AnShi SS: Kuch toh hai.. Tere Mere Darmiyaan (teaser for ch6-pg8 - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
#11
i love all your works so much ...you are an awesome writer ...this one is very nice and twist n suspense waala ...waiting for next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12
Amazingly written Dii

I've become a fan of your stories

And shivaye his anger always blinds him & he forgets to think logically

He was behaving so harshly with her

I seriously want Anika to kick him

Update soon

Pretty please

I can't wait for long
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Posted: 9 years ago
#13
Oh my God shivaay slapped anika
Can't wait to read what happens next
Update soon and do pm me :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
ch2.

Annika had to stay strong for Saahil as he was her only family.Neither she wanted to see Shivaay nor she wanted to keep in touch with him.He has always hurt her in every possible way but she never took it to her heart,but yesterday was a limit..

Her thoughts broke by the shrill sound of her phone.It was Priyanka's call. She had to attend otherwise her best friend will be angry..

''Kaisi ho Priya?''

''Main Pinku ki Daadi bolrahi hu. Kaisi hai meri bacchi?'' Daadi asked.

''Pairi Pauna Daadi. Kaisi hai aap aur kaise yaad kiya?'' Annika asked.

''Main acchi hu puttar.. Sun.. Tu aur Saahil aaj Oberoi House aajana.. Aaj Pinku ki sangeet hai.. Koi par war nahi chalega.. Saahil puttar ko leke aana.. Bara hi changa mejaz ka munda hai.. Aana thik hai.. Main tera aur Saahil ka intezaar karungi..'' Daadi replied.

''Ji Daadi.. Pairi Pauna..'' Annika greeted and cut the call.

Evening: Oberoi House.

Oberoi House was buzzing with guests and the house looked like a decked up newly wedded bride.Shivaay was getting ready while Omkara and Rudra entered inside Shivaay's room. Omkara observed that Shivaay was lost in somewhere. Omkara asked but he nodded in a No and left. Omkara knows that something is fishy for sure.

Later on,Annika and Saahil entered Oberoi Mansion and was welcomed by Daadi,Omkara,Rudra and Priyanka. Priyanka came running towards Annika and hugged her tightly and thanked her for coming with Saahil.

Saahil came inside the Oberoi Mansion for the first time. He was looking at each and every nook and corner carefully. He smiled.

''Kya baat hai Di? Aap toh bohut khubsurat lagrahi hai. Haaye,aap agar single hoti toh ab tak toh aapko main apna bana leta..'' Rudra replied cheesily.

''Behen bhi bulate aur mujhe taarh rahe ho? Kya baat hai janab?Aaj tumhari larkiyon ki fauj kahaan hai?'' Annika asked playfully.

Omkara tapped Annika's shoulder and asked her to turn her head towards Saahil who was surrounded by so many girls. Annika was stumped to see this. Rudra's mouth went open and eyes wide seeing the scene infront of him. Om was laughing at Rudra's condition. (imagine that crazy laughter bg music which plays behind Rudra).

''Yeh Saahil ki umar kitni hogi Annika?'' Omkara asked with curiosity.

''Around 10 years..kyun?'' Annika askee confused.

''Kyunki,isske toh female fan followers Rudra se bhi kai guna zyada hai. Kyun Rudra? Tujhe takkar dene wala duniya mein padhar chuka hai..'' Omkara pulled Rudra's legs.

Rudra made a cute pout and said,faking an anger, ''aap log na bohut burey ho.. ekdum mean.. huh!! main baat nahi karunga kisise..''

''dramebaaz..'' Omkara muttered.

''aww mera baccha.. aise pout mat kar warna tere chehre pe wrinkles aajayenge and tere face packs koi kaam nahi karegi..'' Annika also teased him..

Rudra smiled but then understood the whole matter.. (imagine that "ulu le ule ulule ule'' bg music)

Annika and Omkara hi-fived and hugged Rudra..

''Annika,tum aaj bohu sundar lagrahi ho iss lehenge mein colour combination aur the cuts look really pretty on you.. kahan se li hai?'' Priyanka asked.

''Tum toh ameer ghar ki beti ho.. tumhe isse bhi acchi colour combination aur behtar cuts ki lehenge milenge bare bare shopping mall mein...Yeh toh meri Maa ki aakhri nishaani hai,just halka sa modify kiya hai.." Annika replied.

