The Play ~ An Arylie OS (note on pg 12) - Page 5

Originally posted by: mltr16

You promise?? Am I going to be like this....

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Ooh..That was a good one , Love

*ehmm..wait, just me or did the above line have a different ring to it* 🤣

The warning levels kept rising and I was like - what's so controversial that she had to put these many disclaimers.

Loved the description of the market. Aryan and Imlie casually strolling is something that I hope to see in the show too. Just like them chillaxing on their ride to PD.

Dark, possessive side of Aryan..bring it on.

The Ram & Sita discussion .. Earlier, I had the same opinion as Aryan's. But after some enlightenmentfrom Pavi & M, I have come to understand that there are different perspectives to it.. And I quite like Pooja's suggestion to showcase a different perspective through Imlie

Looking forward to the next update

Just loved it!

The Ram and Sita concept is very well written in terms of Aru's character as well cause that is exactly how he would think. Plus, Imlie realizing that Aru would never leave her was just awwww.

WARNING below are just my thoughts and not taking aim at others religious beliefs.

There are many interpretations about Ramayan and I agree with this one for sure.

One cannot just forget about your wife and send her away for the sake of a kingdom and the ppl who think that she is impure and stuff like that. If you have trust in your wife and know that she has not done anything wrong then that's it..no further arguments.

If you think about it, doesn't it also send a wrong message to the people of the kingdom.

Originally posted by: Casper13

Woww!! This was so beautiful!! Loved how Aryan held Imlie and claimed he would never leave his wife for this damn world. !! Haayee!! Aru, that tension between them was electrifying.❤️loved it.

Thank you!

New part coming soon :)

Originally posted by: komald718

That was chilling, like I felt goosebumps. You know how they say it's better to have a villain fall in love with you than a hero, because while hero had everything else to care for, a villain would only care ofr you, this Aryan reminded me of that.

This, my dear, was a masterpiece.

Awww thank you!

New part coming soon :)

Originally posted by: ImTyro

Great work love ❤️

Thank you, new part coming soon!

Originally posted by: hurrom

Amazing....Aryan is Right... Actually I dont know about the story of yours religion but whatever I have known because a part of it I have read for a work assignment which I did for my freind as freelance work a few years back... I think it Ram fault.... He do Justice with the king responsibility but failed as a husband’s...thats my POV.. I dont want to hurt anybodys sentiments.... I am muslim so dont about this story much so pls dont judge me.....I am not looking down on other religion but its just my POV...sorry if I hurt anybody.... U written the OS amazingly @lovereading14..

I am going to steer clear of religious views, but I am glad you liked the story!

It has now become a TS... new part coming soon!

Originally posted by: Marybarton

I see nothing wrong. Different interpretations of religious stories is normal. It all depends on the person. I think this how Aryan would react to such a story.

I am glad! However, I appreciate that religion is a sensitive topic for many and certain opinions may not sit well with others. Hence the warning.

I have to catch up on the new part of Sabr... I will get to it soon!

Originally posted by: happiness1

Amazing OS! Loved the possessiveness although they haven't named their relationship!

Thank you - the story has now become a TS... new part soon!

Can't wait for next part