The Fateful Evening...Arjun Draupadi OS Thread.3

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ltelidevara

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Posted: 7 years ago

#551

Gandhari said." Though I could not see your face I could feel ..the change. What happened Kunti?

Kunti closed her eyes.She felt the touch of Krishna still on her eyes. The moment he did so she sensed her conscience..her mind travel back to that Fateful Evening...when she made the decision along with her Eldest..

There she is the new bride.. standing in a corner with face bent downwards.What must have been her thoughts hearing the decision..

Then she did not bother but now she is witnessing the scene before her eyes. Is it a miracle of Kanha?

Panchali 's lotus eyes are mirrors of her heart..and who lives in her heart? Doesn't she know?

Kunti could even see the way she looked at her sons.. She looked at Yudhishtir with reverence,at Bheem with warmth,and at twins with affection.

But she Kunti blindly told her daughter in law in Hastinapur that she looked at them with equal interest.

So who is at fault? She the mother failed to be a mother to that bride who entered with dreamy eyes.

Kunti sighed heavily.. That is not all. She turned blind eye when Draupadi suppressed herself to be the wife of Yudhishtir...in true sense.

Kunti stood at the door ..Indraprasth Royal palace was decorated for Draupadi's nuptials with Yudhishtir. There she is.. looking extraordinary... Priyamvada's face is dull..she walked past her taking away the big garland of jasmines ...Why did she not wear jasmines? She is ruthless.. to ask ..she overlooked her feelings..but ..again the mirror is showing the truth..

Despite looking every inch beautiful...Draupadi 's face lacked the feel.. she took her hand and felt it cold.. She told her..' Every girl faces this.. tension excitement..Don't worry it is your good fortune that you got my Eldest as your husband. Serve him well. Make him happy..

She did not bother to see her expression ...but now she could see..the face..the eyes ..what did they say...that she is crushing her heartfelt love to offer herself ...the jasmines did not find place in her curly hair... Kunti felt the moisture on her delicate palm yet again..

To be continued shortly...

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ltelidevara

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Posted: 7 years ago

#552

Gandhari touched Kunti's hand..Share it with me.. Why are you silent?

Kunti replied in a shivering tone.." Pooling up courage Didi.. Your Kunti whose steely resolve paved the way for her sons to establish themselves as the rulers...whose quick decision to share her Bahu among her five sons resulted in unity of the brothers now faces the truth unveiled before her eyes. The curtain that prevented her to see the real feelings of her Bahu is burnt by the fire of truth..

Gandhari said... Good for you.. it should happen..but it happened at the last phase of your life. Otherwise you would have offered solace to that innocent girl who is most effected by your decision..

Kunti did not say anything..She still did not come out of the revelations that she came across last night.. She want to relive the night..

The Indraprasth royal palace celebrated the news of Arjun's marriage with Subhadra... Kunti is on cloud nine. Her Phalgun turned her dream true.. Subhadra her coveted niece will enter Indraprasth as the coveted Bahu...

Priyamvada came there to give her milk. Kunti asked with surprise." Where is Bahu? Why did you bring? She did not attend morning puja also.

Priyamvada had a grim expression on her face.. She did not open the doors yet... yesterday afternoon her chamber was closed...When the news of Arjun's marriage with Subhadra was announced...

Kunti fumed at her." Why did you let her do so? Is it a new thing if he married again? My other sons brought wives..she was fine.. Priyamvada she must be unwell..don't draw conclusions..

Priyamvada looked at her with despair and said.. If you want to deceive yourself do so. I said the fact.

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UnmeshaAcharya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#553

Heart touching updates di!!finally kunti realised !!! Waiting for the next update

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Devhooti mishra

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Posted: 7 years ago

#554

Heartwrenching di... Painful... I just can't tell what it feels like... So so so feeling bad... Why only acknowledging draupadi's pain... What about her own son... Arjuna... Di... I really want Kunti to feel the guilt the ultimate realisation strike her... The pain through which ardi has gone through that cannot be realised precisely but I want Kunti to understand what she and her eldest did to draupadi n Arjuna...

N what was her thought that Panchali was interested in all five Brothers... 🤢 n that yudhi Panchali first night... Sorry to say most indigestible moment for me... I feel like... I dunno myself...

By the way... U r charismatic di... So imoactful n gripping were both the updates...

Now plz di update the next part soon soon soon di please di

Thanks for such masterpiece n touching updates...

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ltelidevara

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Posted: 7 years ago

#555

Panchali is serving ...the dinner is in progress. After one and half day she opened the doors much to the relief of every one..

Bheema asked her with concern." If you are indisposed there is Rajavaidyaa to help you. Or is it for different reason ...Arjun's marriage with Subhadra..

It has nothing to do with Bahu's illness. Bheem don't think in such ways...Kunti who entered declared firmly.. Draupadi raised her eyes and looked at her for a split second...Then she moved ahead to serve..

Kunti now understood the look...not then.. the look that revealed her pain,her despair,her disappointment.. Then she brushed it off as nothing significant..

Subhadra's arrival.. Panchali did Aarti.. She Kunti was immersed in pampering Subhadra. But she now remembered the eye lock that spelt the truth.. Arjun's besotted look..Panchali's angry glance..and Panchali still gazing at Arjun through the Aarti flame...She noticed it but..overlooked..

Kunti wiped her tears and lead Gandhari inside.. She made her relax on the bamboo asan... Gandhari took her hand and stopped her.." Kunti.. immensely grateful to almighty for making you realise the true love... Whatever wrong you did will be wiped off with your tears.

Kunti came to her hermitage her mind still is under the spell of past night's revelations..