"Wow.. Tabse leke aaj tak Aunty ki kapre sambhalke rakkhe hai tune. tu hai hi samajdar aur zimmedaar... waise,Shivaay bhaiya se mili tu?" Priyanka.

Shivaay's name made her body shiver.Sweat beads formed on her forehead.She felt hurt and heartbroken.

"Baad mein milungi.chal ab teri performance ki baari hai.." Annika replied and toon Priyanka on the stage. Priyanka danced on Kar Gayi Chull and was followed by her to be husband and Rudra and Omkara. She was applauded for her performance. Rudra later on danced on Aadat se Majboor and Omkara danced on Kukkad Kamaal Da..

Annika was enjoyong the perfomances with Saahil when Shivaay stood beside her and she didnt even notice it. Shivaay saw that Annika came and wanted to sort out differences with his lady love,Annika.

''Ab next song pe dance karne arahi hai Ms.Annika.. Ms.Annika please come on stage and choose your song on which you will dance."

"Annika ja na nachne.. Mera bohut mann kar raha hai to see you dance,please please.." Priyanka made the puppy eyes.

''Okay okkay main dance karungi.."Annika replied with a smile and chose her song.

As she got up on the stage,Priyanka and Daadi clapped while Rudra and Omkara whistled and hooted for her. She was embarrased by that gesture of Omkara and Rudra.

Suddenly,she saw that Shivaay was looking at her with a smile.She felt good but at the same the hurt and that slap incident took over her mind. Tears fell from her eyes. Shivaay could see that hurt in her eyea due to him.He regretted the fact and wants to apologise to her.

''Nazar jo teri laagi,
main deewani hogayi,
mashhoor meri ishhq ki kahaani hogayi,
jo jag ne na maani,
toh maine bhi thhani,
kahaan thi main dekho kahaan chali aayi,
kehte hai yeh deewani mastaani hogayi..."

She dances and twirls around while the music is going on. Priyanka,Daadi,Omkara and Rudra felt the pain through the way her eyes were expressing.

''Zakhm aisa tune lagaya,
deewani deewani deewani,deewani hogayi (she remembers how Shivaay slapped her and tried to force her to blurt out the chip truth)

Marham aisa tune lagaya,
ruhaani ruhaani ruhaani,ruhaani ho gayi,
pehchaan mere ishhq ki ab toh,
pehchaan mere ishhq ki ab toh,
rawaani rawaani rawaani,rawaani hogayi,
hooo..
mashhoor mere ishhq ki kahaani hogayi,
kehte hai yeh deewani mastaani hogayi,
deewani ha deewani,deewani hogayi..''

She dances expressing her pain through her dance movements.

She is twirling as the background music plays:

"sab noor noor sa bikhra hai,
ek tu hi khayalo mein utra hai,
bas jhoom jhoom jhoom jata hai dil,
tu mastaani hai,
tu deewani hai,
pakeezah hasti hai teri,
tu noorani hai,
sab noor noor sa bikhra hai,
ek tu hi khayalo mein utra hai.."

As the flute plays its last note,she twirls for the final time and falls down unconscious.

Precap: Expect the unexpected.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15
wow ...its awesome ...precap : expect the unexpected ...so Mai khuskhabri expect karlun? 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
Awesome update diii
Anika's pain was so welly described
And the song suited the situation so welly
Expect the unexpected
Ab aisa kya expect krey hum
Didu kahi koi khushkhabri toh nhi
Update soon
Plss Dii
The story is so interesting
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
What to expect...Kahi khush kabri toh nahi😆...Annikas pain was well described.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
good one
one suggestion, could you post an index page?
It would be easier to check it
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
ch3.

She woke up to find herself in an unknown surrounding.After rubbing her eyes' and carefully observing everything,it finally hit her that she was in Shivaay's room of the Oberoi Mansion where she came last night to attend Priyanka's sangeet..

She carefully scanned the room for Shivaay but she didnt see him there. She heaved a sigh of relief. She got up to look for Saahil when she saw Saahil coming inside with Omkara and Rudra.

''Ab kaisa feel kar rahi ho,Annika?'' Om asked forwarding a tray of breakfast to her.

''Feeling better par naashte ki kya zarurat thhi? Mujhe uttha dete tum.'' Annika replied.

