Playing with the Oberois: A Fiction(Updated Page 7)

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chandanagimsy

@chandanagimsy

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Posted: 8 years ago

#51

It was senti... But the last line..kya yaar.. Itni emotional update ke baad itni acha joke..aww.. Waiting for next...please update soon

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geet.a

@geet.a

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Posted: 8 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: chandanagimsy
It was senti... But the last line..kya yaar.. Itni emotional update ke baad itni acha joke..aww.. Waiting for next...please update soon

I'm so sorry! But usually this sort of emotional thing adds to the lead couple's intimacy 😆

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Frozen.K

@Frozen.K

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Posted: 8 years ago

#53

This one is so emotional but beautiful geetu 😭
I loved it...mera Sahil was hurt by a bully 😡
I am loving this new side of your OS emotional one...I think mix kiya kar more frequently...amazing piece yaara aur kya Bolu 😳

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geet.a

@geet.a

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Posted: 8 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: Frozen.K
This one is so emotional but beautiful geetu 😭
I loved it...mera Sahil was hurt by a bully 😡
I am loving this new side of your OS emotional one...I think mix kiya kar more frequently...amazing piece yaara aur kya Bolu 😳

I can't write till i do it from my heart :(
But it came to me!! 😕
Is it still NOT BAd?

Tune subtle shivika nahi padha??

Edited by geet.a - 8 years ago

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Frozen.K

@Frozen.K

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Posted: 8 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: geet.a

I can't write till i do it from my heart :(
But it came to me!! 😕
Is it still NOT BAd?

Tune subtle shivika nahi padha??

Nope..link hai kya tere paas I used to write FF myself few years back for pyaar ki Yeh Ek kahani and I loved it 😳 I used to just write what my heart feels and the forum used to like it...sometimes I used to be confused thinking are they telling me the truth aur just kind of playing with me...but trust me even though we feel at times that it is not good, but others think it otherwise 😳 bottom line I loved this piece...I like to experiment with my writing so I loved this new emotional side of your OS 😳

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Pritha Roy

@pritzz

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Posted: 8 years ago

#56

Can shivaay be so sensitive

he said... sahil is an oberoi and was thinking about his already present qualities to be an oberoi... his love for anika is so Much...her every prayer he will grant it for her

I had to written a post where I had said that Shivaay will gift Anika a family ... you have elaborated that line perfectly..! 👏👏👏

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geet.a

@geet.a

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Posted: 8 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: Frozen.K

Nope..link hai kya tere paas I used to write FF myself few years back for pyaar ki Yeh Ek kahani and I loved it 😳 I used to just write what my heart feels and the forum used to like it...sometimes I used to be confused thinking are they telling me the truth aur just kind of playing with me...but trust me even though we feel at times that it is not good, but others think it otherwise 😳 bottom line I loved this piece...I like to experiment with my writing so I loved this new emotional side of your OS 😳

awww baby no no i meant did you not read the subtle shivika moment in this OS?

Maane humesha overt nahi, waise hi, whatever Shivu did was for Anika, because he cares about her, he cares about Sahil!

That's why I showed him overhearing that scene of them together!

😳

I'm so glad you liked the writing though! bas ek woh hi calling hai, woh galat hui toh problem ho jayegi

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shailu

@rs-shailu29

Stunner

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Posted: 8 years ago

#58

Nice ya emotional but good

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geet.a

@geet.a

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Posted: 8 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: pritzz
Can shivaay be so sensitive
he said... sahil is an oberoi and was thinking about his already present qualities to be an oberoi... his love for anika is so Much...her every prayer he will grant it for her

I had to written a post where I had said that Shivaay will gift Anika a family ... you have elaborated that line perfectly..! 👏👏👏

baby he would. I'm telling you.

The boy who slept on her lap, would definitely find every family definition in her AND give her a family.

Nahi toh this entire khoon khandaan thing would never have come up.

She'll be more than love, she'll be antibody, she'll be what SAVES the blood and heals the wounds. and This will inevitably happen.

I have been writing shivaay for some weeks, i just know this will happen.

I saw that flirting boy from my fanfic in yday's epi, yeh bhi aayega..

but i just wanted to write something happy, toh isliye yeh likh diya.