Two Parallel Lines_A ShivIka FF_Chapter 8 (18.11.16) Page 31 - Page 11

woow...AWESOME...superb...AMAZING...
its sach a Emotional n Heart touching part...
waiting fr next part ...pls update soon...

Originally posted by: lucky_princess

Beautiful update...

Wow Anika felt stupid of asking all those questions to him..

Nd Om is the illegtimate child of Shivaay's father. Hmmm...intresting.

Shivaay taking care of him...protecting him..all were goood.

Shivaay is falling for Anika..cares a lot abt her..but is ready to scarifice anything nd everything for his bro om.

Those lines..when Shivaay said that one day Om will call him bhaiyya...zaroor. it was soo heart touching.

Superbly written.

Love Sharmi

There was nothing prominent in between them, so she felt stupid to ask him all those questions in the heat of the moment ! 😆 Shivay is falling or not dunno, but he surely feels an uncontrolled attraction around her ! 😳 Om-Shivay though being in such complex relationship loves each other ! 😃

awesome Pre👏👏 can totally c shiv actually sacrificing his life/luv if needed😭😭 my poor th😭😭

This was so good! A lot of things became clear in this. Really liking how you're building the relationship between Om and Shivay as well as Om-Anika-Shivay.

Originally posted by: ISensedYou

I am glad to read shivaays point of view...

Shivaay has definitely fallen in love with anika...i hope it clears out soon if om considers anika as a close friend or has he fallen for anika too...

i dont want om to go through a heart break😭he wont be able to take it

Shivaays pain was felt so real...having a depressed mother and now a sick brother...i hope things fall in place soon for him😊

Cant bear to see shivaay like that😳

I wish anika helps out shivaays mom and brings the family together with time...

Om feels like a lonely child😭 i hope he is able to find what he is looking for...

Loved the update🤗

All your questions will be answered in this update...😃 Thank You so much dear for loving it 🤗 I so loved your comment 😳

Originally posted by: ArhiIPKKND

Interesting insight into shivaay...sad

😳 Thanks u dear for commenting 😳

Originally posted by: chaturchipkali

nahee biloo ko mat todo pljj..biloo toota to paanika aka ladaku billi ka kya hoga socha h kvi ?? 😭

wo tu soch meko maza aata hain ladko ko todne me 😈 🤣

Originally posted by: chaturchipkali

preitu.. 🤗 (i will call u that ok na) .. it was such a beautiful update.. now i see why shi behave rude bcoj he knows that omie like ani n he wants his bro to be happy it was the last promise he made to his dad. his mom poor women could never really move on or forgive n now she is rude toward om too all that betrayal n heart breaks took a toll on her. n shiv poor him had to take responsibility from young age n now he cant follow his heart bcoj of this. n the way he wants om to call him bhaiya n hope that one day it will happen.. hope that his hope comes out true. n at last evryone be happy..
ps- beautiful update it was jaldi update krna

Bu 🤗 At last may be everyone will be happy. yes. Thank you so much for understanding the characters so well 😳

Originally posted by: jarir2010

Woderful update.
Om-annika-shivaay,all of them like each other mutually.but the equation is evry complicated.shivaay's responcibility towards om,dream to win over him,om's liking towards annika,aninika's liking towards om and annika-shivaay's sexual tension or attraction.
What will come next?
Update soon.
👏

Yes, I agree 100%. Equation is very complication between them. Keep reading, All I can promise is a intense and passionate ShiVika and Anikara 😳

Originally posted by: Ketaki19

haww om ko anika pasand aane lagi hain par as what??? ohh bechara shivaay om ke mh se bhai sunane ke liye bechain hain 😭 i felt his pain 😭 maa ki bhi responsibility hain uske upar aur om ki bhi aur om ke liye wo apne khudke emos ko rok raha hain towards anika 😭 yar its very painful 😭 in bhaionke beechme bechari anika fas gayi hain ab lekin last me shivika honge na?

End me Of Course ShivIka honge but wo love stories hi kya jisme koe twists turns n pain na ho... Don't lose hope, ShivIka will start soon ! 🤗 Thanks yaar !