SS: It Was A Very Special Day [Part 3 and 4 UPDATED on page 4]

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Hi.. Nothing much...😆 I came up with a crazy SS.. yes Its a crazy one.. i dont know why did i start writing like this.. But just wanted to share with u all..
Isi bahane I will get to interact with a few of my Dear People, I hope so.. Even if u dont want to read it then its fine but just come and post ur comment, that will be enough for me.. Will love to hear from you all..

So here i start.. But its tooo lengthy.. 😕 Sorry could make it shorter😕😕

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"Why don't u listen to me? I had told you not to sit outside.. Come inside and let me shut the windows.. You will catch cold", I said while wrapping the shawl around her.

"No please .. its not too cold.. Come and sit with me".

I looked at the beautiful wrinkled face of my wife.. She seemed to be weak but the broad smile on her face made her look gorgeous.. I took a seat next to her on the swing in our balcony. She rested her head on my shoulder and said, "I am feeling much better now.. U don't worry".

She had recently recovered from viral fever. I did not want her to fall ill again but she was not ready to listen to me. She had been sitting there in the balcony for the last 4 hours, busy knitting a red sweater..

I looked at the bundle of wool in her hands.. "Its too small.. Do u think it's the perfect size?"

"So what shall I do? Give him ur sized sweater to wear? This is perfect for a three years old child.. Do u think he will like it?", She showed me the half knitted beautiful soft sweater..

"Yes he will and his parents will love it too.. U are making it with so much love and care.. But what about...?"

She did not let me complete my sentence and spoke,"Yes yes I remember, I will gift her the pink teddy bear.. I have stitched it myself."

I brought her inside the bedroom and made her lie down..

"u take rest.. I will wake u up before dinner".

Lying on the bed, she opened her arms for me.. I bent down to her to hug her and kissed her on the cheek.

"I wanted a hug.. The kiss was not needed", she giggled, "How many times did u kiss me since the day we fell in love?"

I laughed out loud, "I will forget counting".

I switched off the lights of the room and came downstairs and entered the kitchen.. Kamini was busy preparing dinner with our maid.. She noticed me and smiled,"Did Atharva call u?"

"No.. I tried twice but network is not available.. I will let u know when he will call me.. BTW what r u preparing?"

"A very simple dinner.. Dhani wanted to come here and help but I had send her upstairs.. She is unwell but still wants to cook", she stopped for a few seconds, ".. for you.. She knows that u love eating food prepared by her but eat this for a few days till she recovers properly".

I went and stood beside her, put my hand on her shoulder, "Lets forget the past.. Our present is beautiful.. isn't it?"

She smiled at me, "Yes it is.. Ok now u go.. I have to prepare dinner"

I came out of the kitchen and sat in the drawing room with the newspaper.. My phone beeped.

1 new message from Atharva.

I opened the msg. It read:

Papa, I have been promoted to the post of the Project manager but I am not going to stay here.. My boss have asked me to rethink about my decision but its my final decision.

I will give priority to my happiness over money.. What is kept here in USA? Benaras is the most wonderful place in this whole universe. My parents are there.. So I am coming back. Pooja and ur little Vandana are very excited. We three will reach there within a week..

I took the right decision.. isn't it??

I typed my message, And what about ur job?

He replied, I will look after India's projects.. No more foreign trips till my parents are there in India..

We will wait for you beta.. I typed again and clicked the Send button.

I rushed inside the kitchen and informed kamini, "my son is returning"

"So he has finally decided to return from USA.. No one could convince him that USA is a much better place.. Stubborn kid I have"

"Yes he is like his father, he loves the lanes of benaras", I smiled.

Kamini looked at me with teary eyes..

"Now don't start again.. I am proud of my Atharva.. So what is ur problem? Are u jealous of father-son bonding? Why do u think he is only ur son?"

"yours too", kamini said and I again came back and sat on the sofa..

I had to call one more person.. but before I could dial her number, my phone ringed and I received the call..

"Hello my Demon King.. Muuuaahhh for u.. I am missing u.. Cant wait to reach u.. I have already packed our luggage. Are u missing me too?"

"Yes my fairy.. I am missing u the most in the whole world..I was just going to call u"

"And do u love me more than u love mamma..?"

"Yes yes I do love u more than I love ur mamma", I could not stop laughing at my daughter's question, " U come soon.. I will be waiting for my Shikayati Pudiya.. and what is ur prince doing?"

"He is playing papa.. and is very excited.. Abhi is sitting with his laptop checking the tickets..What about mamma and mom?"

"Mamma is sleeping and mom is in kitchen.. will u talk with her?"

I brought the mobile in the kitchen and she chatted with kamini for some time.. Kamini handed over the phone to me..

"Mamma is sleeping.. She will talk with u at night ok?"

"Ok papa.. we will meet soon.. byeee.. love you.."

