The Play ~ An Arylie OS (note on pg 12)

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IMPORTANT NOTE - PLEASE READ CAREFULLY!


I don’t know what exactly prompted me to write this TS. Maybe it was the endless discussions on the darker side of Aryan’s love or maybe the constant links to Indian mythology (especially Ramayana), but anyways here it is 🤪


Please be aware the following TS is a work of fiction, and contains some strong views on religion. The following in no way reflects my views but simply the character’s in my story. If this is a sensitive topic for you, I request you not to proceed further.


Please don’t take this too seriously or to heart. It is a mere opinion of a character in a story. Let it be that way. Still if you think you this may be irking I suggest you check out other wonderful stories on this forum and leave this one.


You have been warned. You may now proceed to the story!


I hope you all like it!

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Part 1


As the sun dipped below the horizon Imlie and Aryan quietly walked side by side. Soaking in the gentle breeze they made their way through the local night market of Gwalior. The city’s annual night market was bustling with activity, from vendors yelling out to customers to the chatter of the visitors as they made their way through the intricate alleyways. From the screams and giggles of children to the loud announcement over the microphone. Gwalior was up and alive, adorned with the soft glow of the yellow string lights that guided the visitors through the market.


Their work in Gwalior had finished this afternoon itself, but on the team's insistence, or rather on a particular someone's puppy eyes, Aryan had agreed to let them spend one more night here before returning back to Delhi. Swamped by work previously, none of them had the time to actually explore the town. So today, they were all out, making their way through the town, some winding through the various temples and others wandering through the night market.


A comfortable silence had enveloped the duo. Occasionally their hands would brush, other times they would literally be shoved into each other as they made their way through rather narrow and definitely over crowded pathways. The only difference was, they wouldn’t spring apart at mere contact with each other.


Whatever this was, Imlie did not know, but she had admitted to herself she quite liked it. Her relationship with Aryan had moved on from an employee-intern relationship rather quickly. She would have called it friendship had the man not vehemently denied it every time she brought it up.


And now, she too knew this wasn’t friendship… But then what was it? It wasn’t love because she had loved babusaheb, but she never felt like this with him. She had never found herself breathless by his proximity, she had never felt butterflies from his gazes, she had never felt heat crawl up her neck and flood into her cheeks when he praised her. And she had definitely never been able to reprimand or scold him like she did Aryan.


And while neither Imlie nor Aryan had the courage to find a name for this bond, they both relished it; they savoured every moment they spent in each other's company. This was a comfortable in between the both of them had found. Where they did not yet seek each other's embrace but did not spring apart at the slightest contact of skin. A comfortable in between it indeed was.


Their pace slowed as they reached the town's open air theatre. Imlie pulled Aryan’s coat that hung loosely around her shoulders tighter as the wind picked up pace. A crowd seated around the stage intently watched as the drama unfolded. Under the blanket of stars a dramatic depiction of Ramyana’s famous scene was being enacted.


Imlie was quick to settle down on the grass lawn pulling Aryan with her, though irritated he silently obliged by sitting beside her. Unfortunately for her, she realised a little too late that the play was in its final stages. Sita Maiyya was handing over her twins to her husband, Lord Ram, before leaving him for forever.


"Oh god, I can't see this anymore," Imlie whispered, her voice hoarse as she slowly wiped her wet eyes suppressing the building urge to cry.


"There is nothing left to watch also, so get up. Let's get moving." Aryan stood up instantly and stretched his hand towards Imlie to help her stand up.


"Poor Ram and Sita, why couldn't they have a happy ending?" Imlie whispered as she placed her hand in his, getting up from the grass.


They slowly resumed walking, and she fell in step beside Aryan.

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"There is nothing to pity if you ask me." His nonchalant tone irked Imlie


"What! They did not have a happy ending!" She complained, glaring at him almost as if challenging Aryan to contradict her.


"And whose fault is that? Isn't it his?" Aryan replied, still as unconcerned as before.


Imlie gaped at him. Her eyes widening in pure shock.


"How is it his fault, huh? He was just being a righteous king-" Imlie immediately jumped to the lord's defence.


"A Righteous king by abandoning his wife for his people? Ignoring the negativity is also a king's duty, isn't it?" Aryan spoke his eyes searching hers.


Imlie stared back at his chocolate brown orbs as a weird feeling took root in her stomach.


"If that was me, in his place, I would annihilate every soul that dares to think wrong about my wife. If that was me," Aryan's hand crept around her waist flushing her against him, "I would brutally massacre this empire if it meant I could keep my wife safe with me."


Aryan’s hushed words sent a chill down her spine. Imlie’s eyes floated back up to meet his. And no matter how much she tried, that feeling only anchored itself in the pits of her stomach; it refused to leave.


However, that night, that minute Imlie was too lost to notice the darkness in his eyes and the sheer destruction in his words. That she would, however, see for herself very soon.


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I really hope you guys liked the story! I would love to hear your views so please please please comment!

Edited by lovereading14 - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
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Woww!! This was so beautiful!! Loved how Aryan held Imlie and claimed he would never leave his wife for this damn world. !! Haayee!! Aru, that tension between them was electrifying.❤️loved it.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Yes well... That's my kind of man, who will destroy the world for the love of me. 😆


And Aryan has no Ram characteristics... I like it that way.


It was too short love...

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Posted: 3 years ago
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That was chilling, like I felt goosebumps. You know how they say it's better to have a villain fall in love with you than a hero, because while hero had everything else to care for, a villain would only care ofr you, this Aryan reminded me of that.


This, my dear, was a masterpiece.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Story was good but why you made it short.. I mean you can continue with imlie point of you also na... What happened after that after aryan and her relationship...

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Amazing....Aryan is Right... Actually I dont know about the story of yours religion but whatever I have known because a part of it I have read for a work assignment which I did for my freind as freelance work a few years back... I think it Ram fault.... He do Justice with the king responsibility but failed as a husband’s...thats my POV.. I dont want to hurt anybodys sentiments.... I am muslim so dont about this story much so pls dont judge me.....I am not looking down on other religion but its just my POV...sorry if I hurt anybody.... U written the OS amazingly @lovereading14..

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Posted: 3 years ago
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I see nothing wrong. Different interpretations of religious stories is normal. It all depends on the person. I think this how Aryan would react to such a story.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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This can totally have another part from imlie's Perspective because even though Ram is god but ram-avtar was basically a human avatar so we can subject his actions to the judgement as we would any normal human.

I want to see imlie's view about ram changing from a god that can do no wrong to another human being/ righteous King allowed to make mistakes.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Amazing OS! Loved the possessiveness although they haven't named their relationship!

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