Os: In Our Dreams - Page 5

Originally posted by: CrazyAbtTV18

wow.. 👏this veryy muchhh better no cross that best than wht cvs are showing presently. u have brought out the right emotions Sahiris feeling. I am sure Harshad could have done a tremondous job if these beautiful lines u have written were to be made into a memorable Saaz scene in the show..

Looking forward for more of ur writings..

Thank you. I see that the CVs are now planning some more Saaz scenes--- I just wish they had shown more consistency in their characters and plot line.

I guess we came for a love story-- so would be happy if we're given one-- no matter when.

Originally posted by: Peaceout09

Oh Gosh ! Neem ..stop killing us with your fantabulous writing skills ... im just like wow ...WOW 👏

Awww... thanks. You're way too biased 😉

Originally posted by: chicksoup

👏...a very beautiful piece of SAC's mind...Thank U.😳

Thank YOU for stopping by to comment. 😊

Originally posted by: Neemsundari

Should I be 😡 or 😆 ?

I choose to 🤗

I did apologize in advance for the lack of besharam bits but I think you jumped straight into my OS🤣

Ab itni bhi kya narazgi, mohtarma, you've begun to sound like Arzoo 🤣❤️🤗

This is beautiful Neem di 🤗 your thoughts literally got Sahir n Aarzoo in front of me while reading 👏👏👏

Originally posted by: -vandy-

abb kya karoo🤣

i've realised the only way to get sahir's attention is possible only if i become like aarzoo😆

but coming to the os..i loved it...very beautifullt written...

but i still insist on the besharmi one🤣

Besharmi wala bhi milega, thand rakho, mohtarma 😆

Aur Arzoo ki terah banke Sahir ka attention milega, mera nahin🤗

Aur Sahir toh tumhare lie OS likhne se raha 🤣

Haan he can do other things, that's for sure.😳

Originally posted by: Bujee09

This is beautiful Neem di 🤗 your thoughts literally got Sahir n Aarzoo in front of me while reading 👏👏👏

Now thats what I call talent in writing👍🏼 ...keep giving us more ...Enjoyed this thoroughly 🤗

Thanks Bujee.

I wrote the last sentence first, and then I just copied the descriptions as the Saaz scene played in front of my imagination.

Well written dear..beautiful..and according to latest pics..what you wrote is going to materialize soon...he will be besides her on the bed... 😊

So beautifully written! Placed Sahir's emotions in place! I loved it, and thank you for the pm!

Hi dear (: glad to see a piece of your awesome work once again 😃 ⭐️ and if this kind of thing was shown in the serial masha'allah it would be beautiful 😳