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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: NusiSg

hi nus...sorry showed up so late generally busy at he home front

brilliant brilliant brilliant Hammie,,!!😃 cheers nus its called a quick shot!
absolutely fantastic dear,, the welcome cud never b better than ths,, ths is extravaganza,,❤️
!!😳love U fr ths poetic take on the current scenerion,,, every word every emotion is just magical hammie,, welcome bac to u too!!😳... thanks nus... a lot has happened in the episodes though... when mishal returns and I pick up on the takes... there will be a break in my takes .. but sigh... the episodes are slow and its like killing time till Mishal resumes shoot... parsiya remains behoosh..only last night he came around... we'll know whether he gives a statement for or against viplav... thanks nus for heaps of love and encouragement from you... hammie blessed... much love hammie... nus we are winning in CRICKET... I may live here but game mein mera dil aur rooh hamesha meri Pak team ke saath.... 👏 watching on telly is liye forum pe se off😆... yours forever cricket ,football and Mishal mad hammie

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Posted: 9 years ago
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@ thanks for reading and commenting fahmed... which pm? sorry hammie is not prompt in replying to pms mate... love hammie
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mishfan


hi mish... waited for your comment mate.... 😊
WOW..Hammie Dear, you are not just a fab writer, but a poet too...

Suuuperrr.. so pleased you enjoyed my creative piece
Excited for Mishal & for your takes once again...me thrilled to be back too ( like I ever left...LOL)
hummm... my heart sank when you said you were leaving... thrilled mishal coerced you back😉... keep smiling my friend and hammie waiting for the roar of the lion.. so my imagination can deliver too... much love hammie

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: neha_021


heloo neha good to see you 😊
what a comeback 😳...viplav mishal hammie❤️.with poetic version😳..waise kitne din hue😆😆...finally will be back to ur takes...this time regular😆😆
look thanks for reminding me ... hammie has missed writing many takes... from... saturday 16th july onwards... so 23rd july makes 7 takes groaning... iam watching prog so... me thinking .. kya karoon?? chaal leave me with my sooch... and lets see mishal kab wapis ata hai today friday 22nd? or sat 23rd?... watch this space mate... thanks for reading and commenting neha..much love hammie

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: simple2joy


helooo super vm maker... glad to know such a talented girl...
Dear hammie,hammie d poet here.now I must ask , are u a professional?would have asked if it was our first conversation. 😆 listen taz ,by now you know enough about me humm?
I knew this side of urs.one day dared to explore d laagi forum n came across one of ur poems n it gave me such a heartache I stopped visiting d forum.u were so good with ur words hammie, made me cry my heart out. yes... wrote a few there there was a great one I wrote about blind dutta practising figting with a sword ... amazing it was... cant remmber the title... will check my lappie if i have it saved.. and wtote one for IVY... INDU... friend and laagi forum member who is no more on IF in person... but still with me and other laagi friends...
Anyway unlike that one , this is full of hope n life.
I loved it.

When life was bleak, I was down..then you accepted me, raised me and held me
Recall my love, how our joint fights restored many wrongs!

My favourite lines.so true.
The ending is brilliant.


He is returning ,punish me ,destroy me or heal me .. only yours forever Viplav.I loved d ending.
He is returning with all of d emotions he had,

Returning to his beloved , like a tired bird returning to his nest, wants her to wait for him like before to open that box of complaints, like those nights five yrs back...a proper ending for d day,a midnight kiss...a lazy morning ,rays of hope and she playing with d light on his face...he wants to return.
your reply stumps me taz... this is just so profound... like NUS you too has a writer and poet in your some where... why not share some more verses that come to you?want more...
hummm???

Return for us.keep writing such poems sometimes, it is very refreshing,u can add them with ur takes too.
thanks for your fantastic comment ..especially the verses you wrote and now want you to write poetry too... other members would love to read your poems too... much love , your hammie

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mishfan


What a treat today...one poet to the other...poetry ke Baarish horahi hai aaj


thanks mish you too endorsed my wish...👏 love hammie
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: neha_021

joya❤️...pls thoda aur poetry ...me greedy 😆😆



yes neha you tell her too may be she'll come up with another one soon...👏 much love hammie
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Posted: 9 years ago
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@ zajenda helooo... thanks for reading the poem and commenting on it.. hammie pleased you enjoyed it.. much love hammie
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Dolly-heart


helloo dolly... listen thanks for the super party ... ate to my hearts delight
Hammie I am so happy for you and your beautiful poem to Viplav for his Ishq says it with such purity.

thanks so much .. my friend..
I will say this for you...
ohhh this is superb..👏 my humble translation..
Hoti hai kwaishein poori...
wishes are fulfilled.. for those
Jab ibaadat seh maangi hoh...
who seek with devotion..
Jaroorat seh jiyada miltah hai unikoh...
they receive beyond their requests..
Lets keep our fingers crossed that Viplav's coming back will give him strength to bring his love back and get rid of the thorn that ruined his life and our as fans with her entry...
yes... doll like you me too waiting for his return.. the thorn..in our side..hoping he will pull it out of his side..
Take care Hammie and ... Auroh seh to hameh patah nahin...

Hum aapke likhneh seh pyaar karteh hai...
aur.. you my readers and Mishal are the reason for my writing... yours as ever hammie

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