SS: It Was A Very Special Day [Part 3 and 4 UPDATED on page 4] - Page 3

Originally posted by: NusiSg

raho ge tum chhoti heee,,, jitna b zor laga lo,,,🤣

5000,,, hmmm saare successful hun?? kia ye zarori hai??😆 bata mje??

haan re Vip-Vidhu kal ka scene hav pushed u to write so beautifully I guess,, kal ka Vip-vidhu scene,,😳 chalo Raj ko b screen space mil gaya tere SS mai,,I so wanna see him bac,, lkn sad hume pershiya ko jhelna pad raha hai..🤔

chal tu jaldi likh 3 n 4, 😛

achcha kal post kar dungi..

edited!😆

last two parts on the next page😃

PART 3

I spent the next day counting hours.. when will my kids arrive and we will celebrate the special day together... and kamini and dhani were busy in the kitchen..

The clock struck 10pm when Dhani entered our bedroom.

"Where were u? I have been waiting for u"

"I was there in the kitchen.. Don't u know our children are arriving tomorrow..? No sooner will Vidhu-Arun and Atharva will arrive than they will start demanding for their favourite dishes.."

"Hey Dhani.. come lets go to the balcony"

We both came out and sat together on the swing.. She rested her head on my chest and I wrapped my arm around her shoulders and hold her tightly..

"Tomorrow is a very special day for us.. Do u remember how we both met for the first time?"

"Yes.. a drunk carefree guy had come to ask my age.. I was only 20 then"

"Then I had thrown red colours at your white saree and u, like an angry young lady, had given me the very special name Rakshash' "..

Both of us smiled recalling our old days..

"I can never forget those days Viplav.. U had filled my life with colours.. gave me the reason to live.. I love u Viplav.. I love u more than anything else in this whole world.. "

"I love u too my dear", I kissed her forehead.

"One more kiss.. Viplav!!"..

"U r mine .. aren't u? I will kiss u always.. Atharva calls us to be the most romantic parents"..

We kept silent for a few minutes, admiring the beautiful night in each other's arms..

"5 minutes to 12.. u wait here", I got up and went inside our bedroom to bring a brown box..

After 2 minutes I came back and again sat beside my lovely wife..

"what is there in it?", she was curious..

Wait for some more minutes..

I got up and stood in front of her... She was sitting on the swing and smiling.. I took her hands in mine and started counting,

"20, 19, 18,17... 5, 4, 3, 2, 1...", I pulled her up, hid her in my chest and whispered into her ear.. "Happy 50th Marriage anniversary, Mrs. Viplav Tripathi"..

She hugged me tightly and my shirt was soaking her tears...

"A Very Happy Anniversary Viplav", she tip-toed and kissed my cheek..

"Trying to be romantic.. haan Dhani??", She blushed and asked, "What is there in that box?"

"Ur anniversary gift darling"

She sat on the swing with the box and I too sat with her..

She opened it.. There were a lot of things inside..

A packet of red colours, a dozen of colourful bangles, a box of vermillion, a red saree and a diamond ring..

I took the packet of red colour and placed it on Dhani's palm..

"Red is the colour of Love.. The colour of my Love Is white.. As pure and fresh as the white colour.. but Red is the colour of ur love.. for I was the first one to colour ur white saree red"..

Next was a dozen of bangles... I helped her wear those.."These bangles look beautiful on ur hands.. U love bangles.. These are for u".

I took a pinch of vermillion and put it in her hair partings.. "This vermillion in ur partings means u r married and u r my wife.. Mrs. Dhani Viplav Tripathi".

"And lastly this diamond ring..", I made her wear it.. It was indeed looking perfect on her long fingers.."I love u Dhani"..

Tears were flowing down her cheeks and she did not care to wipe them away..

"U have made our every anniversary very special.. and this one is no less.. So many gifts for me.. But I want two more things from you.. Will u give it to me??".

"Yes off-course.. tell me what do u want??"

"I want to live the rest of my life with u till my last breath and I want u to bless me so that I can die before u.. Dhani cant even imagine a day without Viplav".

She bent down to touch my feet.. I pulled her in my arms.. "Don't talk about end.. we will die together"..

"U gave me the two most precious things in my life Viplav...Vidhu and Krish.. Thanks for that.."

"Those two are my jewels too.. Thank you for making me a proud father of such lovely children"..

Next part is just below

LAST 4

The next day since morning we all were waiting or our children to arrive.. I had called all three of them but no one received my calls..

"Don't worry.. they are in the airport so they did not receive ur calls", Kamini said seeing me pacing across the room..

After sometime the calling bell' rang and I got up from my sofa to open the door.. Kamini and Dhani rushed out of the kitchen to see which of our children arrived first..

