Os: In Our Dreams - Page 2

Neem i was trying to highlight sections I really liked but then gave up cause I just loved the entire piece. The last para is especially beautiful. The way he cares for her so truly and so deeply... it is so reaffirming and heart warming. Truth be told it makes me jealous 😊

chitingbaaz😒

gulab jamun ke khwaab dikha kar u served til ke laddoo to me 😒

Wow... this one is an amazing piece !! Every expression on Sahirs;s face aka HC was so well put in this writing. Lovvveeeddd it Neemsundari !!

Very, very beautiful

Wowww neem .. this is so beautiful

Thanks Neem! this is indeed a very nice and beautiful OS. Really strong and subtle emotions from Sahir to bring out the real him that is taking care of his Arzoo. She will be the only wife he has and wants..

Originally posted by: Suvika.

First... thank you for the dedication - and such a beautiful piece of work this one. First time someone has done something of that kind for me. I don't know what to say except thank you. 🤗

And yes, this is one scene that I think we would all love to see. and his thoughts...you brought them all out beautifully. Loved it. Enjoyed it. Yes, it was short but the impact is going to last long. 👏👏👏

Suvika, thanks for the kind words. Was vella at the airport with nothing to do, so set this up. Glad you like it. 😛

Originally posted by: ilovei

As usual very deep and well described!

Can't you continue it as a short story? Like moving it forward the way you want and not according to the serial please ^-^

I'm traveling and jet-lagged, so not sure I can continue with this, but thank you for your kind comment.😊

Originally posted by: aamnazuha

This is what I wanted to see in the show , there was no monologue of Sahir ,regarding Arzoo's painful condition or his desperation to marry her...there was no need to forcefeed this spooky story to us at the earliest..they had a chance to revive the story ,but it is lost now...

U have written it beautifully... Pls continue to pen down ur thoughts...

Thanks. A s I said, I tried to express Sahir's pov here-- his thoughts, which got lost in the show. the problem with the CVs is that they had to deviate from both the plot and the characters due to trp pressure, and that has created a big hotchpotch.