AnShi SS- TOIL (Epilogue (Part-2.1)-IshKara, Pg.26)

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DEEPZzzz

@DEEPZzzz

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Posted: 9 years ago

#181

That was good update i liked your take on IshKara lovely.

Edited by pikychu - 9 years ago

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coolove

@coolove

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Posted: 9 years ago

#182

Hey, great update
I love your take on Om and ishaana, man it's so realistic and yeah om being a drug addict would behave like this
Glad to see you being bold about your take on their ship
Please keep writing

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twerping

@twerping

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+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#183

Absolutely brilliant! Tortured drug-addled Om was just so perfectly drawn by you here and this back story of Ishaana and Om is so intriguing. I love the way the scenes of their present interaction is interspersed with these images from a troubled past. In the show, despite his vulnerabilities, Om generally appears one of the most grounded and balanced characters. But this tortured image that you've painted of him really explores the darker side of his personality that the show hints at.

Also, the scene between Rudra and Shivay was delightfully cute! And cannot wait to see how Shivay gets his revenge on Anika!

Edited by twerping - 9 years ago

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PenguinBaby

@PenguinBaby

Stunner

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Posted: 9 years ago

#184

Ok.

That was intense.👏

First part with ShivDra was really cute! And Ishaana's letter to Shivaay was really hilarious and had a personal touch which shows that their relationship is so much better now, than it was years ago when they met at the Rehab Center. 😉

Omkara's time at the Rehab sounds really depressing, no wonder he wanted to bite himself out of boredom and spit out curses after curses on everyone! 😆

Would love to read how Om-Bela's patient-stalker/reporter relationship changed into friendship and also the unrequited love!

All in all, I loved it to the core. And I am not a big IshKara fan yet!❤️

Update soon and PM me! I know you will! Waiting eagerly!👍🏼

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mandu

@mandu

Voyager

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Posted: 9 years ago

#185

That was very good... I would love to know this omkara and ishana more...awesome writing

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curiousmuse

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Posted: 9 years ago

#186

Originally posted by: YeHoKyaRahaHai
I loved this...primarily for how skillfully you sketched Om in his addiction phase. On the ebb..not in control of his senses. Full of despair. His cussing. Lashing out at Shivaay...and pleading with him not to have Rudra visit him.

Beautiful ❤️

Hi!

That is exactly how I wanted Om to be. 😳 There is much more to him than just the calm, collected persona shown so far. The turmoil that he feels can be triggered by the smallest of instances as was evident during his conversation with Ishaana.

The relationship between Shivaay and Om transcends all levels of simple brotherly love. The deep understanding stems from standing together during times of despair, seeing each other at their lowest, but going strong nevertheless.

I am glad that you loved it. It makes me proud too, because writing this chapter was truly draining and I was really sceptical about how it would turn out.

Thank you so much for leaving a comment. 😊

Much love
Anju

P.S.: Did you change your username? I remember this pic of Robert Downey Jr. belonging to Amri. May be I'm mistaken. 😛

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VJDIPA

@VJDIPA

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Posted: 9 years ago

#187

I m waiting for next part

I m not much interested in Ishkara or Rumya

Pls write more on Anshi

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curiousmuse

@curiousmuse

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Posted: 9 years ago

#188

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

well written...

Thank you! 😊

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curiousmuse

@curiousmuse

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Posted: 9 years ago

#189

Originally posted by: pikychu
That was good update i liked your take on IshKara lovely.

Thank you! 😊

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srividhya68

@srividhya68

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#190

wow
awesome upt
ishaana's msg to shivaay was sweet
poor om - the past never leaves him
shivaay is so much protective when it comes to his brothers
loved it
waiting for the 2nd part
cont soon

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