I opened the door and OMG what a Wonderful Surprise..!!

5 people were standing together at the door with smiling faces with two little flowers- Vandana and Dhruv..

Dhani and me were shocked to see all three of our children standing together with their families at our door.. Our children rushed inside to hug us and all of them literally shouted..

"A Very Happy Married Anniversary To The Most Romantic Couple, Our Mamma And Papa" and our drawing room resounded with everyone's clap..

Abhi said, "It was mom's plan.. She had asked all of us to come together and give u a big surprise... We met at the Benaras Airport and came here together".

"thanks Kamini.. ", Dhani hold Kamini's hand.. and she smiled.

It was evening time.. our children had arranged a small party with the family members only.. Pankaj-Shalu and their son were also invited.. Dhani and I were made to cut a cake.. Dhani was blushing a lot..

"What was the need to do all these? We are an aged couple now"..

"mom stop this", Atharva complained..

"yes mamma is too boring.. just look at papa.. he is behaving like a 24 years young guy". Krish patted my back..

"I had met ur mamma when I was 24", I said.. Everyone smiled and Dhani face turned red..

"OMG mom is blushing hard". Atharva's wife Pooja teased..

It was at the dinner table.. Our whole family was sitting together.. Dhani and Kamini were too happy to have their kids and I was happy seeing my family happy and having a peaceful dinner together..

Dinner was over and we all were sitting together in our bedroom.

"Now its time to give mamma and papa their anniversary gifts", Krish sounded too excited..

Atharva shut him up and my flower fairy Vidhu stood up and started speaking..

"Since I am the only girl child of this family so I am starting first.. My dearest mamma and my dearest, loveliest, cutest, sweetest and most handsome Demon King, my papa, all ur three children have some very special gifts for both of u.." Everyone was looking at Vidhu while she was looking at Dhani and me.. I was wondering what kind of gift were we going to get from our kids..

"So the first gift which mamma and papa are going to get is from me and the gift is... Abhishekh's company has finally transferred him to this city.. So we will be shifting from Mumbai to Ayodhya Niwas by next month.. Do u like this gift? ", Vidhu smiled...

We were too happy to even express our happiness properly.. This was indeed the best news we did get in this year..

Atharva stood up, "Vidhu please take ur seat.. Now its my turn.. So papa and mom.. I had already broken the news two days back but let me repeat myself and this time in details... I have finally decided to settle down in India.. my company has also given me the transfer letter and I will be staying just a few kms away from benaras and I can come to meet u all every weekend.. So from next week every Saturday Sunday will be with my siblings and mamma-papa and mom, Now Krish has something for you".

Krish stood up scratching his head.." I don't have such great news to share.. neither I have enough money like the Ambanis to gift my parents a big helicopter".. Everyone laughed out loud..

"But after I complete my MBBS next year, I will no more stay in Delhi.. Papa u will have to get me admitted to the Benaras college of medical science.. My family will be coming here.. And I will not stay there, i am telling u.. please papa ".

"U have again started Krish.. stop ur never ending demands.. ", Vidhu scolded her brother lovingly..

"Don't scold our child Vidhu.. I am sure Dhani and Viplav both are very happy that Krish too wants to stay with us", Kamini came for his rescue..

"Mom is very good..", Krish hugged Kamini.. We hugged our children.. These three are the best gifts of our life... We will stay together.. What more can parents expect from their children..? We are lucky to have such sensible and loving children..

Everyone dispersed to their bedrooms leaving behind Dhani and me.. We were lying on our bed..

"I knew that Vidhu will go to Mumbai after marriage but I had never wanted Krish to stay away from me for such a long time.. and I had never wanted Atharva to go abroad for jobs.. Its great that abhi will get his transfer and all our three children will be staying close to us.. I am indeed the luckiest woman to have the best husband and such wonderful children".

"Kamini too wanted our children to be back.. I am also very happy.. Abhishekh and Pooja are not our Son-in-law and daughter-in-law.. They are like our own children who cares so much for their in-laws... this was the best anniversary so far.. isn't it?"

"And everything is because of you.. U had fallen in love with a simple widow and filled my life with happiness.. I could not have asked for more.. I don't know how did I get u in my life.. I will pray that every woman in this world should have a husband like Viplav.. I am the luckiest wife..".. Dhani rested her head on my chest and wrapped her arms around me.. I hugged her back..

"Thanks Dhani"

"For what?"

"For 50 years of ur company... Thank You very much for these 50 years of togetherness".

