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WanderingBeauty

@WanderingBeauty

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: VK_Sibling_Love
Interesting prologue with intriguing first part❤️
Amazing work Sheena 👏
Om having mysterious character and dark past is awesome
The nightmares are haunting him, I wonder what is it about...
Shivaay's alliance with Rahejas, I hope its not a business deal!!!
Waiting for Maya entry and to know about Om's past...

P.s.- add me to your pm list

-Aditi-

Yoohoo! My first long comment! Thank you so much, Aditi...❤️

Om was introduced as a character with a troubled past. Although the story went haywire from there on, I have tried to build this story on the promos and the initial few episodes. The recent promos suggest a revelation of Om's past but given the past records, I am not pinning too much hopes on it. Let's see how it goes!

It is definitely a business deal but that's not all there's to it. Maya doesn't make an entry till Chapter 4 (or maybe 5, bless my poor memory). Nightmares? Keep reading to find out...:P

-Sheena

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Monidipa konar

@ehmmbhluvr

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

gud start...waiting eagerly for the next ones..pls do update soon and pm me

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WanderingBeauty

@WanderingBeauty

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: AngelicTomboy
Thanku for the PM 😊
The one thing that I most loved in this chapter was the bond ShivKara share. They don't need words to understand each other. One stare and any action out of place, each know that something is definitely not wrong with the other.

The gunshot and all is connected to his past na. Eagerly waiting. Do continue soon and please PM me 😊

Thank you so much for dropping in and typing in a review...❤️

ShivKara are all love! So different from each other and yet, each is so perfectly attuned to what the other feels. Yes, he has quite a few things hidden in his past. Keep reading to find out...:P

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WanderingBeauty

@WanderingBeauty

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: butterfingers99
your story hooked me up!! The haunting of his dream was beautifully expressed
looking forward for more!

Thank you so much. Keep reading...:)

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WanderingBeauty

@WanderingBeauty

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Sonikins
Nice start so Omkara's past is haunting him
i love the way u describe omkara character
So Shivay is doubting him already and has sensed that he is hiding sth
Rudy-Om conversation was cute typical rudy 😆

Thank you so much...:)

I somehow find it easy to write Omkara. His story flows on its own accords, I don't even have to try! Pity the CV's are messing the real one up!

The ObBros are pure love! The equations they share with each other are different but the strong bond is all the same.

I didn't have the heart to change Rudy! Love him the way he is! ❤️

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WanderingBeauty

@WanderingBeauty

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: __shibani__
Awesome start!

Thank you so much...:)

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WanderingBeauty

@WanderingBeauty

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: ehmmbhluvr
gud start...waiting eagerly for the next ones..pls do update soon and pm me

Thank you so much...:)

Will update soon.

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loveangel94

@loveangel94

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#18

. Wow you write so beautifully

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tripti

@riverofdreams

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#19

awesooome...loved it man😃😃😃...it was brilliant👏👏👏...pls continue soon😃😃😃

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Arshi67

@Arshi67

Sparkler

+ 13

Posted: 8 years ago

#20

Your UN made me click on your story :)

Your words have a plangent sound about them. They draw you into the turbulence that resides in Om's mind beautifully. I'm looking forward to reading more.

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