Os: In Our Dreams - Page 3

Originally posted by: Moon_light

Oh My God Neem!!

What an awesome way to start my day! I am supposed to be getting ready for work but here i am stealing a few minutes just read and connect with you and the characters we've come to love.

I was tempted to load the page and read it after work so i could relish each and every word of this beautiful OS but i just couldnt resist it, even if it meant getting to work late!

You penned Sahir's thoughts so beautifully i had to heave a huge sign at the end. That's Sahir. Raw and compassionate and down right lovable and just the way we would want him to be!

Thank you for making my day. This OS will stay with my for a long, long time! I cant thank you enough for the dedication. I couldnt express what such a sweet gesture means to me in words so i wont try, i'll just say, you and your writing touch me right to my core!

God bless and have an amazing day!

🤗

Originally posted by: Junoonian

Neem i was trying to highlight sections I really liked but then gave up cause I just loved the entire piece. The last para is especially beautiful. The way he cares for her so truly and so deeply... it is so reaffirming and heart warming. Truth be told it makes me jealous 😊

Originally posted by: -vandy-

chitingbaaz😒

plus

dhokhebaaz😒

i will not like this os..nor will i comment on it*stubborn face*

Originally posted by: nisha_hc_bs_dd

Wow... this one is an amazing piece !! Every expression on Sahirs;s face aka HC was so well put in this writing. Lovvveeeddd it Neemsundari !!

Originally posted by: allforlove

Very, very beautiful

That's our Sahir - deep, thoughtful, passionate, caring, protective and so much more

Why aren't writers like you in the CV's team 😭

Originally posted by: robinsamee

Wowww neem .. this is so beautiful

It feels like i am reading a fairy tale. . And yeah i missed you too :)

Big hug ..

Originally posted by: Neemsundari

More than me, I think there should have been writers like Suvika in the CV team-- she's doing such a fab job with the plot!

Thank you for your comment, you're sweet!😊

Originally posted by: Suvika.

Thank you 😲 but why are you bringing me into this?? 😕 😡

Originally posted by: Neemsundari

Thank you so much Neem. But I meant you are supposed to say something like - "I am ready. Do let me know if you plan to kidnap them." 😆

Jokes apart. this one is a master piece. One scene like this and we will all be flying in SaAz land.