' VIDHA SS ' HUM TUM ' UPDT PART 3 Pg 8 add 27 apr - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ohhh Hum tum..😳
That's nyc.. plz continue. .😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: Ksfandishi

Nice start! So dhani and viplav will be enemies i guess...will wait for the next part

And thanks for the pm.



thank you for comnent yes they are
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chill story, looking good...
Keep us updated please
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24
Hello guys first of all sorry to updt late .

I was not active for three or four days , saturday i loss my chacha so was busy in all work n also for doing some ritual too , this year it forth family member i been loss since year has start , every month im losing one member of my family it hard but it life .


Guys sorry if there will be any mistake or wrong spelling words ok .


Here we go do please like n comment too .


Hum Tum

Shot 2


It begins where it end with viplav n the group , where viplav say


V " I just hope she is not like Chikayat ki pudiya " .


Forth look at him with laugh they said " Chikayat ki pudiya ? who is she " ; with confused face .


He put his arm on raj shoulder n reply them " Han thi ek meri dost , she last year of collage , she join it , i make friend to her , we become good friend , we used to perform for college , we were top in every things , we used to shared our lunch if im late , i used to call her chikayat ki pudiya , she used to saw every mistake in every things , that why i call her like this , now we are the worst enemy now " .


Raj " Viplav knowing you , im sure you must did something right ? ".


Viplav in his antic style reply " Yes i agree i did lots of things which she dont like but , she insult me in front of others n i did'nt did any thing intentionly , she accuse me blame me , she dont accept her fault n want me to accept , for her i have listen what ever she said , she is such a egoistm , she can give lecture too , she think she is only one who know things , she look innocent out side but actually she is not , she too is a such a cheep girl , nakchari ziddi hai , with her apperance she can fool any boy , if girls cant resist seeing me , its my fault , if girls want to spend time with me it my fault , if i saw her i will surely kill her " ; in anger .



Same time dhani was coming toward them , viplav was giving her back , as she reach to them viplav mob fall down , he bent to lift it n hear her voice but ignore it .



As her stand n both was face to face , both shout loudly " TUM yahan ? " ; both glare each ever in anger pointing finger to each ever .



The four at the same times they ask " Tum dono ek doosre ko jane te ho ? " with confused faces .


Vidha same time reply " Chikayat ki puriya , raksas hai yeh " ; both turn there face .



Raj n suresh " To yeh hai egoeism , ziddi cheep nakchari ladki " .


Dhani get more furious on hearing it n glare at him with so anger like she will kill him right away .



viplav hide his face with his palm n did a no sign to them .



Tina n sunita " Iss ka matlab , yehin woh batamiz , cheep , play boy flirting ladka hai bahot ego wala hai " .



Viplav become red in anger n glare her with his big eyes , he close his punch .


Dhani saw it n get fear n she was in fume of rage too as he too said bad thing on her , she broke the tension on saying " So you follow me here too ? " .



V " Oh hello , dont think im so interested to follow girl like you got it , dont think i will be same like before with you , if only you accept your fault then i can think " .



D " What accept my fault , which fault han ? you did wrong n its me who should accept wow raskas , you are still the same " ; in a tone n fold her arms .


V " You too did not change still same chikayat ki pudiya , n nakchari i was right to name you like this " ; he wink at a girl who was passing .



D " Even you are the same raksas " .


Both cont their argument , showing anger to each ever , forth try to stop them but in vain , until raj shout " shup , ek dam chup tum do no yaar " .


Both stop n glare at each ever , suresh ask then why you both dont tell us how you both turn enemy that will be more good , n others too join suresh on asking them .


Both look at each ever with anger n say ok will tell you how n told them .


FLASH BACK OF TWO YEARS AGO IN COLLEGE ST DENIS IN BHOPAL .


Dhani join the college wearing salwar kameez as a simple girl , wearing glasses , doing her one tress of her hair , she was looking like benji type girl , all laugh at her , but viplav who came n make friend to her ask ask others to stop laughing at her , viplav was the most handsome guy charming , who love to make others laugh n happy , all girls love to be his girl friend even for one night , he like to talk straight way not to hide things , he love all those fake love which he got from girls , to please them he accept to spend even thirty mins with them , girls used to call him vip .


Viplav make friend to her n make her join his group too , she feel comfortable around him , his friendship means a lots for her , he make her feel special , they act together on stage , do performance of dance .