THE END😃😃

Gosh I missed it SS,, ye sab PTD k chakkar mai hoa,,😡🤢 sowwwiieee,, will read it abhi k abhi,,😳


UnRess..😳Ohh ss thoroughly loved reading ths brilliant piece of wrk dear.. so finally they grow older together... absolutely fantastic n a feel good kind of short story... 😳 giving us hope that yea love stories are meant fr happy endings at least in fiction so ur ss is gving me all new energies to wait with patience fr ViDha's logical ending.. n of course we viewers n those characters definitely deserve ths 'n they live happily ever after' wala fairytale end..😳😳


Thnk u fr writing fr us dear... ur my sweetie pie..❤️ love U..!

Originally posted by: Barbie_KK9629

PART 3

I spent the next day counting hours.. when will my kids arrive and we will celebrate the special day together... and kamini and dhani were busy in the kitchen..

The clock struck 10pm when Dhani entered our bedroom.

"Where were u? I have been waiting for u"

"I was there in the kitchen.. Don't u know our children are arriving tomorrow..? No sooner will Vidhu-Arun and Atharva will arrive than they will start demanding for their favourite dishes.."

"Hey Dhani.. come lets go to the balcony"

We both came out and sat together on the swing.. She rested her head on my chest and I wrapped my arm around her shoulders and hold her tightly..

"Tomorrow is a very special day for us.. Do u remember how we both met for the first time?"

"Yes.. a drunk carefree guy had come to ask my age.. I was only 20 then"

"Then I had thrown red colours at your white saree and u, like an angry young lady, had given me the very special name Rakshash' "..

Both of us smiled recalling our old days..

"I can never forget those days Viplav.. U had filled my life with colours.. gave me the reason to live.. I love u Viplav.. I love u more than anything else in this whole world.. "

"I love u too my dear", I kissed her forehead.

"One more kiss.. Viplav!!"..

"U r mine .. aren't u? I will kiss u always.. Atharva calls us to be the most romantic parents"..

We kept silent for a few minutes, admiring the beautiful night in each other's arms..

"5 minutes to 12.. u wait here", I got up and went inside our bedroom to bring a brown box..

After 2 minutes I came back and again sat beside my lovely wife..

"what is there in it?", she was curious..

Wait for some more minutes..

I got up and stood in front of her... She was sitting on the swing and smiling.. I took her hands in mine and started counting,

"20, 19, 18,17... 5, 4, 3, 2, 1...", I pulled her up, hid her in my chest and whispered into her ear.. "Happy 50th Marriage anniversary, Mrs. Viplav Tripathi"..

She hugged me tightly and my shirt was soaking her tears...

"A Very Happy Anniversary Viplav", she tip-toed and kissed my cheek..

"Trying to be romantic.. haan Dhani??", She blushed and asked, "What is there in that box?"

"Ur anniversary gift darling"

She sat on the swing with the box and I too sat with her..

She opened it.. There were a lot of things inside..

A packet of red colours, a dozen of colourful bangles, a box of vermillion, a red saree and a diamond ring..

I took the packet of red colour and placed it on Dhani's palm..

"Red is the colour of Love.. The colour of my Love Is white.. As pure and fresh as the white colour.. but Red is the colour of ur love.. for I was the first one to colour ur white saree red"..

Next was a dozen of bangles... I helped her wear those.."These bangles look beautiful on ur hands.. U love bangles.. These are for u".

I took a pinch of vermillion and put it in her hair partings.. "This vermillion in ur partings means u r married and u r my wife.. Mrs. Dhani Viplav Tripathi".

"And lastly this diamond ring..", I made her wear it.. It was indeed looking perfect on her long fingers.."I love u Dhani"..

Tears were flowing down her cheeks and she did not care to wipe them away..

"U have made our every anniversary very special.. and this one is no less.. So many gifts for me.. But I want two more things from you.. Will u give it to me??".

"Yes off-course.. tell me what do u want??"

"I want to live the rest of my life with u till my last breath and I want u to bless me so that I can die before u.. Dhani cant even imagine a day without Viplav".

She bent down to touch my feet.. I pulled her in my arms.. "Don't talk about end.. we will die together"..

"U gave me the two most precious things in my life Viplav...Vidhu and Krish.. Thanks for that.."

"Those two are my jewels too.. Thank you for making me a proud father of such lovely children"..

Next part is just below

The story is told in my taste. Thank you for this and please keep writing.

Originally posted by: zajedno

The story is told in my taste. Thank you for this and please keep writing.

thanks zaj😃

zaj, a request to u.. can u please edit ur comment and delete my story from it and just type and post ur comment.. it will reduce the space and it will be easy for me to read the comments..

Originally posted by: Barbie_KK9629

thanks zaj😃

you're welcome