The WIDE Gap Between 'Good Work' And 'Patch Work* - Page 2

Originally posted by: Soaps1

They just refuse to learn don't they? Lack of flow and consistency coupled with poor scripting is the name of this show ... period!!!

For me the beating scene could have been shown later may be after hospital hug ... because he already took out his anger for jungle one by being axe man didn't he? So what was the point in beating himself again?

Originally posted by: Sagi.

Perfect. Even I was expecting that they would find their way back home (possibly lift mangke) stealing glances to each other, and generally showing off their indifference.

Also agree with Soaps Di that the whipping scene should have come after the hug. It makes more sense. Whatever happened in the jungle was pure survival instinct, and it in only today in the hug scene is Sahir going to feel passion towards Arzoo (and surrender himself)

Originally posted by: prettypri

You summed it all up perfectly...high time they did some homework and corrected the continuity issues!

It's like all leads scenes have to be choppy and the camera had to jump to KA and Alviras chess games.

Yesterday Anams conversation with farah took up an unpardonable amount of screen time😡.

That conversation between Nausheen and sarfaraz was totally unnecessary...agreed that she could have fallen sick because of the previous nights convo itself...and btw it doesn't even make sense for sarfaraz to expect she would have spoken to Alvira overnight and call and blast her again!!

A very poorly thought out scene to get Arzoo to hospital at the same time as Sahir! Yes...Nausheen could have simply gone for dialysis to that place...so simple! Much less time would have been needed!

Horrible start to the new time slot...and with Friday episodes slated to come up they need to have more screen space for tbe leads pronto!

The first scene...was disturbing,,.very disturbing more so because it didn't make sense...as did nothing else in tbe epi!

Originally posted by: Ilin

Very well said.. 👏 agreed to everything u say.. They wasted the whole episode on KA and Anam and I seriously can't stand the actress playing Anam she can't act period 🥱

Originally posted by: Uzma005

vandy you are very right. there is not continuity in the show when it comes to lead pair. they are just showing crap. i fear that may be channel wil axe the show if they keep doing like this. we all know usually the shows on sony tv won't run very long.

Originally posted by: tvbug2011

Well said!!

And I didn't get the reason for the self-flagellation either. I get it that the CVs are kinky, only to be expected that creatives must stretch their comfort zones, otherwise how will they be creative. But last night was summink else altogether!!

Clearly the Da Vinci Code has left a mark on their minds - the nude Silas, whipping himself toe-curlingly, back-archingly, hair-raisingly until he drew blood. And hence we must suffer through a lift and paste in Humsafars.

Have to say that Sahir's half-nude take did nothing for me. No I lie. It brought up the bile. But it didn't make Sahir seem any sexier. It didn't turn me on. It didn't make me feel his pain and torment - I was more inclined to say: "stop silly, you're over-reacting! There, there, get a hot, sweet cuppa into you, and it won't seem quite so bad."

And for my patience I was rewarded this one tiny moment when I wondered if his toes curled whenever there was an excess of sensation.😉😃 But the next thwack and splat of saliva killed that train of thought. Ugh!

Please CVs, give us the intense romance you promised, not this forced darkness that does not convince.