Incarnation: A Rewritten Fate-Part 3 up! - Page 9

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Posted: 8 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: -Saishree-

Omg this is so so interesting man!

Pandu had a daughter?? Interesting

Let see how the story goes...


At the moment I m craving for more!

Update soon

glad to know you found it interesting.. i thought it to be total waste but still posted it...šŸ˜†
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 4
-Of the Struggles-

~In Mathura~

The gust of hollow flew over the entire Yadav clan. The chief of Yadav, got married to the sister of Kansa, who was the tyrranic king of the time being. They had been happy, till the prediction of slaying Kansa. Fearing and trembling, the Yadavs faced the wrath of the unrighteous.

"Dare to enter or be ready to get killed!"

Kansa stood at the gate of Mathura, after brigde of corpse he build killing the Yadavs. The chariot landed near the main gate. Devaki's eyes evoked fear seeing her brother trembling in anger. She dig her nails in her fabric and glanced at the barbaric massacre took place.

"Bro-brother what is this?"

She asked looking at the ground.

"These Yadavs will cause my destruction. Had I known before your marriage, you'ld never survive!"

He clenched the sword he held and slashed another man near him.

"You both are captured now. Swear to the Lord, none of your offsprings will survive!"

"Brother! Why are you believing mere prediction which might be an illusion! I am your own sister! Justice, Lord!"

She fell on his feet sobbing and he shrugged her off his way. His demons came with the metal chains, encaged them in thise cold material. Despite thousands of struggle, he couldn't free himself from the clutch of those mighty warriors. She saw her world crumbling down in front of her with footsteps of her own brother.Her face reddened with pain and anger. She decided, be the prediction be an illusion, no matter what she will protect her eight child, even if the sky has to break down for it.

~In Hastinapur~

"Gandhari?"

Satyavati slowly stroked her hair. She coiled herself more in her blanket. Her innocent face bloomed in slumber and it felt having a good dream. Her face fell off from the pillow. Satyavati smiled at her and again placed her face on the pillow. She felt the wetness in pillow, with raw waters. Pityness merged in her eyes and she carresed her face slowly thumping her cheeks to wake up.

"Wake up, Putri. The dawn has arrived."

She couldn't whether she fluttered her eyelids waking up or still shut. After all she had the barrier from the lights. She tilted at bit on her bed and stretched her hands indicating her rise.

"What time is it?"

"The dawn of your life, dear."

"Wha-what do you mean?"

"Vyas will help us out, dear. Don't worry."

"Will-will he revive my son?"

Her cloth piece wrapped on her eyes got wet with her streaming tears. Her lips trembled to smile, or cry. She extended her hand in search of Satyavati, and she took her palm to her cheeks.

"No more crying dear."

She slowly pulled Gandhari who is now weak with all the traumas she faced. She led her to a dark and damp pit where the smell of soil spread like perfume. Satyavati left her hand and her hands impatiently roamed around the chamber While walking aimlessly, she bumped with something hanging from wall. She felt it with her hands, and found a cold yet warm and firm bag hanging.

"Wha-what is it, Rajmata?"

Her body language got tensed and she tried to feel the surroundings.

"Let me answer it, child. This is the womb where your children will grow to be well born."

Rishi Vyas answered while preparing the last or 100th womb in the pit.

"My-my children? Womb? What-what is it?"

Her voice stammered and shock was visible in her voice.

"The same question is mine also, Rishi Vyas. What does it mean?"

Dhritrashtra entered with Bhishma in the chamber. The mother and son looked at each other and smiled finding their plan successful. A tornado escaped from Bhishma.

"I am asking to Gandhari. Dear, do you think you can conceive 100 times in your whole life time? This is totally impossible for any woman and law of nature!"

"But-but what about the boon?"

"Lord can find a way, child. He is The Supreme and He knows the value of words! When he says 'Be' and it gets created. Nothing is impossible for Him."

"That-that meams I can have my children?"

A slight smile started appearing in her face. Vyas replied in positive warmly. All this time, Dhritrashtra fell silent with the turns of event. His voice started to break.

"Did you hear Gandhari, our children shall born! Our children shall born! And thou only will rule the world!"

Dhritrastra's voice echoed in the closed door, as if the conch of war begun.
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NEXT PART(COMING SOON)
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A/N:Ok... many of u are still confused... Just remember there will be ArDi that's it. Everything is same with a twist!šŸ˜‰

Edited by aanvi98 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#83
Nice update anuā­ļø
Satyavati s really gud here, can we have shivani pic plz

So soon pandavas and kaurvas going to born, so shivani and kanha going to rewrite the fate😳, and shivani ka shiv kab aane wala hai


I am trusting u with ur twists, hope it's positive onešŸ˜†
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Posted: 8 years ago
#84
Wow! This was really awesome! Can't wait for the next part!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#85
Amazing chapter Aanvi 😃
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Team Arjun

Posted: 8 years ago
#86
Aanvi , it's a well-written chapter with full of feminine emotions šŸ‘! Satyavathi is the definer of many important characters of Mahabharata . a matriarch , with very strong intentions and targets , worked with Sage Vyas to change the attitude of the society on certain matters at that time , a tireless protagonist and I feel the only woman in Mahabharata who has her own mind and implemented her ideas freely in that male dominated society .
Gandhari's sorrow for almost losing her kids and her elation for getting them back alive , you described that situation in an emotional way . Waiting to read the next one . 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#87
well written update
thanks for the pm..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4634279
SKR FF update on pg. 29
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Posted: 8 years ago
#90
I know it's a looong time, and life calls for big things. however, I have decided to continue the story, which was practically on hold. and as need, I am going to keep the ardiFF and SS on hold for some days. severe writers block and excess pressure on my head. I am going to get a vacation, soon I will go through the stories one more and then update.
Yours ever lazy,
Anu

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