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Posted: 8 years ago
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PART 8

Anika reminded days happening its nothing like previous day she saw him he saw her ,for moments it was complete He her Aayu and Aani.It felt complete for her but she is yet hesitant to accept things are possible for her to be happy,she is scared of loosing.

They are sleeping now peacefully it was different for them too,today they met their dad for first time they don't know it yet but it was different from yesterday yesterday it was all her for them ,now she is not all they have many to look after them a fear inside her vanished but another fear comes in.

She kissed them good night for day and hit the lights for moment .

Other side Oberoi's are having dinner ,they are happy now every thing solved atleast they thought and Tej and Shakti Oberoi's would be there tonight in middle they are not yet here.

Om "Tum ney Anika sey poocha who ghar kabh aayegi?"

Shivay eating morsels from plate he is filled with happiness he don't want to eat anything but he remembered her "kuch khaalijiyega" she knew he didn't eat whole day she is watvhing or she knows .'

Shivay "She's not yet ready,who abh bhee nahen manee Oberois manision aaney key liyen."

Pinky "Kyon?"

Shivay "Ussko lagrahan hain its not right kyon patha nahen,ussney mujhey ek din ka time diyya iss baarey mey sochney key liyen."

Om "Tho socho ."

Shivay "Main kyaa sochun mujhey tho patha bhee nahen hain usska problem kyaa hain."

Jahnavi "Ussey hee tho tumhey dhoondna hain ,problem patha chaley tho hee hum solution dhoondpaayengey."

Pinky "Ussney aur kuch kahan."

Shivay "Ussney Rudra ka condition accept kiyya hain,almost, ussney kahan she will make a room for Oberoi's in her house hum kabhee bhee wahan jaasaktey hain."

Rudra was happy though he is struck there forgetting others issues.

Pinky "Tumhey kyaa chahiyen?Tumney decide kiyya ?"

Shivay "What is there to decide I want Anika ,and kids"

Rudra "Dee manegee kya?"

Shivay "She is speaking to me ,aaj subaha tak tho she didn't even let me touch them."

Shivay "Now humney ghanton baath kee hain undonon key baarey mey, who maanjayegi just I have to try my best ."

Pinky "Mainey socha bhee nahen thaa kee yeh possible hojaayegee ,who jaisey baath kar rahen thee mainey tho umeed hee chod dee thee.Jithanijee ney kamal kardiya."

Jahnavi "Aur Shivay ney bhee sahee kiyya thaa."

Jahnavi "Usssey mouka thaa lekin he went to Anika first to convince her nice strategy."

Shivay "Mujhey Anika sey milna thaa everything can wait ."

Om "Mom sabh kaisey huan aapney tho ussey convice karney kee koshish bhee nahen kiyya."

Jahnavi "Yeh sabh chodon abh socho next kyaa karna hain.Pinky mummyji ney tumhey kyon bulaaya thaa.?"

Pinky "Kundali banaaney key liyen donon kaa.Mummyji ney issey liyen bulwaaya tha aur mainey panditjee ko bathadiyan."

Pinky "Mummyji janna chahthee hain kaisey hain un donon ka ."

Jahnavi "Anika aur Shivay ka bhee dekhna chahiyen thaa simultaneously."

Shivay "Anika ka nahen hain kissey key pass,she don't know her date of birth."

Shivay was silent.

Jahnavi "Anika maan jayegee tho next indonon kee shaadi hain."

Pinky "Who maan jayen."

Shivaay "I hope so."

Rudra "Bhayya waisey Anika dee key room mey lights off hain itney jaldee."

Jahnavi "Ussko jaldee uthnaa bhee hain,she is a working woman .Tum yeh math bhoolna she is here to organize an event."

Shivay "Door open hain ,mom aap chahey tho udhar jaa saktey hon ." shivay said silently.

Pinky looked in amusement ,"Anika ney kahan."

"She didn't say a no, hum mil saktey hain."

Jahnavi "Tum donon ney sirf bachon key baarey mey baath kiyya?"

Shivay "Nahen ,ourselves bachon key baarey mey tho main baath kar rahen tho who sun rahee the." He yet remember the spark in her eyes when she was speaking she watched him all alonh amused happy her eyes shining.

Rudra "Ek doubt hain mom ,choti ma ,Anika dee sabh pehchaantey hain aap bhee pehchaanogey naam sey." He expected his elder brother to show him trick.

Shivay "Terey liyen ek clue,Aani has a mole like this on his finger." Showing him his own finger in right hand.

Pinky "Humney dekha nahen.same to same."

Shivay nodded.

Shivay "Papa ko aur badey papa ko kissey ney bathaaya."

Jahnavi "Daadi ney bathaaya hain and guess now they are eager to meet them,"

It was around 11:30 and Shivay silently senaked to room no 1359 as she told door was open for him/Oberois.All three of them were sleeping Anika was sleeping on the left keeping them in the middle between the fort of pillows.They can't move by themselves even an inch but yet she constructed it he just smiled at her possesivenes ,he would have coustom made a bed forted for them if he was .

