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Posted: 9 years ago
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Arrey yaar itni choti update..humph...
Jaldi update karo..bohot hi thrilling hai..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: VidyutKiDeewani

credits: the credit for the superb ideas goes to "kamalapushpa" who helped me with her ideas to write this story. thank u dearie.. 😳

Ch2.

''Jaise humne socha thha waisa hi hua.. Annika aur Shivaay ke rishtey mein itna zeher ghol diya hai ki ab toh dono ekdusre ko dekhne se bhi gussa hojate hai..''Svetlana said with a wicked smile.

''Haan.. Mujhe toh bohut zyada maza araha hai Annika aur Shivaay ko aise tootte dekh. Shivaay ne mujhe thhukraya thha na uss do takey ki larki Annika keliye.. Huh!! Ab toh humne Annika se uske honewala baccha bhi chheen liya.. Dekha thha na ki kaise Shivaay ne Annika ko dhakka deke ghar se nikala thha aur uss dhakke ki wajah se Annika ka miscarriage hogaya aur humne saara dosh Shivaay pe dal diya.. Shivaay mera itna baat manne laga thha ki usne aisa bhi kehdia thha ki Annika se shaadi karna uski zindagi ki sabse bari bhul thhi.. Maine toh ek patthar se do nishaane lagaye.. Ek Annika ke saamne Shivaay ko gunehgaar saabit karna aur dusri baat Shivaay ko meri orh khichna aur usse Annika kr khilaaf bharkana..'' Tia grinned evily.

''Tumne jo chakkar chalaya thha na Siddharth Vikram Rana aur Annika ke jhoote extra marrital affair ka.. Woh sabse accha thha.. Kaise Shivaay ne Annika ko ghar se nikal phheka thha..'' Svetlana telling Pinky.

''Woh toh kuch bhi nahi hai... Mujhe toh sirf property chahiye woh bhi fifty fifty..'' Pinky replied.

''Meri pyaari Pinky parjaayi.. Aap shayad bhul gayi hai ki meri mehnat ki wajah se aap bach gayi ghar se nikale jaane se warna uss diamond ki chori aur Shivaay ko maut ke ghaat utaarne ki idea toh aapka hi thha.. hai na?'' Roop replied.

''Aur Annika ke bacche ko maarne ki idea bhi toh mera hi thha na?'' Pinky replied evilly.

Unknown to all,someone heard the whole conversation and recorded every single bit. That person was shell shocked to know about these plannings.

Next day:

Annika went to a nearby Mandir to calm her nerves down since she felt disturbed due to yesterday's incident..

She entered the Mandir and gave her Pooja thhal to Panditji. She closed her eyes and joined her hands to pray for inner peace. Unknown to her,Shivaay also came and stood beside her and closed his eyes and prayed.

As the Panditji turned to give Annika the Pooja Thhal,he blessed Annika and Shivaay,both of who were unaware of each other's presence.

''Akhand Saubhagyavati Bhava.. Doodho nahao puto phalo..''

This broke their reverie. Annika noticed Shivaay who was standing by her side and was looking at her pale face.

''Maafi chahti hu Panditji par ab shayad yeh aashirwaad mere kaam na aaye..'' Annika turned to leave the Mandir.

Shivaay ran after her to convince to believe his words. He caught her arm and pulled her to himself.

''Chhoro mujhe Shivaay.. mujhe dard horaha hai..'' Annika pleaded.

''Tumhara haath chhorne keliye tumse shaadi nahi ki hai..'' Shivaay replied softly,guilt evident in his eyes.

''Oh really!! Shayad tumhe yaad na ho par mujhe bohut acche tareeke se yaad hai ki tumne hi mujhe ghar se bahar nikala thha aur mere bacche ki maut ki zimmedaar sirf tum hi ho.. Kyun Shivaay? Maine bohut koshisho ke baad apni zindagi mein move on kar rahi hu.. andar se abhi bhi main bikhri huyi hu.. main tumse haath jorhti hu.. mujhe aur mat torho ki aage jaake main khudko samett hi na pau..'' Annika replied with tears in her eyes and left that place leaving Shivaay in that place,alone..

A person was keeping a watch at Shivaay and Annika.. As that person saw Annika leaving,he called Svetlana and said, "Madamji,indono ke beech bohut faasle agaye hai.. Seedhe mooh baat tak karna nahi chahte hai.. Jaani dushman ban gaye hai dono.."

Svetlana was happy hearing about Shivaay and Annika turning enemies. It brought a big amount of relief in her heart.

Precap: Turth starts to unfold..

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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
Waiting to know what happens next
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
Great job 👏 wait for part 3... 4 villains for this two love bird.
Waiting for the truth to be unfold.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
First of all... Thanks for the PM...
And the update was amazing... I'm glad that Anika is angry... Coz as I said, I hate it when women sacrifice their self-respect...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
fantastic update
i want anika not to surrender and melt so fast
shivaay needs left right centre beatings 😡😡
tubelight fellow 😭
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Posted: 8 years ago
#37
ch3.

Night:

Shivaay finished with his day's work in office and was about to leave when his phone rang. It was from an unknown number. He immediately picked it up.

"Hello.."

"Hello.. Mujhe pata hai ki aapko kya chahiye?"

