Playing with the Oberois: A Fiction(Updated Page 7) - Page 5

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: ArhiIPKKND

Awww...i am so glad u r writing this...such a happy beautiful look into d future...


Aw, thanks love for reading😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks!😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Has I'm anew member..to this story..marveloousactually the small small scenes which you wrote for shivka and shiv sahil scenes..and the ending mujhe toh rakhne doh.. Omg..tum mujhe aur bhi deewana bana rahe Ho ise likh kar.. Waiting for next part
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Originally posted by: chandanagimsy

Has I'm anew member..to this story..marveloousactually the small small scenes which you wrote for shivka and shiv sahil scenes..and the ending mujhe toh rakhne doh.. Omg..tum mujhe aur bhi deewana bana rahe Ho ise likh kar.. Waiting for next part



Thank you so much 😳 i'll definitely continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: geet.a


Prithu! hugs!!
I feel she will react once at least by feeling this overwhelmed at the care she receives in OM.
Sahil toh definitely will outsmart Shivaay, I just wish we also get a scene where Shivaay is advising him about school stuff..
I shall write..maybe sooner than I think😆😆


Omg shivaay total involved in Sahil as a fatherly figure that would be so beautiful to watch... chal show me jo hoga hoga... tu apne os me jaadu dikhane wali hai .. I am eager to read all the possible equations in the family.. and sahil - shivaay and AniOmRu is something I adore the most.. even Anika -Pinky 😆 They will too will create a cyclone in shivaays life 🤣 shivaay ne kaamal ka pataka chuna hai 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Omg shivaay total involved in Sahil as a fatherly figurethat would be so beautiful to watch... chal show me jo hoga hoga... tu apne os me jaadu dikhane wali hai ..I am eager to read all the possible equations in the family.. and sahil - shivaay and AniOmRu is something I adore the most.. even Anika -Pinky😆They will too will create a cyclone in shivaays life🤣shivaay ne kaamal ka pataka chuna hai😆



Next i'll probably add the karva chauth flavour without the fast of course
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Posted: 8 years ago
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superbbb...was brilliant update soon..❤️...it
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Originally posted by: Lesy

superbbb...was brilliantupdate soon..❤️...it



Thanks! Will continue soon 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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First of all, thank you so much to all of you for liking, reading, commenting, and encouraging me to write!
LOVE to all of you!
To all the silent readers, I hope this one makes you not just PM me but also comment😳

'Anika beta, kahan phirki ki tarha idhar udhar ghoom rahi hai, aaj toh tu disappears hoti jaa rahi hai'
Pinky stopped Anika for the fifth time in the last two hours, asking her what the issue was.

'Sorry, Pinky aunty, woh Sahil ke birthday ke liye thodi planning kar rahi thi, uske sab favourites alag alag cuisine ke hain, and I want to make them all and make it special for him'

'Arre, humare Sahil ka birthdays hai? Mujhe bhi helps karna hai! bata kya karna hai?'

Anika was overwhelmed by this generosity, especially an hour later when she found a bunch of Oberoi family members standing in attention, awaiting her instructions.
She did not expect a lot of them to abandon their family and professional duties to help, but there they all were.

'Main aap sabko thanks bolna chahti hoon for being here. Mere liye Sahil mera sab kuch hai, my entire world. Woh nahi, toh kuch nahi. Aur woh smile karta hai na, toh sab asaan lagta hai. Meri kamzoriyon ko usne apnaya hai, meri har chhupi baat ko usne ignore karke, mujhe itna pyaar diya hai jo koi kar hi nahi sakta. Sahil mera sab kuch hai. I try to make his birthday special every year. Lekin, aap log iss baar help karna chahte ho, please do not do it because of any obligation. Do it only if you love Sahil. Woh bohot chantt hai, usko pata lag jaayega'

Hearing this, while Pinky and Dadi wiped a few stray tears that had escaped their eyes, Soumya came forward

'Di, I know what it is to have a brother's love. Main aapke saath hoon. Aap bas kaam boliye'

Om and Rudy put an arm across each others' shoulders and came forward as well
'Bejhijak boliye. Sahil humara bhi bhai hai'


Shivaay did not know where they had all disappeared again (by they, he of course meant Anika).
Finally huffing his way to the kitchen, he found most of his family around, at the moment of dispersal. Anika, with a rare moment to herself at the Oberoi mansion heaved a sigh and looked up

