Playing with the Oberois: A Fiction(Updated Page 7) - Page 4

Originally posted by: jahnavi1995

Beautifully Written 👏

AniRudr bond is a delight to watch and read ..

Billu ji ko takkar ka Saala mila 😆

Loved the flirt singh Oberoi 😆

and his concern for Anika was beautifully described..we saw a small glimpse of it in the show 'tumhe kuch ho jatha tho mera kya hoga' and I really want to see a crying Shivaay😆

Will be waiting for it's continuation..

Originally posted by: geet.a

Thanks Jahn!

Bas usi small scene ko embellish kar diya maine😳😳

I'm glad you liked it!

If everyone wants, I'll write more for sure😳😳

Originally posted by: jahnavi1995

My Pleasure Geet ..

I loved it 😃

Of course we want 😃

geet apki jitni tarif ki jae kam hai..
you have so beautifully presented this new phase of their life.. caring for each other n guarding each other.. m sure even anika would react in a similar way in which shivaay reacted..
n sahil is finally getting a childhood he deserves n anika wanted for him n she truly is happy.. she gets emotional knowing this was how loving n being loved felt..
ohh my innocent dear anika so u r afraid of that different emotion in his kanji eyes is it ?😉
well only if u find courage to delve in that emotion that darkness u so fear will u be finally able to find LIGHT And LOVE ❤️
so go for it baby.
well expressed.. write more dear.
Love
Bulbul

Ohh my god

Originally posted by: chaturchipkali

geet apki jitni tarif ki jae kam hai..
you have so beautifully presented this new phase of their life.. caring for each other n guarding each other.. m sure even anika would react in a similar way in which shivaay reacted..
n sahil is finally getting a childhood he deserves n anika wanted for him n she truly is happy.. she gets emotional knowing this was how loving n being loved felt..
ohh my innocent dear anika so u r afraid of that different emotion in his kanji eyes is it ?😉
well only if u find courage to delve in that emotion that darkness u so fear will u be finally able to find LIGHT And LOVE ❤️
so go for it baby.
well expressed.. write more dear.
Love
Bulbul

Originally posted by: minamma

Ohh my god

M dancinG

Thats amazing

Plz continue ASAP

What that billuji MR. SHIVAAY SINGH OBEROI

Awww...i am so glad u r writing this...such a happy beautiful look into d future...

Originally posted by: pritzz

What that billuji MR. SHIVAAY SINGH OBEROI

Geet ❤️

I loved it! I truly loved it!

I want this happening in the show now...

I see this coming though.. the caring shivaay ... ❤️

I loved it how Included the whole family... caring for her .. and How protective shivaay was that he just turned back to go get her as soon he heard she left alone

The way the family asked her ..was she ok.. ❤️

I wanted to read more.. so shivaay cares for her and she knows it?

I really liked how anika is feeling when she realises what being loved is

I loved the car scene .. sahil and Shivaay 😆, sahil is a smart kid.. he can easily decode shivaay.. 😆 OmRu ke saath ye chintu bhi strong shivika shipper hai 😆 I am loving sahil here.. 😆

I short I loved every bit of this

I hope you are writing more.. because I am looking up to it...