Two Parallel Lines_A ShivIka FF_Chapter 8 (18.11.16) Page 31 - Page 12

Originally posted by: arohiarsh16

woow...AWESOME...superb...AMAZING...
its sach a Emotional n Heart touching part...
waiting fr next part ...pls update soon...

Thank you so much 🤗

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

nice update..

Thanks 😳

Originally posted by: SRKian

awesome Pre👏👏 can totally c shiv actually sacrificing his life/luv if needed😭😭 my poor th😭😭

AniKara☺️

update soonish

Ani 🤗 Thanks 😳 SHivay is a sacrificial lamb here 😛 Soonish 😉 AniKara 😳

Originally posted by: twerping

This was so good! A lot of things became clear in this. Really liking how you're building the relationship between Om and Shivay as well as Om-Anika-Shivay.

The way Shivay takes up the responsibility of Om is very much in keeping with the persona we have come to know in the show and you've maintained that so beautifully despite the changed contexts and demands of the AU.

Also, Om! Really interested to see how his relationship with Anika will develop!

Shivay's realisations and attraction towards Anika was wonderfully portrayed! wish he had acted upon some of those desires!

Swear, I was hoping there will be some angry face off once they reached the resort! But he behaved like a perfect gentleman!

Amazing update!

Thanks for the PM! 🤗

Ri 🤗 I was so waiting for your comment although I told you to give it after Ekadoshi 😆 He is a gentleman here, don't have any prejudice about Lineage, Khoon, Khandan 🤣 I'm so happy that you liked those scenes... Thanks 😳

Originally posted by: chaturchipkali

shivika hi honge nahi to mai preit ko peet dungi

End me shivika hi honge 🤗

Originally posted by: Ketaki19

i m also with you :P

Dono sath me flowers se pitna because end me ShivIka hi honge ! 😳

why preitu why..why did u did this ..
anikara kiss ..naheee 😭 😡
though update was very touching n heart wrenching
anika feeling as if she betrayed shivaay nd also she could not feel real happiness when om proposed her.om is taking drugs again n he killed his first unborn that was so shocking.. wonder what's his past ..n yeahh will you bring a girl for him too??
waiting for what will happen next..
continue soon.
chipkali 🤣

Are you serious? ?
Why the cliffhanger??...❤️ it
You have to update...and that has to be very fast...ASAP
CURIOUSLY WAITING