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Kiran

@kiranpri

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Posted: 9 years ago

#81

Hi Mehru,

Just read all three chapters of your SS. Just love the intensity and passion depicted. In fact I wanted something like this to happen in the serial itself. Some passionate encounters, Tadapna on both sides, Anger and passion. The part when you mention the Uttarah was just oumph.. That was a below the belt phrase, but very much needed, to bring out the junoon of Viplav and for Dhaani to feel the effect. Our serial hero is much too easy going in that sense.

A gal usually likes her man strong, virile as well as understanding.

The way you listed all the points where Vip started losing trust in Dhaani explains his seething anger.

Now waiting for the passionate kiss, how will this happen?

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mehraan

@mehraan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: pearl100
Hey mehr ek request hai jab vip dhani kiss karenge toh unke hontho ke beech hanth pav naak mat lana😆😆 khul ke kare jo bhi karna hai unhe😉 cvs are like itne trp me itnaich milega 😆😆

Sorry im seeing ur comments now...Mera Ss ka post kaha hai mujhe khud nahi pata...

Na dont worry I will maje it sizzling n capturing for u...😆

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mehraan

@mehraan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: Sky23
Ttgreat please continue

Yup sure..I will soon!!😃

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mehraan

@mehraan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: Ilin
Lovely story.., please update soon.. Cant wait to read more 😃

Thanku Lin...I will update soon...im working on it😃

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mehraan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: custodian75
Lovely SS. Very emotional. The last part where dhani feels that she is throwing her self respect for love and decides to end the relationship was heart wrenching. Hope good sense prevails and viplav realises the truth.

Thanku so much...ur comments means a lot to me...yes im an emotional person too n I wwanted exactly depict the emotions of how a heartbreak happens n a relationship ends...its just a small attempt from my side to bring tat out...

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mehraan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: kiranpri
Hi Mehru,
Just read all three chapters of your SS. Just love the intensity and passion depicted. In fact I wanted something like this to happen in the serial itself. Some passionate encounters, Tadapna on both sides, Anger and passion. The part when you mention the Uttarah was just oumph.. That was a below the belt phrase, but very much needed, to bring out the junoon of Viplav and for Dhaani to feel the effect. Our serial hero is much too easy going in that sense.
A gal usually likes her man strong, virile as well as understanding.
The way you listed all the points where Vip started losing trust in Dhaani explains his seething anger.
Now waiting for the passionate kiss, how will this happen?

Thanku so much kiru...I always look up for ur comments...it means a lot to me!!😃

Yes I was dying to see the intense separation track n some of those moments where they would feel n realize how difficult is to cope up widout each other...So I took up to writing it...Kya karey...I strongly felt I should take it out from my.mind n this is how it is here...Though I felt I couldnt write but this Vidha compelled me to...

I had to write that uttarah..n believe me I was going

thru the old episodes n that uttarah n chadawa used in the sec episode is my fav...it clicked me that I should use it!!!im trying to stick to the original characterization of the show...

Thanku kiru once again...

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Kiran

@kiranpri

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: mehraan

Thanku so much kiru...I always look up for ur comments...it means a lot to me!!😃

Yes I was dying to see the intense separation track n some of those moments where they would feel n realize how difficult is to cope up widout each other...So I took up to writing it...Kya karey...I strongly felt I should take it out from my.mind n this is how it is here...Though I felt I couldnt write but this Vidha compelled me to...

I had to write that uttarah..n believe me I was going
thru the old episodes n that uttarah n chadawa used in the sec episode is my fav...it clicked me that I should use it!!!im trying to stick to the original characterization of the show...

Thanku kiru once again...

Hi Mehru. Just reached home now. Thanks for the reply. I also look forward to your posts as they are naughty and I feel we are on the same wavelength. I love the smouldering passionate lovestory and Vidha is slowly getting there.

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StoriesDrama

@StoriesDrama

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Posted: 9 years ago

#88

Hi mehran... hope you get time to update on this soon... good work. Thanks.

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mehraan

@mehraan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: StoriesDrama
Hi mehran... hope you get time to update on this soon... good work. Thanks.

Thanku Stories drama...

I love reading ur comments posted in the forum n I feel blessed tat I got one here ..Thanku...

Yup sure I promise I will do the update this week itself...im hardly getting time with my kids xams gping on n the forum activity is keeping ne busy...but I will surely try!!!