● RiAnsh OS - Broken Lost Soul ● Part 3 on Pg 6

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This is my first RiAnsh OS and I'm not much of a good writer so dont know much about clean writting hope you all like it 🤗🤗


Due to car accident Riddhu lost her memories of being Mrs. Vansh Raisinghania and the moment she woke up in VR mansion ( last memory she remembered is when Kabir came to her in blood fainted in her arms ) she is running here and there looking for Kabir and her friend and this whole mansion is like unknown to her and then Riddhu bumped to Vansh and Vansh being worried Riddhima "What happpened" and Riddhu being clueless crying shocked and she fainted in Vansh's arms


After check up doctor said she lost her memories but how much she remembers we still have to figure out and then Riddhu again woke up all family members is there and she woke up Vamsh runs towards her holds her hand but her clueless face she pushed those hands denying his existence Riddhu sits back looking here and there "Ho kaun tum aur main yaha kya kar rahi hu yeh jagah kaunsi hai tum sab log kun ho" and Vansh comforting her holding her face with hands "Everything is fine kuch nahi hua hai" and Riddhu again pushed him away saying "Durr raho mujhse paas matt aao mere" while talking she just trying her best to run away but as usual "Vansh ka mansion uski alag hi duniya hai us se nikal pana mushqil hi nahi na mumqin hai" and Vansh and all family members running towards her and the moment she said "Kabir kabir tum kaha ho" banging on VR mansion door crying and again fainted ( Faint baar baar iss liye ho rahi hai because she suddenly woke up unknown place unknown people so bhaga daudi mein she still need to recover ) and then doctor said she lost few memories thats why she dont anyone or the moment you came to her life she lost all those memories playing piano crying 😭😭

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Vansh crying remembering old memories from the moment they met till now literally all those memories from day 1 they met "Aapko pasand nahi woh aapki problem hai" to confession confrontation milke bichdne wale saare pal aanlhon ke samne aate hi Vansh starts crying and then sia came to Vansh wipes tears then she told him Riddhu khana nahi khaa rahi so he runs towards her Vansh ko dekhte hi Riddhu again scared "Mujhe mere ghar jaana hai please mujhe jaane do" and Vansh "Riddhima yeh tumhara bhi ghar hai why dont you understand" with that teary eyes 😭😭 then she suddenly said "Agar kabir ko pata chala mujhe aise gharme band karke rakha hai tum soch bhi nahi sakte ky hoga tumhre sath" Vansh being so shocked still he tried his best to made her eat food but she refused to eat it and asked him to bring Kabir to her which made Vansh devastated and he just leave from there and those flashbacks of her betrayals which she did for Kabir in front of his eyes came his so broken 😭😭


Again Riddhu tried to rus away which lead her to hurrt herself and then Vansh figures out Kabir is the key and eventually Vansh bought Kabir to VR mansion again and Kabir without any condition agrees to help them ( Indeed suspicious okay Riddhu ke zariye once again he may try to get everything ) and as we know Vansh always been prepared 2 steps ahead but dilpe bas nai chalta na from the moment Vansh brought Kabir to VR mansion again as usual whole family asked him but for Riddhu he did he said aur VR mansion mein Vansh ne jo bol diya toh bol diya no more questions 😎😎 and Kabir ko dekhte hi Riddhu runs towards him to hug him Vansh unhe aisa dekhte hi bohot broken feel karta hai and Riddhu starts complaining about how she was captured by him calling her as his wife and he just came to her room "Kyun ki tu meri biwi.." with those teary eyes looking into Riddhima's eyes "Kyun ki tum meri biwi Riddhu ki trah dikhti ho"

Riddhima - Aap samjh hi nahi rahe main aapko janti hi nahi toh aapki biwi kaise ho sakti hu mein Riddhima hu Riddhu nahi aapko koi galat fehmi hue hai

Vansh - Sahi kaha tumne tum meri Riddhu ho hi nahi ( walking towards RiAnsh wedding picture holded in his hand showing to Riddhima ) par tum bilkul ( with those heavy voice teary eyes ) meri Riddhu ki tarah ho dikhne mein bolne mein

Riddhima - Yeh toh bilkul meri tarah dikhti hai shayad isi liye galat fehmi ho gayi hogi ( and she grabbed Kabir hand ) ab hum chalte hai everything sorted misunderstanding thi

Vansh then stops her saying "Aaj humari matlab ke meri Riddhu aur mere shaadi se pehle hum pehli baar mile the uss din ki anniversary party was there so its my request please aaj raat ke party ke liye ruk jaaye" and Riddhu refused but about to faint and Vansh ishare se Kabir ko rukne ko bolta hai and after discussion they stopped and asked him to stay in different room


Party planning as usual beautifully done by Angre and then party started the moment our Riddhu came with Kabir all lights focused on her only just like in this scene Vansh keeps looking at Riddhu at this sequence