"Love u too baby.. will wait for u".

I disconnected the call and comfortably sat on the sofa and looked at the ceiling..



PART 2 is just below

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PART 2


So many years had passed.. I still remembered every important incidents that had happened in my life, very clearly.. Viplav Tripathi, the carefree grandson of the richest man in the city, had fallen in love with a simple widow, got married to her fighting against everyone who had tried to separate us..

Then Kamini entered our life.. She was the sole reason for my separation with my beloved wife. I had lived 5 years like a dead soul, thinking my wife to be dead but alive within me.. Then destiny made me meet her again.. She was not even ready to clear away our MUs before she overheard Kamini's convo with Raj, my best friend.. Kamini was telling him about Atharva.. and Dhani came to know the truth that I had never spent any night with her.. Raj and kamini were in love with each other and Atharva was their kid.. Raj had passed away in a terrible accident and I had married his GF to support them.. Dhani had immediately returned to me.. I remember she had cried a lot, had asked for forgiveness for rejecting my love.. and We reunited forever.

When we had confronted kamini, she had agreed that she had always wanted Dhani to be out of my life for she wanted to live a luxurious life as viplav tripathi's wife.. after Raj's death, she became all the more worried about Atharva's future and so she had tried to keep Dhani and Vidhu away from me..

Kamini did not create any drama and quietly agreed to sign the divorce papers.. She had realised her mistake.. I was not ready to forgive her but my wife had convinced me to do so for Atharva was still my responsibility.. He was not only Kamini's child but Raj's too.. Kamini had wanted to go away but Dhani had stopped her.. And we had been living together since then..

After our first daughter, Vidha, Dhani had again given birth to a cute baby boy, our naughty prince, Krish..

I had been playing the role of a father for all the three kids.. they were lucky to have been brought up by two mothers.. And here I had a very sweet family..

Vidhu baby was the eldest of all.. She had got married to Abhishekh, a guy who I had chose for my fairy.. Vidha did not think twice before agreeing to marry him..

I still remember her wedding day.. I had gone to her room where she was waiting for the groom's arrival..

"Vidhu baby"

"Papa", She immediately jumped off her bed and hid herself in my chest..

"Hey why r u crying?"

"I will not marry him"

"Why?", I was really shocked.

"How will I sleep at night without getting a kissi from u?"

I had laughed at my daughter's innocent question.. "u will get a kiss from Abhi"

She cried out louder, "but I want a kissi from my Demon King"

"His kiss will also be sweet", She blushed at my comment and said, "yes like u have been giving ur sweet kisses to mamma".

It was my time to blush when Dhani entered the room..

"Ur daughter is just like you.. you both are having silly convos here and see the groom is about to arrive.. and Vidhu what has happened to ur make-up?"

I pulled both of them in my arms.. "My daughter looks like a princess even without makeup.. but baby u did not say what kind of a guy u want.. I chose Abhi for u and u did not question me even once.. Why?"

"U have chose him for me papa.. Mamma likes him.. Mom too likes my groom-to-be and my brothers are happy.. Do u think I can ask for more?"

I wanted to say her how difficult it would be for me to live without her but Dhani had asked me not to cry.. but how did I forget that Vidhu is my blood.. She looked into my eyes and said, "See mamma, papa is trying hard to hide his tears.."

Dhani could not hold back her tears and I understood then that I was also allowed to shed a few tears..

Krish came from behind and almost shouted, "Am I out of the family picture?"

He hugged her sister and both started teasing each other.. It was a sentimental moment indeed but my two jewels made it a light moment and we four had ultimately end up laughing hard.

Vidhu got married and after 2 years she gave birth to a cute baby boy.. Abhi-Vidhu had requested Dhani and me to choose a name for their kid.. We had fought for 24 hours and finally I had to give in to the truth that Dhani is my wife and the mistress of my life.. We had named our first grandchild "Dhruv", a name starting with the alphabet "D"..

Next time when Pooja gave birth to Atharva's child, we had chose the name "Vandana" for our new guest, a name starting with "V".

My three kids were staying away from Benaras.. Vidhu was living with her family in Mumbai.. Atharva was in USA but he had decided to return to India and stay with us and Krish was studying medical Science in Delhi.. He would be completing his studies within a few years and join a hospital in Benaras.

Kamini called me and I came out of my thoughts, She came in the drawing room and asked me to bring Dhani as it was time for dinner. I went upstairs to bring her...

We three were busy discussing about our kids while having our dinner..

Dhani said, "I had always wanted our kids to stay with us.. Good that Atharva is coming back".

"I want Abhi to get a transfer to Benaras..", Kamini was badly missing our daughter.

"So u both cant deny that my plan for this family reunion was not a bad idea. I want to see my whole family together, but a bit worried for Krish.. He will be travelling to benaras and I am sure he is not going to bring his books.. and next month he is having his exam".

