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Dolly-heart

@Dolly-heart

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Hammie I am so happy for you and your beautiful poem to Viplav for his Ishq says it with such purity.

I will say this for you...

Hoti hai kwaishein poori...

Jab ibaadat seh maangi hoh...

Jaroorat seh jiyada miltah hai unikoh...

Lets keep our fingers crossed that Viplav's coming back will give him strength to bring his love back and get rid of the thorn that ruined his life and our as fans with her entry...

Take care Hammie and ... Auroh seh to hameh patah nahin...

Hum aapke likhneh seh pyaar karteh hai...

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Wanderlust

@titli_314

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

This is fantastic.. I cant say how much I loved it.. mein abhi kya bolegi tu ich bata mereko..

It was absolutely brilliant .. What a masterpiece Hammie..👏👏

Despited being rejected so many times Viplav believes that Dhani still loves him.. He said that so many times.. and u have penned down Viplav's thoughts wonderfully..

He is aware of the truth that Dhani's heart still cries out to him..

Viplav's blood filled Dhani's hair partings.. I remember the incident and then they united for ever..

Now I am just eagerly waiting for their reunion.. Once Parshiya regains consciousness, I am sure he will tell the truth to the police that Viplav is not at fault..

honestly Hammie I was just loving the show.. when the news came that Mishal will not be a part of this show anymore my heart sank down.. i was not ready to miss this current track.. how Vidha will clear away their MUs.. and vidhu and dhani will be back in viplav's life but did not have the heart to continue watching the episodes post Mishal's exit.. But abhi I am more than happy that everything is fine now.. Tum samajhti ho nah.. how much happy I am.. I cant cant explain.. apun bohot khush hai bhau😃.. very very very happy that Mishal will be back next week and I will continue watching IKRS..

Hammie.. Aa gale lag ja khusi se..🤗.. reminded me of the 22-23rd feb, 2011 hug.. That Mishal-mahhi hug was the tightest hug.. awww i still blush.. My cheeks turn red whenever I think how that beast changed into a lover.. He did not even know what could be given as a gift to a girl.. u remember he had bought a teddy for sup.??. and later the shy kid had learned to hug and kiss his beloved😆😆 what a transformation😆

ok ok sorry I know this is viplav's show.. but mein kya karegi?, Mishal exit and then comeback reminded me of my show.. all his fans had prayed and prayed for his comeback but he did not return then.. Thank God at least Viplav did not go away like this..

Thanks Mishal..❤️ and thanks Rupali too for bringing back mishal after 4 years and then for not letting him disappear again😊

Yipeee.. hurrah🥳 dhinchak dhinchak

Edited by Barbie_KK9629 - 9 years ago

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Wanderlust

@titli_314

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

joya didi.. u have visited LTL forum only once. heeiinnn😲

i will forget counting if i say how many times I went there.. 🤣 read every comment of hammie and other members..

didi.. i will send u the links to a few stories..OS of tasha story.. read them.. LTL forum had such talented writers..

BTW send me the VM when u finish it.. and ur comment is here really nice.. u r a poet too?? i did not know that.. amake boloni konodino toh.. ekhane sobai khoob talented😳😳

Edited by Barbie_KK9629 - 9 years ago

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Nandhini

@nandyy55

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Hammie 👏

Appreciated ur writing & now ur poetry wow once step going ahead for Mishal!

Mishal's Magic makes u writing, Simply amazing am stuck with words

Loved this Line...

With the fire of our Ishq! with mine own blood !you became mine till eternity

Happy to see after ur Swan song post..

Ur Most Wanted Member of this Forum 🤗

Thank u Hammie for being with us..

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awida

@awida

Trailblazer

+ 8

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

what a lovely poem!

You touched my heart by your writing..it is not about ViDha's love..it is about life truths..ppl meet , fall in love , part ways but their hearts remain tied to each others.

Isn't this what every aashiq feels?

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Magnolia2

@Magnolia2

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Hi Hammie

What a beautiful poem! A lover's' ardent appeal to his beloved . Touched my heart.

Glad that you'll be back with your takes soon.

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simpleAnna

@simpleAnna

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: Barbie_KK9629
joya didi.. u have visited LTL forum only once. heeiinnn😲
i will forget counting if i say how many times I went there..🤣read every comment of hammie and other members..
didi.. i will send u the links to a few stories..OS of tasha story.. read them.. LTL forum had such talented writers..

BTW send me the VM when u finish it.. and ur comment is here really nice.. u r a poet too?? i did not know that.. amake boloni konodino toh.. ekhane sobai khoob talented😳😳

Nah reee bas likhe dilam.bas hammie ja likheche shekhan theke nijer feelings dhele dilam.ami boring doctor.not some poet.

Yes visited a few pages then my eyes caught one poem of hammie she wrote it for a member who died cz of cancer.it made me cry so much.I couldnt try to visit more.cz she was in every post with her comments on hammies work.u can try that poem it is such a beautiful poem.
Tor ss er link ta de na re.bz hoe gechi.bz hoe jaoai bhalo.when I read ur stories I think d same, everyone here r too talented.

Edited by simple2joy - 9 years ago

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Wanderlust

@titli_314

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

didi.. ei je SS ta.. keu poreni.. sobai dukhi chilo for mish.. o jedin chole gelo sedin e ami likhechilam eta.. tumi pore nao

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/ishq-ka-rang-safed/4670787/ss-it-was-a-very-special-day-part-3-and-4-updated-on-page-4?pn=4

Edited by Barbie_KK9629 - 9 years ago

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Hamlet53

@Hamlet53

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: pearl100
👏👏👏 heyyy me here now ek ye garme... bhaut ho gaya...
Hammie you are brilliant, now your a fab poet yaar aur kya kya hidden talents hai yaar 😃
it comes into action... when the need arises swat...
You have penned down Viplav's emotions so well dear...we can feel his pain,his emotions so well, you remind me of Jenny yaar ...you both are too good...you are God gifted writer, thank you for sharing this poetry with us dear. Till then take care.
yes mujhe bhi I thought of jenny... she wrote some great verses... thanks for reading my quick compliation... was hot off the press when I posted and made a complete botchby comitting mistake of double post.. thanks for reading and commenting muchlove hammie

Edited by Hamlet53 - 9 years ago