OS: Consequences (16+) PART 3 UPATED PG 14 (NOTE ADDED) - Page 7

Originally posted by: tweetie19

Oh Lord...I could actually picturise what arzoo was going through...

This was again incredibly hot...☺️ ☺️ Your write ups keep me craving for more... Thanks a lot for this beautiful and passionate sequel...😃

Thank you. This came easily to me, thanks to encouragement from you and others. 😛

Originally posted by: prettypri

This one is from the other POV...very well written...paints a vivid picture😳.

And yes..hot!

You captured what Arzoo could be feeling especially now that she is in love with Sahir!

What must she be thinking about their earlier encounters! This is a very good description!😃

I guess the characters have already been very well sketched in the serial-- so I didn't find it hard to write from Arzoo's POV either. I don't write romance, so I'm tickled everyone finds my writing 'hot' 😳

Originally posted by: Ilin

Thanks for the pm 😃 wow! The sequel is absolutely HOT 😳 OMG! You write so well.. Wana read more and more

You're welcome, and thanks for the kind words. I don't know if I'll write more, but I sure had fun with these. I wrote about 1700 words in 2 hrs, which is pretty cool-- wish I could do the same with my own writing!

That was hot... ...you are too good. Hope they include this scene in HS 😳 ..keep writing 😊

Omggg that was breathtaking wow.

Originally posted by: TaanuDeewani

That was hot... ...you are too good. Hope they include this scene in HS 😳 ..keep writing 😊

lol you think the CVs troll the forums for ideas? 😆

Would be cool to see this onscreen tho-- now that I think of it, it isn't really too...ahem.. for family audiences.😉

Originally posted by: _Ms.Foxy.Angel_

Omggg that was breathtaking wow.

just loved it so so much.

I could picturise this clearly.

It was raw pure intense.

I hope you cont.more.

I have bookmarked this thread.

Thanks for d pm.

Will keep on looking daily for updates.

You're too kind.

I can't do daily updates, but this level of love from my readers is quite unheard of-- I wish some of my books got this much of encouragement😆.

Damn! Another cliff hanger :D

you are so talented ! i love your work ... i wish there will be a scene like this in the serial InshaAllah one day there will be ...👏

Dear Neem

Wow! I am in a daze! Arzoo wasnt the only one who held her breath, i found myself taking several deep breaths when i had finished reading that wonderful, juicy and every apt continuation. Hai! Mei kya bholon, i am in love with your writing! You have this talent to completely draw your readers into the worlds you create. Honestly i dont see or hear anything while i am reading your work. Allah knows, your one of the most gifted writers i have come across. Agreed the characters were created by other people but your insight into them is astounding! You really know your trade and i feel fortunate to be one of the people you gets to experience your amazing talent.

Oh God! I am still catching my breath! Phew! Kiya kiya tumne Neem?? Rehem karo humrey upar! Who said the writer in you has a block, i see her alive, vivacious, brimming with ideas, so many they are spilling over into these wonderful OS's your writing for us your hungry fans!

Thank you, thank you, thank you, for the dedication. Here's a prayer that you are able to start your novel ASAP!

Tons and tons of love and big huge humongous 🤗🤗🤗