'Aap par vishwaas nahi karti lekin aapne toh meri godi mein hi itni pyaari family daal di. Kaise karza chukaaungi aapka, mere Sahil ko itni pyaar karne wali family di. Shayad, aage jaake, usko meri zaroorat hi na ho. Kaash, main itni strong ho saku ki usko chhod kar, uske liye kuch kar paaun. Maana aapse meri nahi banti, par phir bhi thank you SSO ko meri life mein laane ke liye. Billu ji agar nahi aate, toh mere Sahil ko aaj milne wali khushi nahi milti'

Shivaay's eyes blurred for a few moments as he heard this heartfelt whispered prayer that was not a prayer.
she loved Sahil so much, he was her entire universe that Shivaay decided that from now on, Sahil was an Obro.
Shivaay Singh Oberoi decides who deserves to be in his family, and Sahil, well he was smart, and funny, and he showed potential as a businessman, was going to be an Oberoi.
As he was thinking all this, his phone rung, an unknown number that he was about to reject but somehow just decided to accept

'Hello?'
'Mr Oberoi?'
'Yes?'
'This is the City Hospital, a child named Sahil has had a serious accident. It would be best if you could come as he requires a surgery'.

Shivaay felt his heart contract. Eyes wide to hide his tears, he reassured he'd be there right away. Anika, who was expecting he'd approach her to say something at least, did not expect him to literally rush away with this bright spark in his eyes.
She ignored it and focused on all the things she needed to cook.
Mindlessly, she sent up a prayer for Sahil's safety.

Shivaay cancelled his schedule for the next three days and rushed to the hospital where he was asked to sign a form. Apparently, Sahil had gotten into an argument with a bully who had pushed him down two flights of stairs and beaten him senseless besides.
He screamed at the doctor to do what they could, since Sahil already had a condition, there was no time to be wasted.
He called Om

'Om, Om!'
'Shivaay, what happened? I have never heard you this flustered, kya hua? Accha sun, what do you think Sahil would prefer? Ironman, the Hulk, or Batman?'

'OM! Shut up and listen! Sahil is in the hospital! DO NOT TELL ANIKA. I need you and Rudra here right now!'


Anika did not realize how and when she reached the hospital. She was simply cooking one moment, and the cake was complete, and the next, Shivaay had calmly asked her to come to the hospital.
So she did.
Bad feelings aside, she did not expect to find Shivaay in creased clothes, along with a heart-wrenching frown and streaks of salt across his fair face.
Barely missing a beat, she asked him what the matter was.
'Sahil'

That one word, that one word was enough to destroy her world.
As she collapsed, Shivaay held her up and to him. They knelt down against a wall while she just dry-wept against his chest; he would NOT let her go. Breathing was not important but she was. All he could do, all he felt, he put it out when he held her as she cried for an almost broken childhood.

'Shhh, he'll be okay. He has the best medical facilities this world can afford. I made sure of it. I promise you, he will be okay'

It was perhaps after one such countless statement that Anika finally lifted her head from his wet shirt-chest
'Are you sure he will be okay?'
Shivaay smiled and wiped a tear from one of her eye (over the years he forgot which one)

'Of course. I am Shivaay Singh Oberoi. Sahil is my buddy'

A few hours later they all shuffled into Sahil's room silently, and decorated it as best as they could. Rudy and Soumya went to collect the goodies from home. Pinky, Jhanvi, and Dadi got the food packed, while Prinku and Om got the cake and the presents.
Anika and Shivaay refused to move till Sahil gained consciousness and was pronounced safe.

'Sahil, buddy. Tumne agli baar tumhari didi aur mujhe daraya toh main tumhe khud maarunga'

An emotional Shivaay tried to be stern but ended up ruffling Sahil's hair, whispering a Happy Birthday against his ear while he wiped Sahil's tears.

'didi?'
'BAAT mat kar tu mujhse! baat mat...'
She could not even repeat her sentence as she almost leapt into Sahil's waiting arms, encompassed by Shivaay, who felt he had the world now that these two were smiling and safe again.

Sahil would always remember his ninth birthday, because the biggest gift he received was a family, was because her didi had the love she had always deserved in her life.
He was a happy brother, and perhaps, with Billu ji's knowledge and experience, he'd be able to impress Soumya into falling in love with him.

OKay that's it! I was feeling senty and this one's dedicated to my own younger bro who had his own life threatening experience.😳

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