"U please stop this Viplav.. My child is coming after a long time.. Don't say like this. He will perform well in his exams"

"After a long time? Dhani he was here only 3 weeks back", I could not stop smiling.

"But I want to live with you and my children", Dhani had tears in her eyes.

"I too want to see our children living with us".


To Be Continued...

Edited by Barbie_KK9629 - 9 years ago


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Reserved for the links to part 3 and 4😆😆
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Okk I kno,, special ppl mai main b hun,,❤️ thnk u sooo muchhh,, much needed OS,,😛 will read n cmmnt,,😳
UnRess.. 😃

Ohhh chhoti..so much maturity in ur writing re.. 😳 I loved how u actually shown them grown up together,,😳 ik sath..the frst scene was mesmerising indeed..!!😳
Raj ko bali chadha di..😆 bt yea I loved u keep it less bitter n less negative that's wat cv's need to copied frm u..!!😳 that out n out negativity killing the real essence fr sure n that's y I loved loved reading it thoroughly. .n now eagerly waiting fr 3rd n 4th.. update soon-ish..!! 😆 😳
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barb... you made my day special.. with this extremely endearing SS.. Even viplav,dhani, kamini's extended families that you portrayed caught my interest.. great read and the best bit is you intend to continue.. yes barbs do carry on.. Iam wondering what next? waise cvs ke liye aache ideas hain.. for the query whose child is Atharva and his back ground.. thanks for making my day special mate.. much love hammie..
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Hey Barbie 😃 might be ur choti vadhu in ur age but when it comes to writing u seems Badi Vadhu 😆😆 really liked ur way of story writing, very natural way of conversation btwn characters!!
Atleast Dhaani & Viplav united in ur story thank god!! why dont u delete the Kam character from ur storyline its just my opinion dear..

Have a Question... whos that Raj? Raj & Kam ka beta Atharva?

Y Viplav wanna save Kam?

Keep writing & making me think more 😃

Will comment more later on..

Good Job continue...
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Originally posted by: NusiSg

okk I kno,, special ppl mai main b hun,,❤️
REs,, thnk u sooo muchhh,, much needed OS,,😛 will read n cmmnt,,😳

yes yess beshak u r very special for me.. love u nus🤗 achcha thik hai.. u read and then edit ur comment
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Originally posted by: Hamlet53

barb... you made my day special.. with this extremely endearing SS.. Even viplav,dhani, kamini's extended families that you portrayed caught my interest.. great read and the best bit is you intend to continue.. yes barbs do carry on.. Iam wondering what next? waise cvs ke liye aache ideas hain.. for the query whose child is Atharva and his back ground.. thanks for making my day special mate.. much love hammie..

awww hammie my dear.. u r my first reader..😳 Nus reserved karke chali gayi thi😆😆
Thanks for a great comment bhau.. I am glad that u have read this story and forund it interesting..
keep reading my special mate.. hug for u🤗
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Baarbs baarbs baarbs baarbs ,
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Idhar aa ek huge hug for u meri sweetu.
Hammie asked me ki tune uske ss padli?I said not yet.so she said abhi jake padle bohat accha hain n yes it is indeed so beautiful.exactly perfect style of writing according to me.d emotions u portrayed was beautiful, u very smartly resolved d kamini issues...vidha viplab,atharva viplav bonding is as appalling as in d serial, n I loved vidha kiss awww at such an old age,ye vipu bhi na...
It seems u two ss have already started selecting names for ur personal army ,wo 10000wala 😉
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Originally posted by: nandyy55

Hey Barbie 😃 might be ur choti vadhu in ur age but when it comes to writing u seems Badi Vadhu 😆😆 really liked ur way of story writing, very natural way of conversation btwn characters!!

Atleast Dhaani & Viplav united in ur story thank god!! why dont u delete the Kam character from ur storyline its just my opinion dear..

Have a Question... whos that Raj? Raj & Kam ka beta Atharva?

Y Viplav wanna save Kam?

Keep writing & making me think more 😃

Will comment more later on..

Good Job continue...

sis.. thanks for appreciating dear..😳
ok so coming to ur questions.. I did not delete Kamini becoz i have seen there is so much hatred for this evil character.. so tried to be a little bit positive and make her a good soul.. 😆 but dont worry she will have very less scenes😆😆😆
Raj and Pankaj are Viplav's two best friends.. Dont u remember raj?? that guy with a little beard.. he used to address viplav as Guru..
and viplav dont want to save kamini.. as we all know dhani has a big heart.. she is ready to forgive even her biggest enemy so she had forgiven Kamini and viplav too did it for artharva's sake .. and atharva was kamini's biological son so viplav had kept both kam and atharva with him for they are his best friend's Girlfriend and son..😆😆
keep thinking and reading😃

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