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anjaliiii

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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

like it.. waiting for your next take

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--HANISA--

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: mehraan
I readboth the parts dear...nice n cute story...Please waiting for more...

Im sorry to hear about ur chacha too!!!May his soul rest in peace.

thank you for comnent n read it im glad

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REVATHI RADHAKRISHNAN

@revathirk

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Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Hey luved ur part 2... So dey wer best frnds...!!!!

Actually I was waiting for u next part ..n sorry for d late reply...😊

Enjoyed der nokk jhok..😆

Waiting for d next part to c wat happened btwn dem 😊

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adhiabhi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#34

hi dear, just read it. very nice story . please continue😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: anjalivasudev
like it.. waiting for your next take

thank you for comment

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Wanderlust

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Posted: 9 years ago

#36

hey thanks for alerting me...i did not know where was this thread..may be lost in the 6th-7th page...

so now i read it...very cute story...very nice..enjoyed reading it...👏👏

and so sorry to hear about ur uncle...may his soul rest in peace...its really pathetic...u lost four family members?...OMG😲 may god give u and ur family the strength because life and time will not stop...stay fine my dear...and take care

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Wanderlust

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Posted: 9 years ago

#37

we already got Vidha's Gerua dance...so u can write the Vidha performance on the other one...lets see which song gets the most no of votes😃

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--HANISA--

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: adhiabhi
hi dear, just read it. very nice story . please continue😊

thank you

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Posted: 9 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: Barbie_KK9629
hey thanks for alerting me...i did not know where was this thread..may be lost in the 6th-7th page...
so now i read it...very cute story...very nice..enjoyed reading it...👏👏

and so sorry to hear about ur uncle...may his soul rest in peace...its really pathetic...u lost four family members?...OMG😲may god give u and ur family the strength because life and time will not stop...stay fine my dear...and take care

thank you yes it hard but life goes on

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--HANISA--

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Posted: 9 years ago

#40

Hi guys feel sorry to see less of like n comment but it ok may be you are not liking my work .

Let me know then i wont cont it guys .

Im not well that why im being little away im on bed due of illness but want to give you updt im doing it .

Sorry if there will be mistakes in spelling .

Here we go

Hum Tum

Shot 3

It begin with

Vidha was going toward the stage , viplav get a call , he smile on seeing the flash name n take it .

Viplav " Hello my sexy sushma darling , missing me han ? " ; in his antic style .

Dhani get furious , curious n feel jealous on seeing talking this way to other girl , so comfortable n look happy as he know her long ago .

V " Oh you call me to wish me how sweet of you my sweet darling , you take so care of me love you sushma , ok by im going to perform bye sweetheart " ; did a kiss to sushma .

Dhani who did not wait longer n ask " Who is this sushma han ? " ; act as normal .

Viplav who feel she was jealous of sushma n he decide to act as a lover for sushma n " Oh she is my darling , sweetheart , my life n love , she too love me a lot , even being married , you know im with her every day , after my cours im there with her , before coming here , i should see her face first " ; with his cute smile n stare her from corner of his eyes how she was red in jealousy .

Dhani who could not bear him praise another girl in front of her " How disgusting you are viplav , you dont spare married woman chi , i feel shame on you , for being friend with you " ; she look angry furious on him .

" Dhani how it can be my fault only han , why disgusting on me yaar , it my fault if im so cool handsome good looking hot charming guy han , are you having problem with it ? " ; stare her in a deep looks , he get hint she has a feeling for him , which he like it .

" Why will i have problem with it , if you love her , why not dance with than with me han , n why you never talk on her to her nor you introduce her hmm why ? " , in rage as she can hit him anytime due of jealousy .

Viplav was enjoying it how he is teasing her " How she can come to dance in this age dhani , she wont be able to dance on a romantic dance with me , she is elder to me " .

" Oh it now you are thinking of age han , when you are fooling her you did not care of it n now you are ashame chi , you are a big flirter , go i wont dance now " .

" Dhani she not girl in your age , n stop talking as you are my girlfriend , or should i think you are jealous of her , she can be close to me n not you that why , you are being jealousy hmm , good nice i could seen this figure too wow , have you falling in love with me hmm ? " ; he talk slowly near her ear with his smile .

In stemmars dhani reply to him n try to hide her face to him " Why i will be jealous of her , do what you want , it do nothing to me , im not your girlfriend also , we arw just friend nothing more , go with her do what ever you want it does nothing " ; she was cont talking he cut her on saying .

" She is my mother sushma tripathi , whom i love a lot , i call her sushma , happy now han " .

Dhani who feel embarrassed now n say " Maa ... mah tumhari , im sorry i talk to much , but its all your fault not mine , im sorry ok lets go " ; she feel relief now .

Viplav wanted to know more on her feeling as he know he start have a feeling toward her but dont want to spoil it with any small things n decide to show all his feeling toward her in their pergomance .

The audiences was excited to see vidha perfomance , the stage was looking very romantic , there was decoration , n a banch .

Music start we saw dhani sitting on banch n viplav come , bent on his knee with rose in one hand forward to her n other hand on his back with smile romatic style he start the song .

Janam janam janam saath
Chalna yunhi
Kasam tumhe kasam aake
Milna yahin

Ek jaan hai bhale do
badan ho judaa

Meri hoke hamesha hi rehna
kabhi na kehna alvida

Meri subah ho tumhi
Aur tumhi shaam ho
Tum dard ho tum hi aaraam ho
Meri duaaon se aati hai bas ye sadaa
Meri hoke hamesha hi rehna
Kabhi na kehna alvida

Aha ha ha...