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Vansh took over the stage holding white rose and revisiting all those 1st meet of RiAnsh "Akele safed rang mein hi craze hai" se argument ended up with Riddhu's "Aapko pasand nahi woh aapki problem hai toh sulaghte rahiye aap" 🤣🤣 woh us pehli mulaqat mein Riddhu ne mujhse argue hi nahi balki decore change bhi karwaya danke ki chott pe which made me think "Interesting very interesting" and everything his saying looking at her "Party planner banke cruis ke safar mein journey start hue VR LIMIT CROSS NAHI KARTA SET KARTA HAI iss VR mansion mein tum aayi meri behen ki therapist banke SADAK KOI BHI HO RASTA MAIN HI CHUNTA HU dheere dheere employee se lab gharka hissa bann gayi pata hi nahi chala phir woh 72 hours wali shaadi GUNS AND ROSES phir shuru hue journey THOROUGH GENTLEMAN YOU SEE se leke SWEETHEART tak from ups and downs ek dusare ko jaana pehchana yaha tak ki jaan tak de di ek dusare ke liye JAB TAK MEIN TUMHARE SATH HU TUMHE DUNIYA KI KOI PROBLEM CHU BHI NAHI SAKTI aur iss tarah dheere dheere hum Vansh Riddhu se RiAnsh bann gaye" Vansh looking at her ki kuch toh yaad aaye but nai and then as usul kabir mic ko disconnect karta hai


Next scene everyone on dance floor dancing after sia initiated Riddhu Kabir ke sath dance karne jaati hai which make Vansh feel sad then Ishani came dances with Vansh and setting of dance floor is such a way that each time partners get changed Vansh dancing exactly opposite of Riddhu and suddenly Vansh starts singing

"Jo humsafar hum nahi hai" both RiAnsh swapped partners released from one partner to another still not together "Toh yahi par chodd do" then they looked at each other "Rehne do saare bahaane" Riddhu came to Vansh and she feels pain in Vansh eyes 😭😭 "Mujhe aakar boldo" and then the moment partners to change "Hum khud hi juda ho jaayenge" about to switched partner Vansh holded Riddhu hand tightly "Kehdo bas itna tum" and then suddenly realesed her hands as she feels uncomfortable Vansh noticed in her eyes "Kehdo pyaar nahi chale jaayenge hum" 😭😭 Vansh free her hand rolled her and switched to another partner and Vansh being sad "Dil lauta do mera" flashback of old memories of RiAnsh dance "Dil lauta do mera chale jaayenge" and they are dancing background music is still on RiAnsh eyes says alot teary eyes of Vansh and Riddhu feeling it 😭😭 Kabir Riddhu ko sath dance karte dekh "Mana bada mushqil hai mera tumhein bhool jaana" Vansh keeps looking at her and she is happy still feel uncomfortable while Vansh singing this lines and while dancing Riddhu comes near Vansh as Vansh is sitting drinking "Jitna kabhi paas the hum utna hai ab door jaana" Riddhu's hairs reminds him old memories strikes again where Riddhu hair stuck in Vansh suit aare wahi scene where they hold each others hand that episode of sunny ko kisne maara "Jahaan khushboo tumhari na aaye"

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suddenly back to present Vansh drinking then sudden flashback of their wedding, dancing, consoling and happy moments "Na aaye teri yaadein" and Vansh saw Kabir Riddhu dancing and with teary eyes about to leave "Koi bata do jagah chale jaayenge" then Riddhu somehow lost her balance Vansh holds her in his arms close up face scene of both Vansh Riddhu looking at each other RiAnsh lost in each other "Dil lauta do mera chale jaayenge" 😭😭 and then Riddhu's sudden realizations of reality and aankhein churake chali jaati hai as she feels that pain in Vansh eyes and thinks why i feel his pain with confused look and Vansh just walk away


This is where my first RiAnsh OS ends hope you all enjoyed it Nd thank you so much for reading and as i said recently started writing so jyada experience nahi hai as such in writing advance mein thank you so much 🤗🤗

Part 2 ● RiAnsh OS - Broken Lost Soul Part 2 ●

Part 3 ● RiAnsh OS - Broken Lost Soul Part 3 ●

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Very nice plot ☺️ second par do naa

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Athira44

Very nice plot ☺️ second par do naa

I still need to write 2nd part glad you liked it dear 🤗🤗 hopefully jaldi aayega and i'm new to writing so this really means a lot to me 😃😃
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Posted: 4 years ago
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This was an amazing one shot.

Please do continue.

Eager to read the next part.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Krazzy_Tintin11

This was an amazing one shot.

Please do continue.

Eager to read the next part.

Thank you so much 🤗🤗 and i didnt started writing on 2nd part but soon I'll write it 😃😃
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Posted: 4 years ago
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Yes, please part two likhna jaldi se...i don't like Riansh sad😒😒

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Originally posted by: raveena0605

Yes, please part two likhna jaldi se...i don't like Riansh sad😒😒

i know they are sad but 2nd part is more fun and hope jaldi likhna shuru karu and thank you so much for li,ing and appreciating my writing 🤗🤗
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Posted: 4 years ago
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Brilliant update dear beautifully described dear well done

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Originally posted by: KV2711

Brilliant update dear beautifully described dear well done

Thats really sweet of you thank you so much for liking and appreciating my writting 🤗🤗
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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Vivirti_Suvian2

i know they are sad but 2nd part is more fun and hope jaldi likhna shuru karu and thank you so much for li,ing and appreciating my writing 🤗🤗

No problem dear, are you a newbie here?

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