The Fateful Evening...Arjun Draupadi OS Thread.3

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ltelidevara

@ltelidevara

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Posted: 7 years ago

#571

Panchali did not say anything. She raised her lotus eyes which has a shining glint at the corners. She looked at him,his hazel eyes miscevously arresting her , ..she looked down at the water drops that stood like pearls on his bare chest.

For once she wished only she and her Arjun should remain there and everything else vanish. She would have expressed herself by caressing those water pearls with her lips.. for once she became jealous towards them. They are nearer to him and she is standing away from him.

Panchali made a face and pouted...Arjun stepped closer and whispered...Poor water drops .. they are targeted by my queen.. I pity them..

Draupadi stood sulking. Nothing escapes from his razor sharp eyes...he can go to the depths of her heart and feel her... before she could move away.Satya's voice is heard. " Panchali..come along.let us roam around..

Arjun nodded his head indicating his desperation towards Satya...She smiled and said.. Dry your hair on your own..or I will send your Chitra or Alli.. Before she could say more Arjun hugged her and gave a peck on her beautiful lips..

Satya almost came to the door and called." Are you there?

Panchali pushed him away and rushed out..

Satya stopped her and observed her gasping.. She placed her hand on her shoulder and said." Why are you agitated? Breathe freely and relax.. I just came to check if you helped Arjun change... Satya then teased .." Seems like I spoiled your beautiful moment..

Panchali hid her smile and took her along...she knew Arjun is listening to them..

Alli is seriously into training Parikshit in sword fight. She took swords from Arjun's officers and started her stint.. Pari protested... but I like archery more..

Subhadra enlightened him.." it is not about your liking..You should master all the weapons..like your Pitamah did... Even if he is a great archer,he learnt sword fight so well.

Chitra supported Pari.." Subhadra..he inherited his love for archery from his grandfather.. Let him master it first..

Alli told Pari..." I understand Pari..but still you should learn minimum...

Pari agreed reluctantly... Alli enjoyed every bit of it..She found Pari too cute and obedient..She teased him...Don't get inhibited. Open up and see my reflexes.. Alli proudly took a round and tried to strike Pari's sword but to her surprise,Pari's sword received her stroke in just the way it should be done. Alli got the shock and realised then... Arjun held Pari's hand and did the feat...

Pari is smiling with excitement while Pragati clapped rigorously... Pitasri go ahead.. Pari should defeat Masi...she shouted..

Chitra Ulupi and Subhadra stood by Alli. whose face turned red.. Krishna who came with Nakul and Bheem stood by Arjun and clapped.. Go ahead Parth... Pari should win..

Satya pulled Panchali together and rushed to the spot...Arjun side glanced her and remarked.' Waiting for you only...intruder... arrived at last..

None of them understood what he meant except Satya Panchali and Krishna.. Krishna laughed at Satya and whispered in Arjun's ears..my poor Parth...again disturbed..

Panchali felt embarrassed went to Pragati and sat under the tree placing her on her lap.

Satya stood in the middle and announced " I am the referee..

Parikshit hugged Arjun who lifted him in his hands. Arjun glanced at Alli and said...Looks like you want to reminisce our sword fight in Madhurai..go on..

Alli pretended to be serious and challenged...' Let us start..

Arjun made Parikshit hold the sword and defended Alli's attack with ease.. He teased Alli ...you help me practice with my sword...did not practice since a while.

Nakul shouted ' Bhrata be careful..Alli bhabhi looks too good in attack..

Alli defiantly looked at him and with her stroke made Arjun's sword fly high into the sky. Alli is applauded with claps..by Subhadra and others but before they celebrate the sword safely came down and settled in the hands of Pari and Arjun.

To be continued shortly.

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paartha

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Posted: 7 years ago

#572

Very nice, please continue soon. Thanks!

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UnmeshaAcharya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#573

It was sooo beautiful di...And our poor ArDi again got disturbed by Satya😆,,

Alli Vs Pari(actually Arjun)😲,, Poor Alli ,😆,,,

continue soon di ,😊

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paartha

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Posted: 7 years ago

#574

Please post the continuation soon.

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ltelidevara

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Posted: 7 years ago

#575

Arjun smiled at Alli and cheered Pari..." Do it on your own Pari. Too easy to defeat the queen of Madhura. ..he stepped back leaving Pari with the sword. Nakul panicked.' Bhrata he can not handle. Hold him..Bheem scolded Arjun." He is a kid..go now ..

Arjun held Pari's waist and encouraged. Look at your opponent. She will strike ...where try to guess.

Pari looked confused but smiled with boldness. Arjun seriously attempted guessing..Alli Rani will attack right or left?

Alli knitted her brows..her husband is taunting her..she will prove herself..

Arjun held Pari's hand in tight grip. Alli pretended to strike right and then left but finally tried to fool Arjun by rising her sword staying in the middle space...

Arjun anticipated the move and struck her sword perfectly..Nakul clapped.. That is perfect Bhrata I also thought thus ...hurray Alli bhabhi Pari is winning..