Panchali 's whole demeneur changed with Phalgun's arrival..Twelve years she Kunti witnessed a detached queen, dignified,serious and focussed on Indraprasth's financial administration. ..But with Arjun in Indraprasth...she looked different,beautiful with minimum make up and ornaments she shone like she never did before.

Bheem used to comment... Where did this beautiful princess disappeared all these years..

She Kunti feared ..is the unity of Pandavas at stake?

Now she repent. Why didn't she think about her third son who suppressed his love to honour her wish.

Yes Arjun married multiple times.. but Panchali is his first love first wife..

How could she forget the way he celebrated her birthday?

The day after her birthday..Indraprasth..

Priyamvada signalled Kunti to wards Panchali who is looking as fresh as a blue lotus.. She wore a ananda colour saree with white upper garment..Her eyes..indicate her sleepless night.

When did they return from boat ride..she asked Priyamvada.

Priyamvada replied..Just before Arjun's practice hour..

Kunti sulked. Her other sons never went on such shires with Panchali. Of course they went with their wives. But Arjun is different.. He always enjoys nature worship..

Arjun and Krishna entered with beaming faces.. Satya taunted them." Where did you go after Arjun's practice... All of us are waiting..

Really ? All are waiting? Arjun repeated side glancing Panchali.. Krishna answered mischievously." Any doubt Parth? Above all someone is desparately waiting for you...and of course dearest Satya always does...

Panchali turned away on the pretext of arranging breakfast for them. She Kunti could clearly see the blush that crept on her cheeks, the beautiful smile that hid behind her reddish lips..

Instead of feeling joyous for the way Panchali is melting towards her third son,she is apprehensive of her other sons present there though they are with their wives..

Now she understood how the expression of love reigned supreme in the hearts of her Phalgun and his first wife..

To be continued shortly

Edited by ltelidevara - 7 years ago

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UnmeshaAcharya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#556

Woww di sooo amazing!!Loved mata Kuntis realization , Aha!! Kaash ye sab woh uss samay realized krti!!😭,, any way better late than never😕 ,, hats off to you di!!👏,, but it was soo small plz update soon and give us multiple updatesplz di plz !!

and again sorry for late cmnt, was busy in study!!

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UnmeshaAcharya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#557

Di please update, at least for Christmas , plzzz,,,

Btw, Merry Christmas to all of you😊😳

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ltelidevara

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Posted: 7 years ago

#558

Originally posted by: UnmeshaAcharya
Di please update, at least for Christmas , plzzz,,,
Btw, Merry Christmas to all of you😊😳

Thank you Unmesha same to you. Will update tonite definitely.

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UnmeshaAcharya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#559

Originally posted by: ltelidevara
Thank you Unmesha same to you. Will update tonite definitely.

Ooh waah!!! Eagerly waiting for your update di...if possible give some Parth-Pragati-Panchali moment😊

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ltelidevara

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Posted: 7 years ago

#560

The hilly slopes when they reached lured them ..the lofty peaks are greenish brown while the slopes are covered with green grass carpet.. the river there is not much deep... the sun just made his presence felt with golden hue...

Parikshit jumped into the waters to swim before anyone could prevent him. Uttara looked helpless and Subhadra shouted." Don't go deeper..stay at the shore..

Arjun and Krishna enjoyed Pari's water sports..much to the despair of Subhadra..

The food is being cooked by the royal cooks under the supervision of Rukmini Draupadi and Bheem..The arrangement for cooking purpose is done so well with coconut leaves and bamboo sticks.

Ulupi praised Arjun' So nice...arrangements are perfect..just like you.always did..

Chitra warned Arjun." Don't escape with your Madhav from our vision.. Take us with you..

Arjun glanced at Krishna who signalled him to stay calm..

Alli and Rekha plucked beautiful Kadamba flowers and started making garlands..

Satya protested with Panchali.. Enough of your supervision..let us roam around ..

Rukmini joined Alli and Rekha..

When the breakfast was served everyone applauded the test. It is poha made in the simplest way with less ingredients. Rukmini praised Panchali. " She did it ...the maids just handed over the things... it is done so fast yet so tasty..

Krishna relished it so much.." I always like parched rice... Rukmini Satya you remember?

Rukmini nodded with a smile while Satya said instantly." How could we forget it Swami? Your childhood friend brought them..and you graced him.

Arjun asked Satya" Elaborate it please.. Sudama..he is Madhav's friend in Gurukul right?

Krishna answered with an endearing expression." Parth. you are right.. We studied in Guru Sandipani's Gurukul.. After I came back I lost in touch with him... He got married...lived in poverty with wife and eight children... Then one day he came to see me...

Satya continued.." His wife goaded him to visit Swami ..and ask for help... He came..one morning when Rukmini Didi is doing Tulasi vrat.. Swami is there. I also went..

Arjun taunted" To check him you went there? You are too much Satyaa

Every one laughed while Satyaa pouted.and said" Will you let me complete the story? Or I will stop...

Panchali placed her hand on Satya's shoulder and said.." Please Satya continue .. What happened then? She turned to Krishna and said." Govind.. check your friend.. ask him to stay calm..

Arjun placed his finger on his lips while Nakul and Bheem clapped their hands..

Satya..started." Sudama came..he sent a word through guards .and Swami ran to the main gate to welcome him.. We wondered who is that much important for him!

Sudama wore dirty clothes...He is also called Kuchela who wears such clothes..

Swami made him sit on the jhoola ..Rukmini didi is in shock. She won't let anyone sit on that except our Swami... Then Swami hugged him ...washed his feet wiped them carefully..

To be continued shortly.