The WIDE Gap Between 'Good Work' And 'Patch Work* - Page 3

Originally posted by: fzin1

👏 shabash Vandy kya watt lagayi hai 😃 don't know why the hell are they doing this...they never had issues with editing in their other shows...don't know what the hell Gul Khan's been upto

Originally posted by: shamyj

I just saw the self flagellation by Sahir and no I too did not find it titillating or amusing!

The episode was poorly done and there was no continuity. For a moment I too had no clue why Sahir was behaving like Silas a la Da Vinci Code😕.

Too much time given to villians and at one point a swarm of flies could go into Anams mouth and she would still have it gaping wide! Sheesh! The girl cannot act!

Originally posted by: subhkisonu

Very apt post Vandy. Please post it on F32 official page , they need to know what we are thinking about the show!

Even I felt yesterday's episode had started abruptly. They should have started it from the jungle sequence. At least they could have shown Arzoo's reactions!

And Sahir already took out his anger on that poor tree then again why he was punishing himself?although HC was just mindblowing but I think they could have shown it after the hug.

Anyway let's see what happens today.

Zeenat's eyes were wide open, does that mean she is out of coma?then why the Doc was saying 'Himmat rakhiye"?

I guess we have to wait to see!

Originally posted by: ecrivain

Vandy very very well written post and I do agree whole heartedly ..

I was waiting for this new slot like forevef...and after the wait of whole day ..I got a babuji KA Thullu 🤣

I think other's have mentioned a lot of things here like editing n scripting plus less screen time for the leads while the others hog the limelight ...and I m not gonna do a recap of tht but there are a lot of things they need to pull up

Honestly so this epi was more of a laying the foundation n fair enough if they have to show it too, there has to be the right balance n flow ..

But if old habits die hard n they HAVE to show side characters ..WHY Anam n KA .,,why not Zaki ..

I don't get it agreed they can't put the leads for whole 23 mins but they can atlesst give us their time too whether it's spaced out or together it's ok

Originally posted by: -vandy-

more than the cvs...i see ur thoughts turning a lot more kinkier😆😆😆

but...u know what...during the whipping scene...what caught my eye was not sahir's semi nude avatar...but the way hc's acting made me connect to sahir's pain...

allah knows nobody admires the semi nude avatar of hc the way i do but yesterday i was amazed at the brilliant performance that i was witnessing on my screen... not once did my eyes falter from seeing the pain he was going thru...not once did my eyes travel below his face...he did not give me a chance...he kept me dazed and wondering how painful it must've been for sahir...and y is sahir being so hard on himself😒

sahir has a dark past...and its anything but forced on screen...😊

Originally posted by: -vandy-

pri i agree to everything u said except for @bold

it made full sense...its just it was not placed in the proper sequence...u know...yesterdauy's epi should've ended with the hug...and today's epi should've had the whipping shot...

Originally posted by: prettypri

Vandy,,,yes that would have put it more in context atleast and given a stronger basis...but I feel the punishment he gave himself could have been something else...impactful but not quite so ...

And if it had to be this...because he wants to hurt himself in such a way that he never forgets then yes it should have been after the next instance of attraction.

Originally posted by: tvbug2011

It wasn't so much HC's acting as about the need for the scene that remains unconvincing. So Sahir hates himself for his vulnerability to Arzoo, for allowing himself to hope, to see a light where there is none, for possibly leading Arzoo on when he has nothing to offer her.

But does that necessarily call for a whipping and that too executed in the precise same manner - and I refer to the toe-curling - as in the iconic scene in The Da Vinci Code? In the Da Vinci Code the scene was a ritual that is practiced in some sects. It was not unnatural.

But here, what was the need? Could something else have shown Sahir's penitence, his need for control in any other, more original way that doesn't smack of BDSM?

This complete lack of ethics or respect for someone else's creation, this blatant plagiarism, never fails to kill the joy for me. But then more fool me for expecting originality from a serial named Humsafars. 😃

But the toe-curling has potential. 😉😃

Originally posted by: Spunkyrutz

Hi Vandy...no yaar. Was not meaning to be sarcastic at all. Sorry if it came across as that. Was genuinely impressed with your visualization...and no I don't work for the PH at all...

Joined this forum only for SaAz !!