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curiousmuse

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Posted: 9 years ago

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vidya29

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Hey there,curiousmuse!

I read d this entire thread in a row and I have got to say,you are sublime.

I wish to write more but I have a fever running at the moment and can't bring around my thoughts enough to pen a decent review.

Just know that you brought a smile to my face when I felt low.

Amazing work! Will write a proper one later.

Take care.

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nissi or jesi

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Posted: 9 years ago

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heyya...man are u for real...like how do i tell how much freaking i love dis...dat second part reminded me of hospital scene making me almost cry...rudra baby nd his nakhre...O in hulk mode...

3rd part is fantabulous was roffling so hard...will post detailedly on ur os...write more dear...ur blessed with an excellent talent

now when's d next part

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Sarcy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Anju, bruhh, I'm officially hooked to your SS! Your words flow effortlessly, painting a vivid picture of the story that they tell. I devoured every chapter, depressing or not. You've stayed true to the characterisations of the three brothers, except deviating a bit with regards to Shivaay, but oh, what a deviation! The emotional upheavals that he is going through have been very well portrayed. And Omkara's commanding and protective avatar was a treat to read. Rudr, the guy is adorable!

I really love Jhanvi's character in the show. There's so much to that woman who apparently has a kind heart but it is ruthlessly butchered by her husband. I loved the scene between Jhanvi and Shivaay! ❤️ The way the conversation flowed and she tricked him onto the path to realisation, I went all, 'awww!' I hope we get to see scenes between Jhanvi and Shivaay in the show too.

Can't wait to see what you have planned next and how does the confrontation go. Hope you will be updating soon.

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Kriti

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Read all the three parts in a go 😃

HahahA Shivay and Badi Maa wala scene was THE bestest of all 🤣

Like really 'Her Hair is In his Mouth ' 😆

Great one 👍🏼

Update soon and do pm me :)

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Kriti

@KRITII

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Posted: 9 years ago

#26

And yaa one more thing

I love your Display ❤️

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srividhya68

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Posted: 9 years ago

#27

wow
read all the 3 parts in a go
3 parts were awesome
the emotional turmoil of om-shivaay was heart wrenching
i was crying not literally but really
jhanvi-shivaay convo was so so so nice
wish to see this on screen too
waiting for nxt part
cont soon

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Priya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#28

wow dear very nice update
superb
loved it

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curiousmuse

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: vidya29
Hey there,curiousmuse!
I read d this entire thread in a row and I have got to say,you are sublime.
I wish to write more but I have a fever running at the moment and can't bring around my thoughts enough to pen a decent review.
Just know that you brought a smile to my face when I felt low.
Amazing work! Will write a proper one later.
Take care.

Hi Vidya!

It warms my heart to know that my work has brought a smile on your face. Mission accomplished. 😉 Thank you so much for taking the time to read and putting forth your views about my writing. 😊

Take care and get well soon.

Regards
Anju

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curiousmuse

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Posted: 9 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: Messi2
heyya...man are u for real...like how do i tell how much freaking i love dis...dat second part reminded me of hospital scene making me almost cry...rudra baby nd his nakhre...O in hulk mode...
3rd part is fantabulous was roffling so hard...will post detailedly on ur os...write more dear...ur blessed with an excellent talent

now when's d next part

Jessi dear, read your review on the OS thread and I am happy that you've read the SS as well. 😃 After those depressing two chapters, I wanted the readers to get a break from all the angst. So, the third chapter was written in a lighter vein. Again, thank you for reading and reviewing! 😛

The next part will be up next week. Will keep you posted.

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