"How dare you? Shivaay Singh Oberoi ko bekar cheezo pe time waste karne ki aadat nahi hai." Shivaay barked and was about to cut the call..

"Mere paas saboot hai jo tumhe begunah sabit karega.. Agar aapko apni begunahi sabit karni hai toh aake le jaiye.."

Shivaay was shocked to hear about this. He immediately recovered from the shock and replied, "Main kaise maanlu ki tum sach kehrahe ho?"

"Main aapke bohut kareeb hu aur aapka shubhchintak bhi hu... Oshiwara Joggers Park aaiye aur le jaiye.." saying this the caller cut the call.

Shivaay immediately rushed towards his car and zoomed off towards Oshiwara Joggers Park.

Oshiwara Joggers Park:

Shivaay stepped inside the Park and started to look for the person who called him. He was feeling nervous as well as happy because he will prove himself innocent.

He felt someone's hand on his shoulder.He turned around to see a man who was wearing a long black hooded jacket and a sunglass.

"Kaun ho tum? Aur tum mujhe jaante kaise ho?" Shivaay asked.

"Abhi aapko mere pehchaan se koi talluk nahi hona chahiye. Abhi aapko apke begunahi ke saboot se waasta hona chahiye... Yeh lijiye.." The person hands Shivaay a chip.

Shivaay had his doubts but his heart was telling him to check. He inserted the chip inside his Tab and played the video which shocked him out of his wits. He just couldnt believe what he just saw. Anger,frustration,betrayal and sadness clouded his mind. He clenched his fists in anger and closed his eyes to let the revelation sink in.

"Ho kaun tum? Aur yeh sab kaise mila?" Shivaay asked the person.

The person slowly removed his glasses and hood to reveal his identity.

"Khanna.. tum?" Shivaay was shocked to see Khanna,his bodyguard.

"Haan sir.. main.." Khanna replied.

"Tumhe yeh sab??? I mean???" A baffled Shivaay asked.

"Mujhe toh pehle se Svetlana,Roop madam aur Tia madam pe shaq thha,jabse aapke upar attempt to murder attack hua thha.. Par,jab Pinky madam ko iss saari saazish ke barabar haqdar paya toh mujhe bohut shock laga.. isiliye,maine usdin yeh saare incidents record kiye taaki aapko dikha saku par mujhe pata thha ki Svetlana aur Roop madam ne aapke piche aur Annika madam ke piche jasoos lagaye rakkhe hai.. Isliye,maine bhi apne kuch sources ko Svetlana aur Roop Madam ke jasooso ke piche lagwa diya hai.. Aur ghar mein maine ek aise electrical glitch karwaya hai taaki mere kuch aadmi electrician ke roop mein aakar security cameras install karsake. Aise tareeke se install karwaye hai taaki kisiko bhanak bhi na pare aur unn saare cameras ko maine aapke mobile se direct connection karwaya hai.." Khanna replied.

Shivaay was awestruck seeing Khanna's responsibility and honesty towards him and the family.

"Tumne aisa kyun kiya,Khanna? Tumhari jaan pe kabhi bhi bann aati?" Shivaay asked.

"Ek baat bolu Sir. Aap jaise sabko dikhate hai,asal mein aap waise nahi hai.. Mera bhi family hai,Sir. Main bhi apne bacche ko aap jaisa successful businessman banana chahta hu.. Agar main apne bacche keliye kuch accha example na set karu,woh toh be-imaandar banega aur kuch bhi accha nahi sikhega.. Aur,waise bhi aapne mere bacche keliye jo kiya uske badle mein agar main aapke aur Madam ke beech ki dooriyaan mitane keliye yeh karu,toh mujhe bohu khushi hogi.. Aapne mere bacche keliye apna khoon donate karne ke baad,mujhe laga ki mujhe Bhagwaan ek aisa mauka de taaki main yeh ehsaan chuka pau.. Aur uparwale ne meri sunli.." Khanna replied.

Shivaay immediately hugged Khanna and replied, "I am really thankful,Khanna.. Main kabhi nahi bhulunga tumhara yeh ehsaan.."

"Thanks bolke sharminda mat kariye mujhe Sir. Ab main chalta hu,Sir. All the best." Khanna replied and went away wearing that hood and jacket again.

Shivaay carefully kept the chip in his shirt pocket and zoomed towards their home,planning for something big.

"Ab tumsab ka khel khatam... Ulti ginti ginna shuru kardo.. Ab bas kal raat ka intezaar hai..." Shivaay thought and smirked..

Precap: Big Revelation.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#38
Love the update!
Waiting for next part
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Posted: 8 years ago
#39
wow it was shivay bodyguard khanna who heard everything & also record the truth 🤗
khanna really risk his life for anshi 🤗
shivay was anger betrayal after the revelation 😭
now its time shivay will show those evil monsters their right place 👍🏼
continue plz
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Posted: 8 years ago
#40
I am happy ki iss story mein security bohot achchi hain😆 nahi toh serial mein aise security kahan milte hai...
oohh so the person who heard everything is khanna...
I wonder uss chip mein aur kya kya hai...is it only the part that u showed us?😛
Next update jaldi likhna😡
Loved it❤️
Thanks for the pm
Edited by kamalapushpa - 8 years ago

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