MDT UNNAMED V2.0 SHIVIKA : (17,20) - Page 6

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Posted: 8 years ago
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According to them whole mistake is of themselves.
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Waiting for bulbuls comment.
she is last known reader left
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Posted: 8 years ago
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loved jhanvi and dadi
i hope shivaay and anika patch up
loved the whole update
haha my rudy baby twins hain to ek jaise hi dikhenege na logic
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please do continue
bye sumi
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Posted: 8 years ago
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PART 7

Shivay "Why did you leave me?Tum mujhey chodkey kyon gayee?"

Anika "Aap bhee jaanthey hain ,aap sab kuch jaanthey hon."

Shivay "Anika sach,mujhey sach chaahiyen."

Shivay "Tumhey lag rahan hain main yeh sabh bachon key liyen kar rahan hun ,I never knew they existed."

Shivay "But jho khushi mujhey tumhey dekhney key baad huin hain,you don't even know how it feels."

Shivay "You left me that day tum mujhey chodkey chalee gayee tum mujhey ek mauka dey sakteee thee you could have stayed their maantha hun main apney khud key feelings sey darr rahan hun main lad rahan hun lekin tumney mujhey akeley chodkey chalee gayee."

Shivay "You know uss din main kabhe nahen bhoola you know I feel you ,main uss feeling key liyen tadap rahan thaa."

Shivay "Jabh bhee ghar mey koi box athee tho mujhey lagtha thaa shayad tum accidentally merey passs aayee hon uss mey."

Shivay "When there was a problem mujhey lagtha tha tum aajaogee merey help karney,you will come back."

Shivay "Mujhey jabh bhee gussa aatha tha I used to wait for you Anika kyon nahen aaye,she would explain me "

Shivay "Main maantha hun main darpok hun dartha hun but hummarey beeech jho kuch bhee huan who sach thaa I don't know it is right or wrong but it was truth."

Shivay "And tum jaanthee hon there is nothing more powerful than truth."

Shivay "Tumney mujhey mouka kyon nahen diyya." Still holding her sidewards.

Anika "Billuji main kyaa karthee ,uss raath jho bhee huan ussmey akela aapka galathee nahen thee,who mera bhee hain jitnaa aapka thaa."

Anika "Aaapko kyaa lagtha hain main aapko chodkey gayee hun ,main tho bhaag rahen thee ,aap he nahen hain jho dartey hain main bhee hun ,"

Anika "Mujhey nahen patha thaa usskey baad main aapkey saamney kaisey aaon, mujhey nahen patha kuch bhee sahee hain ya nahen hain lekin ."

Anika "Main wahan rehthee tho kyaa hotha, billuji hummarey beech mey kuch bhee hon lekin ek doori bhee hain hum ussey paar nahen kar saktey ,mainey apney poorey zindagee mey apnon ko nahen dekha hain shaayad merey kabhee they nahen ,main jaanthee hun who kaisa hotha hain ."

Anika "Main nahen chaahthee thee aapko bura lagey aapkey dil mey kheechad hon ."

Anika "Yeh baath kabhee hum donon key hee nahen thee ,hummesha hum issey mey akeley nahen they ,mujhey apnee responsibilities thee meri morals they sabh they aapka apna pariwar usska values sab kuch."

Anika "Hummarey rastey alag they ,who saath chalney key liyen nahen hain ."

Anika "Jho hummarey beech huan who bahuth chota hain in sabh mein bahuth chota,main wahan rehthee tho baath alag banthee tho honey doo hum donon key zindagee everything changes."

Shivay "Abh kyaa huan Anika is everything same."

Anika was silent.

Shivaay "Anika tell me the truth tumney mujhey ek baar bhee bataaney key baarey mey socha?"

Shivay "Tumhey kabh patha chala aur tumney bataaya nahen?"

Anika "Main bathaakar issue complicate karna nahen chaahthee thee,mujhey nahen patha tha kyaa honey wala hain mujhey bass I just saw hop merey liyen ek apnaa mera main ussey door karna nahen chaahthee thee ,main aapko bathaana chahthee the lekin nahen batayee main ussey khona nahen chaha ,mainey usstime decide kiyya main aapko kabhee pata nahen honey doongi merey bachey merey zindagee sabh kuch naya ,mujhey ek neyee wajaha thaa jeeney key liyen main darn gayee main kissey ko nahen ,"

Anika brokedown and crying in his arms "Jitnaa main door bhaney kee koshish kee main nahen bhag payee har pal aapkey yaadein they mrrey saath mainey tho ek baar phone bhee kiya thaa aapko himmat jutanahen payee bathaaney mey,ek baar main aapsey milney bhee aagayee thee."

Anika "Mainey aapko dekha sab kuch normal thaa aapkey life mey main ussey door kaisey karsaktee thee."

Anika "Main khudsey ladthee rahen aapko patha hain,ek pal nahen gaya thaa not a second merey dil mey yeh na socha hon billuji yahan hothey tho kaisey hothey ."

Anika "Aapkey galathee nahen thee iss baath mey jho bhee thee who bass mere thee."

Her head was on his shoulders all along.Tears in their eyes never ending.

They heard the knock in the door and separated Anika went and opened the door.

Rudy was there holding one of the twins.

Rudra "Anika dee yeh baby ro rahan hain." Panic in his face clearly seen.

Anika invited him inside and took the baby in her arms.

Anika "Aani hain patha hain."

She sat beside him with their kid .

Rudra "Anirudh ."

Anika sat beside him and took his hands to touch him the little monster.

Shivay could see the baby now feel now his hands touching his head he took a pause from crying and thinking who the hell is this new guy.

Rudra silently left leaving the couple alone.

Anika has tears in her eyes but she is happy she always wanter het to introduce her kids she never had that courage to take things that way but she never stopped dreaming.

