AnShi SS: Mar Jaayen (ch3-pg6) - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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good start
and interesting too
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I'm feeling soo Bad for annika yaar
Plz don't show Anika as some 'Abla Nari' and forgives Shivay easily, I want him to Feel All the Pain Annika has Gone Through.
Just by doing Good Things n showing Her That he's by her side, won't Make up for the Loss.
I want Shivay to Suffer. It's high time he has to Realise that now Money n all Won't Bring Annika back in her life.
Great Start, update soon and thanks for the Pm
Love Kriti:)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Great start of the SS 👏 brilliantly written waiting for part two hopefully will lots of anshi romance on the way as shivaay plan to convince anika.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...tejaswi...

huh i hate shivaay for this

ok even though it was just a story
i really felt bad
anika man you became an expert writer yaar
this your ss number 10 or 11?😆


15th one i guess..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Tune Shivaay ko itna neeche gira diya...cant take it..koi baat nahi ab jaldise next part update karo..
Poor Anika
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: lucky_princess

Tune Shivaay ko itna neeche gira diya...cant take it..koi baat nahi ab jaldise next part update karo..

Poor Anika


sabr rakho balikey.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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First of all Thanks for the PM sweetie.
I think Shivaay ka redemption should be very big for for me trust is super important. Also Anika should make Shivaay beg for her forgiveness.
I like how you interconnect your SS's with songs.
Update Soon. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
Disgusted with this Shivaay.
Make Anika punish him harder.
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Omg ! Just read this... Feeling really bad for Anika... Shivay has crossed his limits yar, it will take more than just a 'sorry' or some regret to forgive him.. He has to repent... Loved the way you showed ishana's concern, so proud of that girl though.. Loved it... PM me ! Update jaldi ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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credits: the credit for the superb ideas goes to "kamalapushpa" who helped me with her ideas to write this story. thank u dearie.. 😳

Ch2.

''Jaise humne socha thha waisa hi hua.. Annika aur Shivaay ke rishtey mein itna zeher ghol diya hai ki ab toh dono ekdusre ko dekhne se bhi gussa hojate hai..''Svetlana said with a wicked smile.

''Haan.. Mujhe toh bohut zyada maza araha hai Annika aur Shivaay ko aise tootte dekh. Shivaay ne mujhe thhukraya thha na uss do takey ki larki Annika keliye.. Huh!! Ab toh humne Annika se uske honewala baccha bhi chheen liya.. Dekha thha na ki kaise Shivaay ne Annika ko dhakka deke ghar se nikala thha aur uss dhakke ki wajah se Annika ka miscarriage hogaya aur humne saara dosh Shivaay pe dal diya.. Shivaay mera itna baat manne laga thha ki usne aisa bhi kehdia thha ki Annika se shaadi karna uski zindagi ki sabse bari bhul thhi.. Maine toh ek patthar se do nishaane lagaye.. Ek Annika ke saamne Shivaay ko gunehgaar saabit karna aur dusri baat Shivaay ko meri orh khichna aur usse Annika kr khilaaf bharkana..'' Tia grinned evily.

''Tumne jo chakkar chalaya thha na Siddharth Vikram Rana aur Annika ke jhoote extra marrital affair ka.. Woh sabse accha thha.. Kaise Shivaay ne Annika ko ghar se nikal phheka thha..'' Svetlana telling Pinky.

''Woh toh kuch bhi nahi hai... Mujhe toh sirf property chahiye woh bhi fifty fifty..'' Pinky replied.

''Meri pyaari Pinky parjaayi.. Aap shayad bhul gayi hai ki meri mehnat ki wajah se aap bach gayi ghar se nikale jaane se warna uss diamond ki chori aur Shivaay ko maut ke ghaat utaarne ki idea toh aapka hi thha.. hai na?'' Roop replied.

''Aur Annika ke bacche ko maarne ki idea bhi toh mera hi thha na?'' Pinky replied evilly.

Unknown to all,someone heard the whole conversation and recorded every single bit. That person was shell shocked to know about these plannings.

Next day:

Annika went to a nearby Mandir to calm her nerves down since she felt disturbed due to yesterday's incident..

She entered the Mandir and gave her Pooja thhal to Panditji. She closed her eyes and joined her hands to pray for inner peace. Unknown to her,Shivaay also came and stood beside her and closed his eyes and prayed.

As the Panditji turned to give Annika the Pooja Thhal,he blessed Annika and Shivaay,both of who were unaware of each other's presence.

''Akhand Saubhagyavati Bhava.. Doodho nahao puto phalo..''

This broke their reverie. Annika noticed Shivaay who was standing by her side and was looking at her pale face.

''Maafi chahti hu Panditji par ab shayad yeh aashirwaad mere kaam na aaye..'' Annika turned to leave the Mandir.

Shivaay ran after her to convince to believe his words. He caught her arm and pulled her to himself.

''Chhoro mujhe Shivaay.. mujhe dard horaha hai..'' Annika pleaded.

''Tumhara haath chhorne keliye tumse shaadi nahi ki hai..'' Shivaay replied softly,guilt evident in his eyes.

''Oh really!! Shayad tumhe yaad na ho par mujhe bohut acche tareeke se yaad hai ki tumne hi mujhe ghar se bahar nikala thha aur mere bacche ki maut ki zimmedaar sirf tum hi ho.. Kyun Shivaay? Maine bohut koshisho ke baad apni zindagi mein move on kar rahi hu.. andar se abhi bhi main bikhri huyi hu.. main tumse haath jorhti hu.. mujhe aur mat torho ki aage jaake main khudko samett hi na pau..'' Annika replied with tears in her eyes and left that place leaving Shivaay in that place,alone..

A person was keeping a watch at Shivaay and Annika.. As that person saw Annika leaving,he called Svetlana and said, "Madamji,indono ke beech bohut faasle agaye hai.. Seedhe mooh baat tak karna nahi chahte hai.. Jaani dushman ban gaye hai dono.."

Svetlana was happy hearing about Shivaay and Annika turning enemies. It brought a big amount of relief in her heart.

Precap: Turth starts to unfold..
Edited by VidyutKiDeewani - 9 years ago

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