Two Parallel Lines_A ShivIka FF_Chapter 8 (18.11.16) Page 31 - Page 9

Originally posted by: twerping

heehee! I was so stalking your thread for the update!

This was wonderful! I am liking the way you are taking things forward. Anika and Om... 😳 love the bond Om feels towards her... also his past is getting clearer...

And really Shivay! What were you doing in her bedroom at that time of night?!! I really want to know!

And yes, carrying her back to the resort... ☺️

Loving this!

Please update soon!!!

Ri 🤗 did I tell u that I always look forward to ur comment? Love ur feedback, Thanks 😳

Originally posted by: SRKian

guess my sunday aint as boring as i thought it 'll b😉

so O is already going lattu over her😳 nd his past,nw dat was painful😭

nd dem my baggad billa😈 shivaay baby u'll surely b der 4 her😉

grt update Pre👏👏 update da next chap asap,waiting 4 some romance😉

😆 Yep, I was looking for u guys in the AT n u were here 👏

Originally posted by: lucky_princess

Well u noe what i realized it today that it was ur story..priety its urs! Nd i noticed it today...happy late realisation to me!!

Fine the update was brilliant..i was waiting for the next update..so Om is finally opening up to her..nd Om feels cared.. he feels LOVED!..

Nd Anika likes Shivaay..nd What was Shivaay doin in her room at that hour?? Nd the way he carried her off was awesome...

Continue soon..

So i hope these r all ur own ideas...😆Nothing frm Pooja rit??😆.. Agar ho na..toh pls..usko uski credit de dena...kyunki mein iss sab ki witness bani thi..agar nahi diya...toh u r finished😆

Love Sharmi

Nai nai, abhi tak waisa GM ni aaya 🤣 Thank God that u guys liked him feking her over shoulder and caring like a basta 🤣 I was so afraid 😲 Thank u so much for always commenting, which inspires me a lot! 🤗

Originally posted by: itzanya32

it was awsm...

anika and om together hanging out...and shivaay supporting them...it was just lovely..

and anika had the urge to ruffle shivaay hair..soo cute...

and at last there argument and shivaay accepting that he care for her...

just loved it...

do continue soon..

Thanks Anya 🤗 for pointing out the tiny details, it proves u really liked the update. It inspires me 😳

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

awesome...

Thank you 😳

Originally posted by: jarir2010

Nice update.
Plz continue soon.
👏

Thanks 😊

Originally posted by: chaturchipkali

awesome work preity. loved it. so om is falling for anika n other side maybe ani like shivaay n shivaay cares for her .kisi na kisi ka to dil tootega . continue soon dear

Bulbul 🤗 Dil nai tootega utna, dekh lio. Thanks re for taking the effort of commenting

Originally posted by: Javeria3991

Awesome

Thanks 😳

Originally posted by: 3dancelover

I read all of it in one go and I love it!

So many different emotions and a love triangleish thing is going on right!

Om likes Anika, Anika is starting to feel for Shivaay, and Shivaay has to of course sort out of his feelings

Looking out for the next, update soon!

Thanks dear for loving it ! Thank u for ur effort to comment, really appreciate 🤗

Originally posted by: Frozen.K

🤣 Are you doubting my love for you Preity...dil tod diya tu ne aaj mera 🤣

Nahi re tere pe to meko billoo tod bharosa hain 🤣