

jhootey,tomatos,eggs,sticks rods kp doir rakho

lekin merey jyaada stories kabhee incomplete mey end hothey hain.

no beating me plz.

my writing depend on mood buddy,
so I write based on the track running in show
so once some track ends my emotion changes along with the track and mostly I could not connect back with story.

I always pray I don't break writing it hurts me.more to stop in middle sorry.
I will try to entertain you as much possible as long I write I ensure I do best,

don't worry UNNAMED is still on only half part is left to write I can post it tomorrow,

there is no break at present for both UNNAMED this is version 2.0 by the way



lol😆 jhootey tomatoes ki guarantee nahi de sakti it might come at you anytime😆...eggs aur sticks ki guarantee deti hoon😛
Just finish writing the whole story in a go and post it one by one so that u wont stop the story😊it just a suggestion..
I am so eagerly waiting updates of both versions😃

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Posted: 8 years ago
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well written...
For a sec. I thought u won't continue ur previous work...i mean MDT SS SHIVIKA...
I thought i'm not gonna see the happy ending of that SS...
Phew! U r not going to do such injustice with us...
So,u r going to continue both...
Good...continue soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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na aisey kaisey.

shivay ko dekhkar gussa aa rahan thaa issliyen usskovrulaaney ka decide kiyya.

version one may usset jealous kar rahan hun rula nahen saktha na issliyen .

Badala sabaka badala loonga main

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