''Anyways,thanks for the breakfast.kisne banaya?Umm.. let me think.. Zarur Daadi ne ya phir Jahnvi aunty ne..'' Annika asked and took a morsel near her mouth.

''Yeh Shivaay bhaiya ne banaya hai.. Office jaane se pehle,he made it with his hands.. healthy khaana aapke liye..'' Rudra replied.

Her hand just stopped there near her mouth.The morsel of food didnt go inside as she heard that the breakfast was made for her by Shivaay.. This was noticed by Omkara and Rudra.. Omkara noticed Annika's eyes becoming moistened.

''Woh..woh.. mujhe aise sada khaana khaane ki aadat nahi hai.. mujhe kuch nahi chahiye.. sirf,ek glass paani de do..'' Annika changed the topic to avoid questions.

''Par.. Itne pyaar se unhone khana banaya.. ek baar taste karke dekho please,Di?'' Rudra pleaded.

''Rudra mera baccha.. abhi mera mann nahi hai.. mujhe ghar bhi jaana hai.. kuch zaruri kaam hai.. mujhe jaana hai..'' Annika pleaded and after that,she left with Saahil after taking leave from everyone.

Omkara was thinking about something when Rudra piped in.

''O,aapko nahi lagta ki Annika di aur Shivaay bhaiya ke beech kuch toh baat huyi hai?''

''Mujhe bhi aisa laga,Rudra.. Par aisa kya hua hoga undono ke beech jo iss hadd tak pohuch gayi jahaan Annika ne Shivaay ke haatho se banaya hua naashta tak chuwa nahi.. kuch toh garbar hai? Par kaise pata lagaye?'' Omkara thought.

''O.. why fear when Rudra is here?? Anyways,hum Saahil ke saath baat karsakte hai..'' Rudra said.

"Hmm.. Correct.. chalo.." Omkara and Rudra went to Saahil and Annika's house.

Annika's house:

Annika came outside with Saahil to leave for hospital when she saw Omkara and Rudra standing infront of her.

"Arey tum dono yahaan pe? kuch kaam thha?" Annika askes surprisingly.

"Woh hum soch rahe thhe ki Saahil ko ghumane le jaaye aur usse hum dono miss kar rahe thhe bohut isiliye." Rudra answered.

"Acchi baat hai.. Jao Saahil.. Om aur Rudra bhaiya ke saath jao aur bohut masti karna. koi bhi cheez khareedne keliye zid mat karna,bad manners,ok.." Annika said.

"Ok didi.." Saahil replied happily and went away.

Saahil really enjoyed his day out in the park with Rudra and Omkara. They were happy to see Saahil really happy.

"Rudra bhaiya and Om bhaiya,mujhe aaj bohut accha laga yahaan aap dono ke saath aake.. Thank you.." Saahil expresses his happiness and hugged them. Omkara and Rudra also hugged him tightly.

"Saahil,ek baat batao.. Tumhe pata hai ki Shivaay aur Annika ek dusre ko pasand karte hai?" Omkara asked.

"Haan bhaiya. Didi aur Shivaay bhaiya ek dusre ko bohut pasand karte nahi,ek dusre se bohut pyaar karte hai,par,recently undono ke beech fight hua kisi cheez ko leke. yeh pata nahi ki kis cheez ko leke hua.. Didi bohut udaas rehti hai indono aur kuch reason keliye hospital jarahi hai.. Mujhe kuch bhi nahi bolti hai par main samajta hu ki Didi ko Shivaay bhaiya ki kisi baat se bohut chot lagi hai.." Saahil replied.

Omkara looked at Rudra and nodded in a yes and as they guessed,they were right.

Meanwhile:

"Doctor,mere paas aur kitna waqt bacha hai? Sach sach bataiye mujhe.." Annika asked with sad eyes.

"Zyada se zyada 1 saal bacha hai tumhara paas. I am sorry Annika.. Tumhara brain tumour last stage pe pohuch chuki hai.. Ab agar operation bhi karwana chaho toh survival chances 10 percent hai ya phir ussr kam.. Please aap himmat rakhiye.." Doctor replied.

Annika had a sad smile on her face and tears brimmed in her eyes..

Precap: Annika reconciles with Shivaay.. Omkara and Rudra comes to know about Annika's disease.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
Woah... sad one...the last part hit right at the heart...
Oh plz don't kill anika, Wat will happen to shivaay n sahil den..

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