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peachesnplums

@peachesnplums

Stunner

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Posted: 8 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: WanderingBeauty

*rubs eyes*
*rubs them again*

PEACHUUU!!!!!!! 🤗🤗🤗

Good to see you here too! I wasn't sure if you were even active! Am fine. How are you? Been long!!

Do read. I am sure you'll like it! Good news? It's already half-written! I sure don't need to elaborate on that one...:P

PS- Do you follow the show by any chance?
PPS- Is the baseball bat still around? :P

Haha I do follow the show, love the O-Bros, Jahnvi and OmRu dramedy. Not very active on the forum, but check it out now and then and have posted a few times here 😃

I will get back with my comments when I've read it.

The baseball bat is collecting dust due to all the inactivity by you guys 😆 😆

I'm good 😊

Much love,

Peach 😃

Edited by peachesnplums - 8 years ago

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Monidipa konar

@ehmmbhluvr

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Posted: 8 years ago

#32

rudra will alws b d sweetheart...he is actually an unadultered source of happiness...grt update..

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OnVanvaasMode

@OnVanvaasMode

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#33

Ah ShivKara 😳 ,i love them so much,and Rudy is really his little bundle of joy

Om's POV as a child is so much like ours👍🏼

Waiting forward to how are you taking it ahead⭐️

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javeria

@Javeria3991

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#34

Awesome

Looking forward to read more.

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Dilbole_ShiOmRu

@Dilbole_ShiOmRu

Stunner

Posted: 8 years ago

#35

Wow beautiful update. I loved it do continue soon.

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Anjali

@AnjuRish

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 8 years ago

#36

hmm omru seem interesting

i like om the cynic ...even i am a cynic

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peachesnplums

@peachesnplums

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#37

I read it last night

I love how you capture and portray his loneliness 👏. The flashback to memories, how he didn't like Shivaay the bully and how Shivaay was taller then 😆 and his first attempt at clay modeling are all beautifully done!

And oh, the barbecue on terrace got me hungry 😆

I can visualize them grown up, chatting, as Rudra fusses about eating healthy tofu or hot dogs without topping, looking forward to the Shivkara tete-a-tete.

Keep it up 👍🏼

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Abhiya

@abhiya_12

Achiever

+ 7

Posted: 8 years ago

#38

I completed two chapters in one go and I simply loved it. His early years with his parents, relationship with his brothers and most importantly the mystery around him.
It's beautiful and I enjoyed reading it.
Will be waiting for the other chapters.
Thanks for the pm 😳

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OmkaraKiParvati

@OmkaraKiParvati

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#39

What a beautiful update !! This was too good. I really wish Gul hired u as her writer. U do an amazing job.

And Om's first tryst with mud and sculpting was beautiful.

And I loved the ShivKara interaction you put/ And knowing Rudra, am not surprised that the glasses are broken 😆

But why is he carrying a mattress ??? Do continue soon and do PM me

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Lakshmi G Reghunath

@-Ila-

Sparkler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#40

Eye catching story definitely!

It's very nicely penned and the way Omkara sees things is so...well for the lack of a better word, objective, very much detached. The objectivity is the beauty of the work though.

Hoping to see the update soon

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