He silenly went and sat beside her adoring them sleeping the lady and the twins.She is not the same as she met a year ago she changed a lot and he changed .This change was looking beautiful to him he silently moved her hand to feel her as if she sensed him she hold it tightly by her cheeks .He missed her the most.She is finally here by him.He already decided what he is going to do if he can't convice her next day he is going to cheat Rudra and take his room in her house its for Oberois though.

He got a message in his mobile which he had kept in silence not to disturb her.She let him think his presence wen unnoticed.He replied it back.He could feel the presence outside door people murmering and they silently tiptoed inside.

His mom was first and then his father followed by his uncle and aunt.He wanted to speak to Shakti personally and Tej too wanted their guidance.the fourth Generation of Oberois alive.

Shakti was silent but he is happy inside he never lets know about it and he kept his hand on his son's shoulder assuring him his support .They are yet sleeping.It all changed with sound of an Alaram.

Anika woke up and to realise his hand by her and surrounded my people .She was embarrassed and trying to understand what is happening.She hit the lights first thing.

She was greeted by Shakti first and then Tej.Shivay was one to stop the alaram.

Anika "Time huan hain,"pointing to Aani who is sleeping now.

Anika "Aap log kabh aaye?" sleepy yet

Jahnavi "Hum tho abhee aaye hain,Shivay we don't have an idea."

Tej signed thers to leave and went outside leaving Shivay and his's alone.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#62
Wonderful updates back to back . .
version 1 bhi update karo na ..
Wow read all parts finally .. kya update tha👏
i felt so good seeing shivaay expressing his feelings vrna he is not so expressive 😳
and anika's thoughts are correct too ,she doesn't want to lose her children her hope her sunshine in life.. she missed shivaay too n even came to see him 😊
but went away seeing everything Normal.. 😔
but everything is not always what it seems.. 😳even shakti n tej met them too .good 😊
waiting for next part let's see what happens..
update soon
love
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Edited by chaturchipkali - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#63
read the whole story
superb update
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Posted: 8 years ago
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update coming tonight head up
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PART 9

Shivay "Anika." he said holding her hand.

She stopped looking at him and trying to guess what he say.

Shivay "I don't need a day,mujhey ek din ke jaroori nahen hain."

Shivay "Jho mera decision hain who aaj ka nahen hain its always there deep inside my heart."

Anika "Boliyen."

Shivay "Hum kall hee shaadi karengey." He said straight face.

Anika "Aur main maan jaaongee?"

Shivay "I know tumm nahen karney key liyen hundred reasons dhoond saktee hon,I just need to give you one reason to accept."

Anika "Aur who kyaa hain."

Shivay "Bataonga ,but I just want to confirm tum maanon ya na maano ek baath nahen badalney waaley hain."

Shivay "I will come with you as Shivaay."

Anika was confused.

Shivaay "Mainey yeh decide kiyya thaa kee agar tum nahen manogee tho main bhee tumhaara saath chaloonga tumharey ghar jho room tumney Rudra ka naam rakha."

Shivaay "Tho I will gamble with it."

Shivaay "Hum shaadi karengey and I will come with you just as Shivaay ,I will work as a normal employee in Oberoi's and same life as any and tum mera saath dogee."

Anika "Main samjhee nahen?Aap merey saath ayengey tho Oberoi empire ka kyaa hoga."

Shivay "Its not over.Jabh tumhey lagey I am changed and we will come back."

Anika "We matlab main bhee."

Shivaay "Anika main tumhaari zindagee dekhna chahtha hun tumhaara saath tum mujhey mera saath nahen dogee."

Anika "So aap mujhey yeh kehrahen hain kee aap merey liyen aapka ghar chodkar aana chahthey hain."

Shivay "Tum mujhey waisaa karney bhee nahen dogee.You will not separate me from my family."

Shivay "Tum bass yeh chahthee hon kee main tumhey samjhoo abh bhee hummesha bhee so I guess its fair for me to fight from your side once."

Anika don't have an argument and she can't reject it either.He will come along however either she agree or not and he won't leave unless she comes along.

Anika "Aap kar nahen paayengey .aap ko aadat nahen hain."

Shivaay came close to her "Main haar jaaonga may bee tum haarney nahen dogee,baath hummari hain." He is sure he convinced her.

Anika "Kall hee kyon."

Shivaay "Itney raath ko mujhey nahen lagth koi mandir khuley hongey and register office."

Shivaay "And so its decided tomorrow 11'O clock main Rudra ko bhejunga tumhey pickup karney."

Shivaay "Mom ney donon key naam pooja rakhee hain ussey time mey so both finish together."

Shivaay said leaving just hoping Anika don't stop him in this mode spoiling all his chance.

Anika was thinking of what he said and was about to say something when Aani started to cry hungry as Shivaay slipped away thanking Aani hundred times .

Anika was confused,happy,smiling and (I forgot the word something related to shy) same time.She kissed Aani harder.

Shivay went to his room and Om and Rudra were waiting there and came Pinky.