One day on lunch day viplav did not take food in canteen n have in same plate of dhani n told her just chill bab"s , she feel awkward as no body did this before but , happy to see some one like her the way she was , she used to lecturer him on girl , not to ruin girls life or play with their emotions , viplav who like modern girl , who look sexy beautiful too .


One day a girl name riya taunt her , on her looks n even told her if she think viplav love her it her imagination , viplav love sexy hot modern girl not like her benji type n ask her to stay away from viplav as she love viplav he is hers .


On saying this to her she felt bad n hurt but soon feel relief as viplav came other there , he shout to the girl to taunt dhani n ask her , viplav clear riya mind that he never love her , nor will as for him all this is just to fun not more , for him life is to enjoy not to fall in love with girl to spend all life with same girl , girl have made to have fun with boy like him , yes he like beautiful sexy hot girl .


That day make dhani realize what type of boy viplav is , a good boy n same time dont have any feeling toward a girl n his thought on girl is wrong n he is just a play boy , she try a lot to change his point of view other girl , which used to irritate him but never hurt her on telling her ., some time she used to feel jealous when girls is around him .


Before last exam there was indian day festival , all students need to in indian look , like girls in saree , salwar kamez , bindi on forehead , tika , bangles ect , boys in kurta dhoti n sherwani ect , there was also a show which students take parts too , even vidha did to dance in one sing n dance too .


That all wear indian outfits , other girls was waiting to know on dhani look , viplav was in balck sherwani with a blue border , he was looking more charming n handsome too , he was so inpatient to know how dhani will look n what she will wear .


Dhani enter wearing a black n blue saree , her loos hairs , tika on forehead , bindi , bangles black n blue , her blouse with a short sleeves , we could see little of her bare back from her blouse , less make up , her lips with rep lipstick , her bare waist , she was in a totally sexy attire , all boys was only eyeing her , even girls was surprise to see her new look how she was totally difference from every day .


When viplav saw her he was lost in her beauty true beauty of any indian girl , his gaze was just on her , he feel some thing strange for her for first time , for him he wanted her to stay with him whole life , his heart was beating so fast , what was that feeling from his heart , he could not understand it , he was feeling jealous too on seeing other boys stares her beauty or praise her , even if it was from their group boys .


Viplav go to her " Wow im so impressed with this new dhani hmm , you are looking stunning im must say really dhani you are looking the most beautiful girl here , im not flirting but it true you are looking outstanding believe me , whom you are intention to kill han , im already dead with you " ; with his sexy hot smile 🤢 n hit her shoulder .


Dhani was touch with his talk n his praise for him , she feel shy n blushing too☺️ " Thank you viplav , to make me feel special , if i look like this every it never look different when it should be , even i can be look beautiful if i want but , i dont like to show off my beauty like others girls , even you are looking dam hot today in this shrewani , but im sure your mind did not go in wrong thought on me han ? " ; she look at him with a different way like a lover look .


V " Hey see our combination how it match , are you ready to perform in this saree dhani , you will not have any problem ? " .


D " Yes it match good , no i wont have any problem , if i will have you are here to handle me right ? " .


Both was comfortable with each ever , they hold hands to go to perform on hearing their names , with smile on face 😃 .


THAT IT GUYS FO RTHIS UPDT PLEASE HIT LIKE BUTTON N LEAVE YOUR HUMBLE COMMENT TOO 😃.


NEXT ; VIDHA DANCE ON GERUA OR JANAM JANAM FROM DILWALE 😕


I LET YOU CHOOSE WHICH ONE YOU WANT OR SUGGEST ME OTHER SONG THE ONE WHICH WILL BE MORE I WILL DO ON IT GUYS YOUR CHOICE NEEDED 😕


THX


LOVE HANSA 😃

Edited by --HANSA-- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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UPDT PART 2 ABOVE HAVE A LOOK
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Posted: 9 years ago
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so sorry Hansa
asusual i enjoyyed reading the vidha story. Thank you
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sura123


so sorry Hansa

asusual i enjoyyed reading the vidha story. Thank you



thank you so much for comment
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Posted: 9 years ago
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sorry to late comment i forget it sorry

it superb love it yaar the way both was it look theh were in love as for sing any one will go for me
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
I readboth the parts dear...nice n cute story...Please waiting for more...

Im sorry to hear about ur chacha too!!!May his soul rest in peace.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: hana_y

sorry to late comment i forget it sorry

it superb love it yaar the way both was it look theh were in love as for sing any one will go for me



thank you hana it ok i understand

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