Alli's face turned red. Her beautiful face looked charming and she locked her eyes with the hazel eyes that fooled her always. Arjun winked and attacked her with Pari.. Alli dropped the sword losing her concentration...

Pari clasped Arjun's neck and kissed him on his cheek. Suddenly Arjun felt he has Abhi in his arms. Pitasri I won the sword fight.. his voice sounded so near in his ears..

Arjun dropped Pari and walked off while every one became busy in applauding Alli for showing great skills. Panchali looked at Krishna with anxiety..

Krishna nodded his head and followed Arjun. He saw him sitting on a big rock in the water b

nearer to the shore..

Parth...compose yourself.. Krishna placed his hand round his shoulder. Arjun hugged him close and stammered." Why should I leave him alone that day? Is it that important to crush Samsaptakas ?

Why did not my Eldest send some one at least after Abhi ventured into chakra vyuh? Fie on my talent. I made him face torture during his death...

Krishna has moisture in his eyes. Who can avert fate? Chandra won't let Varchas stay further..

Pari rushed to the shore and shouted " Pitamah come back... please...

Krishna waved him and said." We are coming Pari...you go and tell your jyesht mata we are hungry..

Pari nodded and ran back. Krishna showed him to Arjun and said.' Look at him Parth..he is your hope now. Ever since I came I observed he can not do without you. He dotes on you. Your Abhi left him with you didn't I tell you before? If god takes away he gives in another way..

Arjun wiped his eyes and said..yes..he is our hope...

Krishna patted him and teased to divert his mindset. " What did your intruder do again disturbed your cosy little moment? I wonder Parth..you both really are ever fresh lovers.. Despite her other husbands despite your other wives you both look so intense..,

Arjun smiled.." We lost so many moments hence we are trying to compensate. Frankly speaking I get so tempted when I am with her..I lose myself..totally...

Krishna smiled back..I understand . Now let us go and have our lunch..

Satya confronted them " Suddenly where did you disappear ? I told you not to.

Arjun completed." Not to go without taking you...

To be continued shortly.

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paartha

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Posted: 7 years ago

#576

Lovely update, but it was too short. Please post a longer update soon. Thank you very much.

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ltelidevara

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Posted: 7 years ago

#577

Satya made a face and said." What is new? You never listen to me..by the way did you ask him why he was stopped by Rukmini didi from eating more ?

Arjun replied instantly... Ofcourse I did but why should I tell you?

Subhadra sided with Satya." But you said you will tell Satya bhabhi.

Arjun looked surprised." When? I didn't remember.

Alli taunted.Ofcourse I you won't remember anything. Liar you are..

Looks like he promised you something if you lose the sword fight right? Then forgot. Chitra asked.

Ulupi laughed on seeing Arjun's face.'She chided Chitra.. Why are you teasing him? He is the best in any fight. Forgot?

Chitra twinkled her eyes." Ofcourse he is..but he is the best in forgetting ...even us..

Satya clapped and said" See Arjun I got much support ..now reveal what I asked.

Arjun pulled Krishna nearer and whispered." I forgot to ask you..but now be on my side.

Krishna laughed and asked" When did I leave your side?

Krishna then declared" Parth will tell when he wants to.. Wait till then..

Satya pouted and protested. Swami he is cheating and you side with him?

Rukmini Panchali came to serve food and Satya requested...Please tell the reason Arjun is showing attitude..Rukmini smilingly looked at Krishna who signalled her not to tell.

Panchali said.. May I guess the reason if you permit? She looked at Krishna who nodded with a smile.

Arjun got mesmarised on seeing her confidence and lost himself in her lotus eyes.

Panchali said' After eating one fistful of parched rice Govind gifted him all the prosperity that he can enjoy in this world.

With another fistful of parched rice he granted him the unattainable place in other world which will be obtained only after attaining so much merit ..

Every one listened with great attention...Panchali continued" If he eats the third one he will be equal to devas ...Rukmini didi felt what he got already is enough for him..and he being a great spiritually inclined person he will utilise his efforts in achieving what he wants salvation or Devine positions. Rukmini didi is right. He should chose and earn it...

Krishna and Arjun clapped rigorously while Rukmini hugged Panchali ...

Bheem beamed with pride and said." I am proud of you Draupadi.

Nakul teased Arjun' Bhrata see Panchali spoiled your fun..

Panchali's cowives applauded her while Satya patted her and taunted ' Arjun my friend helped me see how good she is!

Arjun smiled and agreed ' Yes Ofcourse she is the best...friend to you she proved.

Panchali raised her brows while Krishna laughed ..Well said Parth..he stated.

Edited by ltelidevara - 7 years ago

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Devhooti mishra

@Divu55

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Posted: 7 years ago

#578

Wow di... All the six updates r superb di... I was not able to comment... I am sooo busy now a days... But indeed all r great n i specially luv ardi moment n pari n alli moment n every every thing... Thanx di for such stunning updates... I ll comment on them elaborayely later...