Meri hoke hamesha hi rehna
Kabhi na kehna alvida

She take the flower n foward her hand to him , viplav stand n she too stand , both walk holding each ever hand n look at each ever eyes , he make her turn n pull her to him , he hug her from back , his hands trace her hands upward in a sensual way , she lost in his touch , he caress her hand to face with flower .

Teri baahon mein hai
Mere dono jahaan
Tu rahe jidhar
Meri jannat wohin
Jal rahi agan
Hai jo ye do tarfa
Na bujhe kabhi
Meri mannat yehi
Tu meri aarzu , mein teri aashiqui
Tu meri shayari , tu meri mausiqi

Talab talab talab bas teri hai mujhe
Nashon mein tu nasha
Banke ghulna yunhi
Meri mohabbat ka
Karna tu haq ye adaa
Meri hoke hamesha hi rehna
Kabhi na kehna alvida

Meri subah ho tumhi
Aur tumhi shaam ho
Tum dard ho , tum hi aaraam ho
Meri duaaon se aati hai bas ye sadaa
Meri hoke hamesha hi rehna
Kabhi na kehna alvida

Aaa... alvida ...
O... na na...

Dhani turn to him n face him , she caress his face with en intence look with sensual attire , she go to his back n hug him from back , then both hand was on other one head n turn , he lift her up , while she came down both gazr each ever deeply , he trace her neck with his finger , give her pleasure n shiver too , they dance slow type , his hand on her bare waist , her hand on other hand of him , she go away , he hold her pallu n pull her slowly until she reach close n he turn her around , she reach to him on his chest , hair on her face , he remove hair on her face , both get intence eyeslock , they become more close to each ever , his hand on her waist , pulling her more close , their face was so close , they were lost in over world , her eyes was close , he gaze her face her lips cheeks , he wanted to taste her lips , he was about to kiss her , when all claps for them n ask once more , she realize how she was so close to him n she lost in his charm .

Both feel embarressment , she was going n her pallu stuck in viplav watch n her pallu fall which they could see her blouse , viplav remove it from his watch n she saw it in his hand , she feel he did it delibery n in anger patack to viplav , she slap him in front of others she leave there .

Viplav who get angry on her act n that too he is innocent , he follow her as he reach to her outside the stage , he hold her arm n turn her in fume .

Viplav " What you did han , why this slap me , what you think of yourself , say sorry right now " .

Dhani " Guys like you deserve this slap to be in right path , n its your fault you should say sorry n you are asking me wah " ; with her big eyes .

" When you dont know exactly dont talk ok , arey your pallu stuck in my watch its my fault han ? , n what you means to bring guys like me in right
path han , who lost the while we dance han me or you , who was showing the desire me or you , n it me who is bad , chikayat ki puddya ho tum , every time have a chikayat for me " .

" You are raksas then , who know only to fool girls , play with their emotions , i think you as a friend n today you try to , used me too , you were about to kiss me yes or no ? " .

" Yes i agree i was about to kiss you , it all because of you , you close your eyes when you were close to me , i could not resist your beauty but i never wanted to do wrong believe me " .

" See you are raksas you put your dirty eyes on your friend , i used to have faith on you but not any more raksas ".

On seeing him raksas , he get more furious n angry , he hold her arms so tightly n " How dare you to call me raksas , you want to know , what a raksas can do han , you think i will tolorate your talk han , you are my friend right ? that you said but why you ask lots of quest on my mum call han , who was showing her jealousy me or you , until i did not told you it my mum you did not stop , tell me if friend act like you did , if i want i can do any thing with you , but you wont be able to stop me , you know why ? , you have fall in love with me , why you are angry your pallu slip or i could not kiss you han " ; he leave her arms n turn his face .

Dhani was unable to bear his talk n she turn him on saying " You think im in love with you , its better i love some one who is hadicap than a play boy like you , i will never love some one like you , you only think of girls that it with dirty mind , you dont deserve to have a girl love , you know only broke heart not to unite heart , see even now your eyes are on my waist , what a cheep man you are chi " ; she cover her waist .

Viplav push her on the wall n block her way , he was in rage with her talk , he talk " What you think of yourself han , you are look pretty , that any boy will fall for you han , yes im a cheep boy what will you do , if i want i can misbehave with you right now , you could not stop me , , yes i want to get you but not the way you are thinking of , yes i stare at your waist what will happen , your mole attract me its my fault , you know what is your problem , you think every one is like you , every one should think likes love as you right , why you dont have any boy friend im sure the way you are n im damn sure you wont get any one to fall in love you ; He realize he talk a lot n say " Im sorry dhani i did not mean it im really sorry " ; he turn to go as he hurt her .

She hold his hand , in a tone n showing him finger " From today we dont know each ever viplav tripathi , the friendship which we shared i will broke it , dont you dare to try to talk to me stay away our path is different from now , you said what you wanted thx a lot " ; with wet eyes .

Viplav " Its good you broke it overwise i would do it , i prefer to spend time with that hot sexy girl than a benji type girl like you , our road is different n i n will pray to never see your face nor cross with you " ; his heart was in pain for being rude to her , if you want to keep your ego then me too , his eyes too was wet .

Both walk in different way , they never see nor cross other path until college finish last day they saw little clips of each ever like viplave on seeing he touch a girl hand n kiss it , Dhani talk n laugh loudly with some one else but they did not talk to each ever n they leave college with heavy painful hearts .

End of Flash back

Forth realize both must have a week connection to each ever as their eyes talk a lots .

Vidha stare other one with anger 😡 n walk in different way .

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THAT ITS GUYS HOPE YOU WILL LIKE N WILL LEAVE YOUR COMMENT , WHICH I WILL WAIT .

THX

HANSA

Edited by --HANSA-- - 9 years ago

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