Waterworks || A ShivIka OS

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: Arshi67
Lovely blending of humour and intensity. I loved how you had them brush lips chastely. Anything else would have jarred. As for Rudra being the one to discover them, delish!

Thank you, lovely 😆

To be honest, I don't think I'm too good at writing full-blown make-out sessions as of yet anyway!

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: Innika

Thank you! You're too kind!
Coming to the SS, thank you again, and I should hopefully update this week! 😃

You are very welcome😳

Oh yes i am waiting. I had left you a comment there too. And i keep on checking for the update😆

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: pritzz
This was so so hot and funny and rudra and the water connection 🤣 I was laughing continuously hahaha too good.. keep up with your work... looking forward to some more water works 😆

Thank you!

Well, I don't know if I'll be doing any more water-related fics (but actually that would make a cute series to write, maybe I could do that in the future!) but if people are interested enough, I was planning to write an IshKara paint OS 😆

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: twerping
haha! That was superb! Love the humour in your writing! This was a total treat to read! Could very well visualise the whole scene happening before my eyes! Gul should definitely take a page out of your book!

Thank you so much!
I actually feel so special now, because I love your writing so much!

I keep meaning to comment on The Masquerade and tell you how much I love it but I never actually remember 😕 Keep your eyes out because there is a rant coming!

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: SanyaEterna
Oh my mata! Ye toh tap water ke paani main geele nahi huye,par bheeg gayee!!

Awesome. Loved the last line!

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it 😆

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Originally posted by: lucky_princess
Did u seriously have to bring him at that time...u could ve bought him a bit late into the moment...
This was awesome...
I mean tooo good..
Loved it
ShivIka were soo intense☺️
Love Sharmi

Haha, I'm so sorry😳

Next time, I'll make sure our Rudy doesn't interrupt!

Thank you so much😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: Cookieg
Awesome update
Rudra had to interrupt!!
Shivika too cute

Thank you so much 😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: MysticRiver
awesome os..👏

Thank you 😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: chco
loved it

Thank you, that means a lot ❤️

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: xerxes12
My words to shivika..
Water water every where..
But not a drop to drink..
Finish your romantic sessions..
Before you two sink..

Omg ..hilarious and amezing... 👏 👏
Rudra..bad manners.. 🤣

Wow, what a poem ❤️

Thank you so much, lovely!

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