Two Parallel Lines_A ShivIka FF_Chapter 8 (18.11.16) Page 31

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SRKian

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Posted: 8 years ago

#131

Pre kya kardiya yaar! Do pal ruka 'Khawboon' ka karvaan aur phir chaldeye tum kaha aur hum kaha 😔 more korlam shopno dekhbo bt accident koriye oh my mata kore dila 😔 update soon!

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preity_d

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Posted: 8 years ago

#132

Originally posted by: SRKian
Pre kya kardiya yaar! Do pal ruka 'Khawboon' ka karvaan aur phir chaldeye tum kaha aur hum kaha 😔 more korlam shopno dekhbo bt accident koriye oh my mata kore dila 😔 update soon!

AniKara scene ta kemon chilo seta to bol 🤢 😛

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SRKian

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Posted: 8 years ago

#133

Originally posted by: preity_d
AniKara scene ta kemon chilo seta to bol🤢😛

sheytai toh bollam!gaan ta toh tader jonnoi 😉 mone korlam rate ghumabar timea kiss ta shopne dekbho bt

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ArhiIPKKND

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Posted: 8 years ago

#134

Interesting a love triangle...i am definitely a shivika shipper but am interested to c this intense om intertwined with them...he has turmed to drugs again...oh no...annika is hurt...oh nooo...cant wait to find out how she is...

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javeria

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Posted: 8 years ago

#135

Awesome update

Anika is in accident :-0

Update next chapter soon.

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floral

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Posted: 8 years ago

#136

amazing update dear

i loved it very much

u broke my heart omkara neh anika ko i love u bhola poor shivaay ab uska kya haal hoga

oh no anika meet with accident

want to see shivaay like a mad man who wanna save his love

i want shivika epic LS to start

i didn't get what om was saying about baby

plzzz do continue soon

and thanks for the pm dear

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---Angel---

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Posted: 8 years ago

#137

Preity this is just OUTSTANDING!!!!!!! As soon as I read on from; where, I left I got hooked to the story once again and couldn't stop reading! Within your story you have intertwined hidden emotions of the characters and your story has made me love Om as a character even more! You have made the characters so likeable and relatable making your story a hit! A character, which you have depicted perfectly in your story, is Shivaay. Under that arrogant exterior, he is just a lonely person, who worries about his brother and actually desires love. This is the Shivaay I really want to see in the show. To be honest, I think you should become the writer of Ishqbaaaz Preity because you are much better at laying out a story than the actual writers! Every chapter is a work of art- something I would never be able to create! There are no flaws in your story at all it truly is PERFECT!!!!!!!!! Update whenever you can dear!

Lots of love Angel❤️

PS. Thanks for putting up with my late comment dear🤗

And unres if I have put a RES anywhere😆

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preity_d

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Posted: 8 years ago

#138

Originally posted by: chaturchipkali
why preitu why..why did u did this ..
anikara kiss ..naheee 😭 😡
though update was very touching n heart wrenching
anika feeling as if she betrayed shivaay nd also she could not feel real happiness when om proposed her.om is taking drugs again n he killed his first unborn that was so shocking.. wonder what's his past ..n yeahh will you bring a girl for him too??
waiting for what will happen next..
continue soon.
chipkali 🤣

😉😆 Dear Chipkali, 🤣

Aage aage dekh hota hain kya, But I promise to give a happy ending to our ShivIka 🤗 things will unfold gradually. Too much is happening 😆 hain na? 😆 Om ko girl nai Girls milenge 😉

Updating in few minutes 😳

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preity_d

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Posted: 8 years ago

#139

Originally posted by: Lesy
Are you serious? ?
Why the cliffhanger??...❤️ it
You have to update...and that has to be very fast...ASAP
CURIOUSLY WAITING

Sorry dear for being late, was stuck in life. 😛 Thank u so much for liking it ! ❤️

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preity_d

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Posted: 8 years ago

#140

Originally posted by: jarir2010
Its not fair,is it?the very first kiss of her was from om
😭
And u finish by tht accident call to shivsaay 😭
Plz dear update soon.i want know ant his reaction.thanks. 👏 👏 👏

Tell me honestly who these days get their first kiss from their true love? 😉

Thank you very much for liking ! 🤗