main wapis ah raha hoon Dhani !

Mishal Raheja

as Viplav

Main wapis ah raha hoon Dhani..

I ll be back my love .. for the colour of lshq is to hold on to what's ours..

For your Viplav is no quitter ,not one to walk away in the sunset!

I was born to give voice to the silent sufferings of the meek and lowly

My advantages I use to support the disadvantaged!

Dhani when you came in my life , I found the soul mate who would be my fellow fighter!

You changed my wild ways and I become stronger then before. You are my might!

When life was bleak, I was down..then you accepted me, raised me and held me

Recall my love, how our joint fights restored many wrongs!

Hark Dhani! recall our battles with blood and fire! ..

With the fire of our Ishq! with mine own blood !you became mine till eternity

Yes the gods willed the union of our souls... blessed me! and you became my other half!

We had our fair share of tears ! misunderstandings made us drink the poisoned chalice of separation!

Parting continues to divide us. .dhani listen to your heart it still cries out to me!

I return Dhani ..your heart continues to speak to me. But alas, you!! block me out

In your eyes I wronged you and in my eyes you wounded me too

But I return , today. Weakened, restore me, rebuild me, renew me

Dhani will you turn away the man who brought colour in your life?

Now mine is the life where colour resides no more

Let our flower, the symbol of our Ishq once more put a smile on my face

For you both are the force in my life. The calls of your hearts bring me back

As a weary traveller am I. In your arms I seek rest..

This demon uncle craves the hugs of his flower fairy!

Accept me then one more time! and hear me out Dhani..

Try tough you may, but the colour of our Ishq is white, pure.

Calm then your heart, be not morose Dhani..

You knew it all along your smile matters to me the most

Viplav comes back to you , your love's captive comes to you

punish me ,destroy me or heal me .. only yours forever Viplav..

hamlet53 20.7.16

This is a pleasant.. amendment to my final take Swan Song.. which marked Mishal's exit from Ishq ka rang safed .. Preeti you pointed out the tone of the take needs to change. I have put something together.. hope readers accept it...

👏👏👏

Originally posted by: Hamlet53

Mishal Raheja

as Viplav

Main wapis ah raha hoon Dhani..

I ll be back my love .. for the colour of lshq is to hold on to what's ours..

For your Viplav is no quitter ,not one to walk away in the sunset!

I was born to give voice to the silent sufferings of the meek and lowly

My advantages I use to support the disadvantaged!

Dhani when you came in my life , I found the soul mate who would be my fellow fighter!

You changed my wild ways and I become stronger then before. You are my might!

When life was bleak, I was down..then you accepted me, raised me and held me

Recall my love, how our joint fights restored many wrongs!

Hark Dhani! recall our battles with blood and fire! ..

With the fire of our Ishq! and mine own blood !you became mine till eternity

Yes the gods willed the union of our souls... blessed me! and you became my other half!

We had our fair share of tears ! misunderstandings made us drink the poisoned chalice of separation!

Parting continues to divide us. .dhani listen to your heart it still cries out to me!

I return Dhani ..your heart continues to speak to me. But alas, you!! block me out

In your eyes I wronged you and in my eyes you wounded me too

But I return , today. Weakened, restore me, rebuild me, renew me

Dhani will you turn away the man who brought colour in your life?

Now mine is the life where colour resides no more

Let our flower, the symbol of our Ishq once more put a smile on my face

For you both are the force in my life. The calls of your hearts bring me back

As a weary traveller am I. In your arms I seek rest..

This demon uncle craves the hugs of his flower fairy!

Accept me then one more time! and hear me out Dhani..

Try tough you may, but the colour of our Ishq is white, pure.

Calm then your heart, be not morose Dhani..

You knew it all along your smile matters to me the most you

Viplav comes back to you , your love's captive comes to you

punish me ,destroy me or heal me .. only yours forever Viplav..

hamlet53 20.7.16

This is a pleasant.. amendment to my final take Swan Song.. which marked Mishal's exit from Ishq ka rang safed .. Preeti you pointed out the tone of the take needs to change. I have put something together.. hope readers accept it...

