RuMya OS: Guilt. *complete*

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Posted: 9 years ago
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She opened her eyes slowly and tried to register where she was. That is when she felt that she was in the hospital and was connected to an IV drip. She yelped as she felt a sharp,excruciating pain on her left fore arm as she tried to get up. She was about to fall back but she felt someone holding her protectively.

''Bade bhaiyaa.. Aap?'' She asked

''Kaisi feel kar raho tum?''

''Chhaan..'' She replied.

''Matlab?'' He asked confusingly.

''Main thik hu abhi..Meri fikr mat kijiye.'' She replied with a smile.

''Ek baat batau aapko? Aapke upar yeh worry lines acchi nahi lagti.. Yeh sab ain apne bhaiya ko kehti thhi.. Aap khush raha kijiye.. Sab problems ekdin solve hojayegi..'' She said.

''Thank you,Saumya. Aaj jo tumne mere bhai keliye kiya woh main zindagi bhar nahi bhulunga.. Tum bohut acchi ho.. Tumhari Maa ne tumhe bohut acchi values di hai.. Main tumhari shukr guzar kaise karu?'' Shivaay asked.

Just then,Omkara and Rudra entered with Tej,Jahnvi and Daadi. She greeted the elders with respect and talked with them as they asked her about her health. They also thanked her for saving Rudra. The elders' left.

''Kya main tumhe Angel bula sakta hu?'' Om asked with a smile.

''Sure,majhle bhaiya..'' Saumya replied with a smile.

''Better. I hope tum better feel kar rahi ho..'' Om asked.

''Accha mehsoos kar rahi hu.'' Saumya replied.

''Umm... wohh... Are you ok?'' Rudra asked finally.

''Haan... main thik hu..'' Saumya replied.

''Aakhir tumne aisa kyun kiya? Agar tumhe kuch hojata toh?'' Rudra asked finally after fighting with his conscience.

''Hota wahi jo uparwala chahta hai.. Agar uparwale ki marzi hoti toh aaj meri maut hojati.. Agar aisa na karti,toh mere dil mein ek bojh rehjata ki maine kisi ki jaan nahi bachayi..Insaaniyat ke naate kiya maine yeh sab.. Main toh tumhari dost bhi nahi aur dushman bhi nahi... Dosti aur dushmani toh dur ki baat hai... Tum toh mujhe pehchante bhi nahi,hai na? Toh tumhe mujhe kuch bhi puchne ka haq nahi hai,Rudra.. Main toh tumhare liye parathe khane wali chalti phirti moti larki hu.. hai na,Rudra?'' Saumya replied sadly.

Omkara and Shivaay looked at Rudra accusingly while Rudra hung his head down in guilt. For the first time in his life,Rudra felt guilty about his wrongdoings.

''Insaan chaahe jaisa bhi dikhta ho,humesha uske dil ki khubsurti dekhni chahiye naki bahari khubsurti.. Jo insaan aisi soch rakhta hai na,woh insaan ho hi nahi sakta.. (silently wipes her tears) Main chalti hu.. Mom mera intezaar kar rahi hongi.. Bye Bade Bhaiyaa and Majhle Bhaiya.. Aap dono se milke bohut khushi huyi mujhe.. Bye.. Take Care..'' Saumya replied and went away while Rudra looked at her leaving form.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Rudra must have felt guilt with a pang!
This was short and sweet. 😃
Rudra needs to learn; everything that shines ain't gold.
And Soumya have taught him that in the most perfect way anyone ever could.

Edited by Fireflake - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awww... Rona aa gya muje... Bechare Somya !!
But.. This OS was truly very beautiful ! Sacchi kash esa show me bhi Ho jaye...
Loved it...
If possible then convert it into a TS .. I would love to see how Rudra repents...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Soumya ka jaadu jald hi chalega, Dumbbell Oberoi par! 😆

Cute OS :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome os
it was emotional
go on saumya u rocked it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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so cute
Rudra needs this reality check
I hope serial mein bhi use aise hi mile
well done n awesome
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This is such a lovely os! Go Soumya! I can't wait to read more of your work!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Aww, this was so cute, but so sad as well.
Omkara wants to call her an angel😳
And Soumu wants Shiv to get rid of his worry lines😃😆

Rudr must have felt terrible and guilt-strikken, but I guess he deserves it.
I'm sure, he'll make up for all his wrong, tho.
Full faith in Ruddy boy😳
Edited by -Panda- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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That was sweet...
Rudras needs to learn things...
I hope sowmya changes him for his betterment

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