AnShi SS- TOIL (Epilogue (Part-2.1)-IshKara, Pg.26) - Page 2

Originally posted by: mistofshadows

Hello Anju!

This is one commendable piece. Take a bow!

Seriously I loved it. Truthfully speaking I kinda have this broken-Shivaay-comforted-by-Om obsession. Somehow I love to end up imagining these kind of scenarios. Loved it and you have given me new food to imagine too😆

Btw the chapter was way vibrant of emotions. Their was this helpless, scared and lonely facet of the suave, rude businessman you brought forth which I doubt any of his other family members know to exist.

It was actually painfully beautiful to read about the depth of his emotions for his brother. It was just an exhibition Om was going for but the tiresome life finally caught up with him and this simple leave of Om somehow resulted in him feeling that Om had no place for him in his life. And it shows how Shivaay more than his family name, lives for his brothers.

No brothers...no life

I loved it. Thank you for writing this.

Please PM me whenever you write more.

I have sent you a buddy's request too. Please accept it.

Cheers!

Niki

Hi Niki!

Thank you so much for reading and expressing your views about my little piece of fiction. Truly humbled! 😊

Though Shivaay comes off as one of those stereotypical Hindi serial male leads with oodles of arrogance and rage, there are quite a few chinks in his armour. He is the only guy among the three who has not had an outlet to vent or something passionate enough to redirect his attentions to. Om has his sculptures while Rudra finds solace in his fitness regime and gym/party circuits, but Shivaay is the odd one out. The viewers hardly have any clue of his true self. While the hardcore businessman avatar is pretty mainstream, he's the ideal mysterious character to explore. I get a feeling that to let his siblings pursue careers of their choice, he took it upon himself to helm the family business and shield them from a dreary, robotic existence. But then again Omkara is also an intriguing character in his own right. Will get to him too in the course of the story.

Anyway, thank you once again for all the beautiful compliments. I've added you to the buddy list and since you are the only one there at the moment, you'll be well-aware of the next update which might not be too soon. 😛

Originally posted by: dimpled.smile

Wow thts awsum dear! plz continue i m.loving it!

Thank you. 😊

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

intriguing start..👏

Thanks 😊

Originally posted by: MahaSrilu

Amazing one...Really liked it

I am glad that you liked it. 😊

Originally posted by: AnjuRish

brilliant display of emotions

Thank you, Anju! 😊

Very amazingly written like everybit of it! 👏 ⭐️ can't wait to read ur next chpt... 😊

Originally posted by: ..KpopIsLife..

Very amazingly written like everybit of it! 👏 ⭐️ can't wait to read ur next chpt... 😊

Thank you, dear. 😊

This is really a enthralling piece of work. It never manages to make me feel disappointed. I thought last chapter was emotional.

Originally posted by: mistofshadows

This is really a enthralling piece of work. It never manages to make me feel disappointed. I thought last chapter was emotional.

My goodness, this chapter is even more so!

The writing was fabulous. Each of your words contributed their due in framing the picture you tried to portray.

Rudra's petulance, Om's anger and Shivaay's pain and regret were so well penned down that it brought tears to my eyes.

I loved it.

Please update soon and thanks for the PM

-Niki

Thank you, Niki! 😊 Next chapter will be up tomorrow. Stay tuned. 😉