FF''Wounded''.....part 4 updated 29/10/16 - Page 3

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Vishakha..

amazing...im amazed...
update soon...next one


thanks a lot
thanks i am overwhelmed
surely
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Posted: 8 years ago
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...Part 3...


Rudr lying on sofa with his head in Dadi's lap,listening their childhood stories from her


Rudra excitedly "Dadi tell more about me"


Dadi paused for a while smiled back at Rudr and starts again "Hmm you were even naughtier and from every worm of our lawn to every stary dog on road was your pet your guarding angels were very strong,they some how always use to manage how to save you from the wrath of your parents...

Om smiled while Dadi exchange a look with him

Dadi continues;"but you were so picky and choosy about your food,it use to be a struggle making you eat ,specially when you use to get ill,it was only Shivaye who was able to handle you...once he went for a school trip ,for the first day you behaved normal,but at night when you didn't find him in his room,you stopped doing everything,you stopped eating,you stopped talking and you just shelled yourself in short you were kind of still..."

Rudr smiled hearing this ,Dadi paused and Om continued""he even didn't make me realize that he is not well the very next day we found him in Shivaye's room with his picture and a very high fever ...Doyou remember Dadi he refused to have his medicines ,food or water even before Shivaye's return...we tried our level best but all our efforts went down the drain..."


Rudr anxiously then what happened,Dadi added "then Shivaye came back,you showed your tantrums... then he himself made your favourite noodles and despite off your fever he made you eat it... with lots of promises choclates and his favourite toy car and unlimited set of conditions on every bite of food you set us free."

Om added"he is still the same dadi,he is the blackmailer who still puts conditions before every doseage ...in the morning he blackmailed Shivaye ,and then he made me fall in his trap and its still not ended"

Rudr "O you need not to get jealous ,you should have used your head for something else instead of just growing these long hair,i was smart since birth ,i learnt to use the situation to my advantage...logic haan"


O smiles at him and slaps him lightly saying "hmmm super balackmailer dumbell oberoi"


Rudr gets irritated "don't call me that ,my biceps have shrunk i havenot done gym for 2 whole days "

Om gets conscious getting Rudr's frustration as he is a gym freak"its ok Rudr its like that cheat week instead of cheat day,enjoy it you will be all fine ...and to the plus side you can get a lot of things of ur choice done by us in this time "



Rudra gives a mischeivious smile as if he has some plan in his mind... then he asks for Shivaye ""O where is Bhaiya he promised me he will be back on time"

Om replies "he is just finishing his work,he will be back soon"






Om tried a lot to keep Rudra busy and understand the gravity of situation but getting his irriatation and restlessness,Om failed to make him understad...Its 9 30 pm,Rudra has refused to eat,sleep or do anything before Shivaye's return,he is acting all stubborn and irritated ,not even listening to O...,it's just the second day after that attack,Rudr clearly showed signs of frustration he is a restless soul who cannot stand still for a moment and now he has to slow down every now and then because of the weakness and exhaution his body was facing together with a restricted hand movement with continous throbbing pain...


Above all Rudr was facing an unknown fear and anxiety,...with every passing minute he was getting worried for Shivaye...Om and Shivaye were the people who didn't need Rudra's words to know about his pain,they knew him better then he knew himself,but still there was a part of Rudr who always tried to keep himself all happy and a stress buster for his brothers but deep inside he had his secrets...for Rudr his world revolves around his brothers,he was just unable to see them in trouble of any sort,even a minor thought of seing them hurt use to make him unconfortable,those 8 hours for which he saw Shivaye unconcious lying on bed were the worst of all for Rudr...and now after that attack during press confference he was disturbed,he was in a state of fear,he didn't want Om or Shivaye to stay away from him for long...In this whole day Rudr called or msged Shivaye every 30 minutes but now for the last 2 hours Shivaye's phone was unreachable,and Rudr's stress and fear both were growing ...he didn't want to trouble Om by showing his agony and anxiety to him but he was unable to stop himself from doing so...he was pacing around in his room ...


Its 11 at night Rudr is all irritated and his body has started showing the signs of pain and tiredness as he refused to take his medicines before Shivaye's return ,he asks Om ""have you tried his cell,is it still unreachable??"


Om tried to make Rudr understand ""Rudr you need to calm down,stop moving around...just don't get stressed,Shivaye promised you he will be back soon ...there must be some important work otherwise you know he always keeps his promise"


Rudr angrily "i knew it that Lady Baba will snatch him,how can he be so late ..i told him i want him at night on dinner ...how the hell can he miss that


Om is just trying to keep his cool "I have tried Rudr its still not getting connected...i believe he must have broke it again...if you don't want .."Rudr..."I told you that i will wait for Bhaiya ,he promised me that he will have dinner with me...i will wait" Rudr just rubbed his head as if its hurting


Om..."stop behaving like a kid Rudr,its clearly visible you are in pain,just stop being so stubborn and do what i have asked you "

Rudr didn't reply back but Om knew it that he is in a bigger trouble now as a silent Rudr is more difficult to handle than that of a talking ,silly irritated One

An early update I guess,I wrote this one the very next day first wanted to edit some parts but now updating all of it without editing so bear with it and do let me know whether you liked it or not

Edited by an_k - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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thanks dear u always manage to comment :) by the way ur siggies are awesome Aneri ishana look awesome
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Posted: 8 years ago
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it ws fantastic...evn i am also scared nd restless fr shivay...
i wsh u update soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: ehmmbhluvr

it ws fantastic...evn i am also scared nd restless fr shivay...
i wsh u update soon...


Thanks dear...hmm Rudy is scared too
i will try :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I always love to read anything abt this lovely trio. Ans Eapecially if it is emotional one then it's great for me.
This shot was gud one but nothing much was there except childhood memories. So i m eagrly waiting for next and definatly a long update. Plzzz

I hve a request from u as well. I really want to see Rudra reaction towarda OM. If he gets hurts by anymeans. If u show this in any other FF or in this FF as well. Then it will be great. Thank you for the wonderful work dear. U r doing great job. Keep it up n stay happy Always.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: neeme

I always love to read anything abt this lovely trio. Ans Eapecially if it is emotional one then it's great for me.

This shot was gud one but nothing much was there except childhood memories. So i m eagrly waiting for next and definatly a long update. Plzzz

I hve a request from u as well. I really want to see Rudra reaction towarda OM. If he gets hurts by anymeans. If u show this in any other FF or in this FF as well. Then it will be great. Thank you for the wonderful work dear. U r doing great job. Keep it up n stay happy Always.


awww same here...

thanks i tried to keep it light ...haha i will try to upload a long one ...

hmmm,nice thought i will try to think about something in that situation probably in mid of OCt i will try to incorporate it in it or something else...
Thanks a lot for taking time to read it and even more thankful to you for commenting ...thanks again have a great great time :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
#30
when will you update?
plz update soon

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