Shivay all his feelings messed up with the single touch happiness bursting in feeling special and all his emotions in burst.Disturbed by his crying again.Panci took him over.

Anika separated them and started to feed him with Shivay still beside.She didn't leave his hand.

Anika "Billuji Anirudh ."

Shivay "Anirudh." Stealing his glances over his kid again.

Anika "Donon mey sey chota hain,Aayu key paanch minute baad aaya hain."

Anika "Donon mey sey bhooka bhee.He need to be fed twice more than Aayu." Said with pride.

Omkara came in knocking and he has Aayu in his hands he is not exactly crying but Omkara wanted to show he has Aayu.He is in cloud 9 now ,half the credit goes to Aayu he is not of complaining kind .

Anika covered herself with dupatta .Shivay was trying to get a glance at him and Rudra followed complaining Omkara brought him without telling him.

Om "Main bass dikhaana chahtha thaa I mean main oehlee baar bachey ko uthaaya hun."

Rudra "Who bhee cheating,mainey mom ko bola thaa main Aani ko aapkey pass chodkar aatha hun aap Aayu ko samhaaliyega,lekin mom ney issey dediya."

OM "Kyaa cheating jitnaa tumhaara bhateeja hain utna mera bhee."

Anika know their timings well and she passed Aani to Shivay to take Aayu before he starts.No he is not interested he is seeing the lambay baal waley praani in amusement.Anika took him from him and still her eyes on Shivay and her second.

Aani the bhukkad is filled now want to be lifted again and play as long as possible he saw a shiny object in his vest interesting him and grabbed it using his high fists and big glowing smile to show his achievement.Shivay amused happy smiling kissed him on his cheeks seeing his eyes just like his just like him.

Rudra didn't yet stopped his planning.

Rudra "Anika dee aapka ghar kahan hain ,I mean aap address bathayiyen."

Anika "Kyon ?" she was amused yet.

Rudra was detailing of his plans on how their room should be arranged and what toys he Isplanning to bring to them and even carrer plan that only includes extra curricular activities .

Rudra "Anika dee mainey sabsey pehley hee kehdiya hain yaa tho unka room mera hoga na tho mera room unka hoga ,kissey key gha bhee hon."

Anika "Tumhey Sahil sey share karna hoga shaayad ussney bhee poora plan banaaya hain."

Rudra "Main ussey samhaal loonga."

Shivay wanted to see his elder and finally when took both in his arms.

Shivaay "Aayu bilkul he is Xerox copy tumhaara,bass aankhey merey hain."

Anika nodded she heard that many times.

Shivaay "Aani he is both humdonon ."

He was praising his kids nonstop speaking it all out that has been building up from morning.

Rudra listened patiently and more patiently and more patiently until Om dragged him out as the kids slept.

As Anika kept them in their sleeping positions Shivay watched them with amusement.

Shivay "Anika tumney kyaa socha hain abh when are you coming back."

Anika "Mainey kabh kahan main waapas aarahen hun."

Shivaay "Anika don't get back to this."

Anika "Billuji humney baath kiyya hain accept kiyya hain but kuch change nahen huin hain,hummarey beech mey who doori abh bhee hain."

Shivay "We spoke about it."

Anika "Nahne billuji ,baath nahen huin hain aap abh emotional hon poorey din aapney kuch khaaya bhee nahen ,aap bass emotionally decision ley rahen hon,aap poorey din bachon key baarey mey sochrahen they unko na milney ka duckh bahuth khichdi pakee hogee."

Anika "There is yet the void between us,aap ek kaam keejiyen aap time leejiyga kall issey time mey aap sochkar aayiyega aapko kyaa chahiyen."

Anika "Main kissey bhee Oberoi ko nahen rokhungi Aani aur Aayu sey milney ,mera room open hoga but baath sirf bachon kee hain ."

Anika "Main undonon ko abh pariwar sey door nahen karsaktee .As Rudra ney poocha merey ghar mey ek kamara bhee hoga aap logon key liyen.But main Oberoi mansion waapas nahen aasaktee."

Anika "Aap kabhee bhee aasaktey hon,aapkey pass poora din hain aapko sochney mey ,aap kabhee bhee aakar milsaktey hon koi doosri tension nahen hain aur khaana khaana mah bhooliyega."

Anika said this calmly (my mistake I forgot the emotion here) .

Anika "Humey ek baar daadi sey bhee milwaane hain,unhoney mana kiyya hain umdonon sey akely milney who humko bhee saath chahthee hain jabh unsey miley."

Anika "Kall humdonon ko saath jaakar milwaana hoga."

Anika said this and was silent Shivay don't know what to say.He left silently looking at his kids for the last time in a day sleeping peacefully with Aani yet holding his trophy.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: sosweetsumi

loved jhanvi and dadi

i hope shivaay and anika patch up
loved the whole update
haha my rudy baby twins hain to ek jaise hi dikhenege na logic
hehe
please do continue
bye sumi

actually need not.
they are not look alikes,
but seeing first time mostly look alike you need experianced eyes.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Superb
Why is Anika still hasistent in going back? Is their something that she hiding?
Omru fight for twins
Can't wait to see Rudy, Sahil, and twins
Continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Interesting...they talked but most of d problems still exist so they hv to really deal with their issues first...glad shivaay met his kids though...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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All this is so emotional! I love it!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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gosh...im so..so...sooo in love❤️ with your story.
All the characters were awesome...loved the conversation between jhanvi and anika. continue soonish
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Lesy

gosh...im so..so...sooo in love❤️ with your story.
All the characters were awesome...loved the conversation between jhanvi and anika. continue soonish

isn't that in 6th part,
Anika and jahnavi didn't have any conversation this update

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