WOW..Hammie Dear, you are not just a fab writer, but a poet too...

what a comeback 😳...viplav mishal hammie❤️.with poetic version😳..waise kitne din hue😆😆...finally will be back to ur takes...this time regular😆😆

Dear hammie,hammie d poet here.now I must ask , are u a professional?would have asked if it was our first conversation.
I knew this side of urs.one day dared to explore d laagi forum n came across one of ur poems n it gave me such a heartache I stopped visiting d forum.u were so good with ur words hammie, made me cry my heart out.
Anyway unlike that one , this is full of hope n life.
I loved it.

When life was bleak, I was down..then you accepted me, raised me and held me
Recall my love, how our joint fights restored many wrongs!

My favourite lines.so true.
The ending is brilliant.


He is returning ,punish me ,destroy me or heal me .. only yours forever Viplav.I loved d ending.
He is returning with all of d emotions he had,
Returning to his beloved , like a tired bird returning to his nest, wants her to wait for him like before to open that box of complaints, like those nights five yrs back...a proper ending for d day,a midnight kiss...a lazy morning ,rays of hope and she playing with d light on his face...he wants to return.

Return for us.keep writing such poems sometimes, it is very refreshing,u can add them with ur takes too.

Originally posted by: simple2joy

Dear hammie,hammie d poet here.now I must ask , are u a professional?would have asked if it was our first conversation.
I knew this side of urs.one day dared to explore d laagi forum n came across one of ur poems n it gave me such a heartache I stopped visiting d forum.u were so good with ur words hammie, made me cry my heart out.
Anyway unlike that one , this is full of hope n life.
I loved it.

When life was bleak, I was down..then you accepted me, raised me and held me
Recall my love, how our joint fights restored many wrongs!

My favourite lines.so true.

He is returning , with all of d emotions he had,
Returning to his beloved , like a tired bird returning to his nest, wants her to wait for him like before , like those nights five yrs back...a proper ending for d day,a midnight kiss...a lazy morning ,rays of hope and she playing with d light on his face...he wants to return.

Return for us.I don't know.keep writing such poems

joya❤️...pls thoda aur poetry ...me greedy 😆😆

Originally posted by: Hamlet53

Mishal Raheja

as Viplav

Main wapis ah raha hoon Dhani..

I ll be back my love .. for the colour of lshq is to hold on to what's ours..

For your Viplav is no quitter ,not one to walk away in the sunset!

I was born to give voice to the silent sufferings of the meek and lowly

My advantages I use to support the disadvantaged!

Dhani when you came in my life , I found the soul mate who would be my fellow fighter!

You changed my wild ways and I become stronger then before. You are my might!

When life was bleak, I was down..then you accepted me, raised me and held me

Recall my love, how our joint fights restored many wrongs!

Hark Dhani! recall our battles with blood and fire! ..

With the fire of our Ishq! and mine own blood !you became mine till eternity

Yes the gods willed the union of our souls... blessed me! and you became my other half!

We had our fair share of tears ! misunderstandings made us drink the poisoned chalice of separation!

Parting continues to divide us. .dhani listen to your heart it still cries out to me!

I return Dhani ..your heart continues to speak to me. But alas, you!! block me out

In your eyes I wronged you and in my eyes you wounded me too

But I return , today. Weakened, restore me, rebuild me, renew me

Dhani will you turn away the man who brought colour in your life?

Now mine is the life where colour resides no more

Let our flower, the symbol of our Ishq once more put a smile on my face

For you both are the force in my life. The calls of your hearts bring me back

As a weary traveller am I. In your arms I seek rest..

This demon uncle craves the hugs of his flower fairy!

Accept me then one more time! and hear me out Dhani..

Try tough you may, but the colour of our Ishq is white, pure.

Calm then your heart, be not morose Dhani..

You knew it all along your smile matters to me the most you

Viplav comes back to you , your love's captive comes to you

punish me ,destroy me or heal me .. only yours forever Viplav..

hamlet53 20.7.16

This is a pleasant.. amendment to my final take Swan Song.. which marked Mishal's exit from Ishq ka rang safed .. Preeti you pointed out the tone of the take needs to change. I have put something together.. hope readers accept it...

Wau. I can only say that. Vauuu ...