AnShi SS- TOIL (Epilogue (Part-2.1)-IshKara, Pg.26) - Page 9

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Posted: 9 years ago
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it is supeeerrrbbb.thaks dear.i liked ur tejvi version very much,coz in my mind i thought them like this(their history/chmistry).plz plz plz update next part soon.fantastic 👏👏👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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That was amazing, I think you looked into tej and Jhanvi's relationship perfectly. I love how you characterised Om in this chapter, I enjoy when he takes a stand for what he believes is right. Please keep writing.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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And this time...you answered my wishes!
First of all, Tej's pov was very articulately portrayed. His thoughts on Jhanvi, his subsequent actions and the resultant decisions...they clicked to each other so well, That I could almost see a new and different Tej. Well done!

Now I will come to my favourite part.
Omkara mortgaging his own inheritance to ensure Shivika is something I often felt will come true and even dreamt of such a sequence. You managed to make this a reality by penning this and I am really thankful to you.
Pinky is a manipulative woman and for some reason I cannot agree to her goody-shoes image and every time I imagine, she becomes the quintessential Kaikeyi in the Oberoi-Ramayana who is capable to send Omkara to exile.
Thanks a lot for the PM and bigger thanks for penning this.

Niki
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Such an amazing part 🤗
Omie loves Shivay a lot , if there would've been someone else in his place...no one would do soo much 😳
Waiting for ShivIka ❤️
Update soon and keep giving Lambe Updates 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#85
An excellent update! I'm pretty sure Om is the wisest person in room! I'm glad Tej was show his place. Thanks for fleshing out the story and showing it from all sides! A very unique and nuanced look at the life of the Oberoi's. Great work! 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I have to wake up in the next four hours, given the fact that I'll sleep!
But here I am, reading this fascinating book, yes book, not chapter, over and over!
I swear to Gods, Anju, if you were here right now, I would've hugged the life out of you darling!
I mean where do I begin to explain?
From Tej's turmoil of unfeeling emotions to Omkara's ace out in the open for Pinky to admire, every bit of it was perfect.
Where the previous chapter was a blend of hilarity and bromance, this was chaos, love and cunning tact all together!
To be very honest, Tej and Jhanvi somehow always felt like a grown up version of Shivaay and Anika gone terribly wrong! And the way you portrayed them, especially Tej's turmoil was addicting.
Ah, I am so sure that I'll be loitering around like a sleepless zombie during college hours tomorrow, but this was so worth it!
Rudra is always trying to build up those castles of happiness, yet somehow, the broken Oberoi souls crush it back to harsh sands!
Poor guy!
And Shivaay, the man literally suffers the most, trying to put up the indifferent, strong facade. He is always trying to weld the pieces of his family together. He lives more for others than for himself!
Omkara is sure to drill some sense into his thick skull even though it means sacrificing all that he is left with!
Ah, you are too good!
Please update soon!

Much love!
Blessed be!

XOXO
~Red

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Posted: 9 years ago
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I loved it. Tej is very interestingly portrayed here. He too is a man with deep emotions. Pinky is one vicious lady but more than that I loved Omkara. He is ready to give up everything for his brother's sake & Shivaay does not even know about it. Too good. This part touched Rudra's feelings too. He & Omkara think in a very similar fashion when it comes to their much messed up family. The only difference is Omkara voices out his opinions openly & Rudra feigns ignorance & indifference. You are a great writer. Please do update super soon. Waiting eagerly.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This is a brilliant story!!! Love the dynamics that you have created between the family members...especially the brothers, and most certainly between AnShi! I love the kitchen scene, his acquiescence, his pushing for her to admit the feelings she has for him...simply brilliant. You penned the scene so well, I felt like I was watching it rather than reading it... Simply phenomenal!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Read all the parts in a go...loved every bit of it...
Omkara is such mind reader...
Loved the part with shivaay and anika..especially the liar part...
Can't wait for the next update!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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