AnShi SS- TOIL (Epilogue (Part-2.1)-IshKara, Pg.26) - Page 18

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: curiousmuse



Thank you so much for dropping a comment for the chapter. I am glad that you enjoyed reading this.
@bold: I'll see what I can do. Will try to incorporate something along these lines, but I am not making any promises. The OmRu scene maybe doable. Then again, don't get your hopes up. I really don't know how the next two parts will turn out, to be honest.

Stay tuned! 😊


No problem sweety, I said na, if it's possible😉
Waiting for the next part, do PM me😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome story
read all parts in one go.
Badi maa was smart to make shivay realize his feelings for Anika, her true son OM brilliantly tackle pinky. Rudra was hilarious, especially his note in the love book for shivay. Shivay and Anika jodi is lovely.
I am eager to read the remaining epilogue.
Update soon and PM me. :)
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: SanyaEterna


No problem sweety, I said na, if it's possible😉
Waiting for the next part, do PM me😛



Of course I'll PM you. 😛 Part II will be up tomorrow.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: twerping

Whooow! OK that was just so good! Definitely everything I was craving for and more! Awesome start to the epilogue! That has left me wanting more of Anika and Shivay! The way you write them makes them super hot but in the most real way possible! Absolutely loved their interaction... You are just so good at portraying nuanced relationships! So glad you updated...can't wait to see your take on Om and Ishaana.

Btw after reading the 'liar' scene, I had felt that I might spontaneously combust with the passionate intensity of the two... To see that intensity here framed by the stability of marriage just felt deeply satisfying.



Hi!

Thank you so much for taking the time to review. Your words have pleased me beyond measure and I am happy that you are satisfied with the story so far. I am trying to make the relationships as real as possible, keeping the protagonists in character. AnShi have an intensity that I've taken a liking to and am happy to know that so many others here share the same sentiments.

Next part will be up soon. Stay tuned 😛

Thanks again

Regards
Anju
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Posted: 9 years ago
YOU R A BRILLIANT WRITER DEAR!!
Pls continue and PM me
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Posted: 9 years ago


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Posted: 9 years ago
Wowww need I say dis is d ishkara I would love to see...u made a non ishkara fan read dis more than once I think its d best compliment ..." yeah am full of myself and bit high too"
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Messi2

Wowww need I say dis is d ishkara I would love to see...u made a non ishkara fan read dis more than once I think its d best compliment ..." yeah am full of myself and bit high too"



LOL!!! Thank you so much for dropping a comment, Jessi and I am super glad that you liked my take on IshKara. 😛 More than once, you say. YAY! 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
I loved this...primarily for how skillfully you sketched Om in his addiction phase. On the ebb..not in control of his senses. Full of despair. His cussing. Lashing out at Shivaay...and pleading with him not to have Rudra visit him.

Beautiful ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
well written...

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