Shivaay "Mom kall meri aur Anika kee shaadi hain,11 O' clock aapney pooja key liyen mandi chuna hain na undonon key liyen ussey pehley hummari shaadi hogee." Shivay said without pausing a second.

Om "Anika maan gayee?Is she coming?"

Shivaay "Nahen main jaa rahan hun Anika key ghar ,"

Tej "Kyaa kehrahen hon Shivaay?"

Shivaay "Merey aur Anika ke beech jho bhee problems hain only we can solve it and we need time,Anika Oberoi mansion nahen aayegi she won't until she regains her tust on me and sheds her inhibitions."

Shivaay "So main jaaonga Anika key saath till Anika accepts everything."

Tej "Its all crap tumhey jaaney ke jaroori nahen hain,you are simply giving to much to this matter."

Shivaay "It is important,It is important for me and main yeh karkar hee rahoonga."

Shakti "Aur kuch hain.?"

Shivaay "I will work as a normal employee for time concern taking the avg employee salary."

Tej "Its crap" he said leaving from there.

Shivaay "Any questions."

Jahnavi " Kapadey hum select karey yaa tum khud karogey."

For Shivay this came as shocker.

Pinky "Shivay ka tho main select karoongi."

Jahnavi "Anika ka mera hoga ."

All were thinking of Tej and she just signed she will handle it.

Jahnavi "Aur koun hain merey side I mean Anika key side."

Rudra "Main."

Prinku raised her hand. (Sorry that character is mystery to me so didn't use her much I prefer to be close to character and if I don't know any I wont touch it.)

Om "Waisey Anika mangayee na."

Shivay "Mainey kehdiya hain main waisey bhee tumhaarey ghar aajaaonga and mainey ussko jawab deney ka mouka nahen diyya."

Om "Who nahen aayegi tho nahen maani tho."

Shivay "Mujhey viswaas hain and it will happen."

Rudra "Tho mujhey jaldee uthkar saree preperations karnee hogee,O tumhey bhee."

Rudra "Anika dee bhee hothee tho koitna accha hotha naa who tho chaka chak kardeti."

All looking at Rudra.

Om "Hum Anika ke hee shadi kar rahen hain."

Rudra "Main Soumya ko bhee phone karkey bathadetha hun."

Rudra "Reiki ko bhee phone karoo kyaa?"

Rudra was already in call with Soumya from Shivaay's mobile.

Rudra "Plz Soumya call cut math karon,mujhey kuch urgent baath karnee hain.Hummarey baarey mey nahen hain."

Soumya just was silent .just grunted indicated him to tell.

Rudra "Subaha 4bhajey Mumbai sey Kolkata key liyen flight hain ,main abhee ticket book kar rahan hun tumhaarey liyen."

Rudra "Kall Anika didi aur Shivaay bhayya ka shaadi hain."

Soumya was shocked and all her sleep gone with the jerk,"Who kaisey,main kuch samjhee nahen."

Rudra "Main subaha sey yahen hun mujhey bhee kuch samjh nahen aaya tum wahan rehkar kyaa samjogee,jaldee ready hojaon aur aajaon tickets pahunchjaayengey."

Soumya "Yeh tumhaari koi plan tho nahen hain na mujhsey baath karwaaney."

Rudra "Mom sey baath karon mujhpar vishwaas nahen hain tho."

Rudra gave call to Jahnavi and she confirmed "Tum yahan aajaon sabh patha chaljaayega.Aur bakee sabh tum Rudra sey co ordinate karlena."

Rudra "Tum ready hojaon abh bhee time hain main Taxi book kar rahan hun it will be there in fifteen minutes,I will book the earliest flight."

Jahnavi went to Tej to speak to him and try to convince to him but he was waiting there with two jewellery boxes of kids.

Jahnavi "Yeh kyaa hain?"

She opened them to see two golden chains with SRI KRISHNA pendant.He brought them for kids.

Tej "Planning koun kar rahan hain."

Jahnavi "Rudra ?"

Tej "Anika ka tharaf ka jhoda hum laayengey ."

Jahnavi just realizing his tantrum was for kids not coming to Oberoi mansion laughing out loud.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow wow wow shivika is going to marry i am so happy 🥳 update soon plzz 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow wow wow... shivika ki marriage... majja aa gya 🥳 ..show me to dete nahi yaha pe hi sahi 😃
and shivaay decided to leave everything for anika n kids so that anika regains her trust back on him wow..😳and tej throwing Tantrums coj his grandkids were not coming to mansion..😆
that was cute 😳
update soonish..😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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superb
wow shivika getting married
hope rumya comes close to during wedding
continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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awesome...
Yipeee...shivika r gonna be married...
Shiv wants to understand her...that's why wants to embrace her life style...awe...
Didn't wanted a no from ani that's why ran as soon as his son gave him a chance to flee from there...
Tej accepted...it was the most shocking part...
He given tantrum but that was only because he can't take them with him in oboroi mansion...so cute...
Continue soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#70
now remembered the word its blushing

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