Incarnation: A Rewritten Fate-Part 3 up! - Page 12

Originally posted by: Viswasruti

Read it with rapt attention , but , yet to understand !Whom I have to ask ?😛 [ Please don't misunderstand my joke ] 😊

I can see the innovative concept in this story , your novel way of intertwining the different aspects of God's powerful will and humans' penchant desire to extend the relationships , from which great epics emerged since centuries !Well written chapter . 👏

Originally posted by: Viswasruti

Aanvi , it's a well-written chapter with full of feminine emotions 👏! Satyavathi is the definer of many important characters of Mahabharata . a matriarch , with very strong intentions and targets , worked with Sage Vyas to change the attitude of the society on certain matters at that time , a tireless protagonist and I feel the only woman in Mahabharata who has her own mind and implemented her ideas freely in that male dominated society .

Gandhari's sorrow for almost losing her kids and her elation for getting them back alive , you described that situation in an emotional way . Waiting to read the next one . 😊

Originally posted by: Viswasruti

A mother's quivering expectations from conceiving the idea up to see the baby in her hands!

Another mother's hasty attempts to bring her selfish aspirations into this world, a well-written chapter Aanvi . Esp the strong feelings in the Queens' minds during these decisive incidents in their life, you have shown the difference between the pious nature of Kunthi and the inner conflict inflicted Gandhari's hurry to see her sons with her blinded eyes!

The Emperor was born to rule the fate of almost all the members of the Kuru and Pandu.

Originally posted by: ltelidevara

Nice to see you back anvi. How are you?

Lakshmi