Waterworks || A ShivIka OS - Page 2

My words to shivika..
Water water every where..
But not a drop to drink..
Finish your romantic sessions..
Before you two sink..

Omg ..hilarious and amezing... 👏 👏
Rudra..bad manners.. 🤣

Hi,

I am Ayesha (you guessed it right!) and I am so glad that I have one last comment left for the day - the stupid 20 comments per day limitation for Groupbie memebers - and hence I am able to comment to on this masterpiece of yours! (I have a huge reply penned out for you comment in my Invisible To The Eye, but I will post that tomorrow because I really cannot help but write this here!)

I loved absolutely everything about it! This OS was the sheer embodiment of everything that ShivIka is - passionate, intense, hilarious, cute, adorable and almost angsty all at the same time!

My reason for falling for these two amazing characters was that they bring one another alive. It's as Malika said to Shivaay, they bring each other's childhood back and it's beautiful to watch. Then combined with that is the sheer longing for that magic blossoming within the two of them - a longing that they can't help but feel in spite of life long lessons of carrying the load alone.

Your brilliant writing portrayed all of that! My reaction to your story was exactly the same one that I have when I watch these two stubborn people on TV - I was sighing, laughing, almost hyperventilating, a little misty eyed all at the same time!

I could so imagine Shivaay standing there and staring at her, just as I could all but see Anika lying on her stomach and trying to fix the taps! Thank you so much for writing this!

I loved every single word you wrote!

And now, I am going to go back and re-read it!

Lots of Love,

A.C.

Idk where you came up with the story but I loved it

Bedutiful.really enjoyed it.
Do write more.
👏

that was awesome...couldnot control my laughter :-!

Rudra ne galat time par entry maari ;-)

Keep writing...:-)

Omg that was so good...so glad u shared it with us...

I loved this

Originally posted by: Vishakha..

awesome

Originally posted by: ...Angels...

This is so sweet dear

Shivaay just loves Anika's laugh😳

Their water woes always make me laugh😆

Haye my ShivIka were leaning in for a kiss☺️

When all of a sudden, Rudra comes😆

The last paragraph made me laugh so much!

"Oh my mata!"

Rudra Singh Oberoi clapped his hand across his open mouth in shock and glee. He couldn't wait to tell O about this, Shivaay Bhaiya and Annika Di were having a passionate make-out session in his bathroom. Why they were both soaked with water though, he had no idea. They could've just moved it to the bedroom, but no. They had taken to initiating kisses under the spell of tap water, was their need for each other so much that they couldn't wait for monsoon season?

Sometimes, they took their infatuation with water too far. 🤣

I LOVED it a lot dear🤗

Originally posted by: -happilyunknown

Oh wow i am so glad you wrote this Shivaay and Anika here just took the usual rain- sequence of the Indian TV drama world to a whole new level😆 Your creativity is commendable but it is no surprise to me, me being a reader of your SS. I loved where they reached a mutual understanding and leaned in for a kiss. Aye Haye the feels❤️

Great OS love :) Please do write more.

G🤗