~inshi ff~'ur love is my strength'CHAPTER12, Pg15 - Page 6

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Aww such a sweet update, really loved it! :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Avni30

very nice post 1 confusion hai kya aap bata sakte ho ki aisa kya hua tha ki indu or rishi (bur din) ek dusre se mafi mang rahe thye.kya aap ane wale update main bata ne wale ho ya nahi? I cant wait next update please aap next update kab dal rahe ho.😊

are neha read chapter 1 rishi was not home when acciddnt took place and so feels guilty on the otner hand indira feels responsible for risking her cnildrens lyf so both say sorry and yes bure din impled this whole fear of loosing their kids and indira and rest bure din u will come to know in next updates. i'm not vry sure whether i'll be able to update today but will try but it's definately tomorrow.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice update yaminii 😊
Please PM me wen u update the next chapter...!!!
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Chapter 6

Next morning indira woke up with an urge to drink water. She tried to get up but felt too weak to do so. She tried to take support to get up but realized that her hand was not free. She looked to her side where rishi was sleeping holding her hand. He looked like an innocent baby while sleeping. Indira slowly and longly moved her hand in rishi's hair admiring her husband's baby like face in sleep.

This caring of indira waked up rishi who was surprised to see indira awake.

Rishi: are indira tum kab uthi? Theek to ho tum kuch chayie tumhe?

Indira: (calmly) good morning rishi! Mujhe na pani chaiye tha pyaas lagi hai.

Rishi: to muje utha diya hota. He hurriedly goes and pour water in glass and gves indira to drink.

Indira struggles to get up but rishi keeps the glass on the table and supports indira and help her to sit and then makes her drink water.

Indira: rishi mujhe na bahut ajeeb sa lag raha hai. Aj mai apne bachoon ko god mai loogi. Wo choti si pariyan kaise dhikti hogi mujse se na wait nai ho raha hai pata nai kab dheekogi mai apni betion ko. Yeh hospital ka staff na bahot alsi hai bhala koi chote chote bachoon ko apni ma se door rakhta hai kya itni der?

Rishi was quite amused to see indira lyk this and was smiling while looking at indira.

Indira: rishi ap kyon has rahe ho? Acha mera mazak uda rahe ho na acha hai has lo. khud to beetion ko dekh liya upar se muje kuch bataya nai unke bare mai aur ab mera mazak uda rahe hai. Jayie mai apse nai bolti and looks towards other side making an angry face.

Rishi: are meri pyari hitler bivi mai apka mazak nai uda raha tha ( he scomes and sits by indira's side and makes her look towards him) mai to bas apko apki hitler wali form mai dekh kar kush ho raha tha aur maine bhi kahan dekha hai unko ache se, bahar se hi dhekha hai aur itna pata hai ki dono apke jaise hai aur ap jitney baichain hai unhe dekkhne keliye utna mai bhi ho. Bas ap thodi patience rakho. ( he assuringly looded into indira's eyes and then indira rests her head on rishi's shoulder)

Indira: Rishi vishwas nai ho raha hum mummy papa ban gaye!

While both of them were lost in their world they were brought back to reality by aknock on the door and they see doctor entering the room. Rishi gets up and greets the doctor.

Doctor: good morning mrs diwan hope u r feeling better?

Indira: definitely doctor.

Doctor: good! Let me have alook. (he examines indira) yes, I see a lot of improvement. Its's a good sign. Mrs diwan I know you must be waiting to see your babies but don't worry nurse will bring them to u shortly. Have a good day(dr leaves)

On listening to doctors words both indira and rishi were very happy and rishi thanked god for improving indira's health

After a short while two nurses entered the with their antra mantra. Indira stretched her arms to hold her little angels in her arms. One of the nurse went ahead and handed the baby to indira while the other one handed the second baby to rishi and left the room.

Rishi sat by indira,s side and showed her the baby. Indira was so overwhelmed by the feeling that she said nothing but simply cared both of them and rained kisses on them. She then sat crosslegs and put the baby on her lap and took the other one from rishi and held her in her arms but said nothing. Her affecton , love and happiness all were expressed through her eyes which were crying out of joy. She just kept admiring and caring her daughters when she suddenly looked up at rishi who was also crying.

Indira: wiping her tears ap kyon rorahe ho rishi?

Rishi: wo main…wo ap rorahi thi na isliye (rishi said innocently)

Indira : wiping rishi's tears aap bhi na rishi bachoon se kam nai ho. Biwi ko chup karane ki bajaye khud rorahe ho

Rishi: are shrimatiji jazbaat to mere andar bhi hai na aur kaun kehata hai ki sirf pati ko dekh kar biwian ro sakti hai kya biwi ko dekh kar pati nai rosakte? He looks upto her and then gives a mischevious smile and both of them then start laughing on realizing the situation and their reaction.

Rishi: (looking at their daughters)dekha antara mantra ki mummy dono bilkul aap par gayi hai!

Indira: han wo to hai par inki naak na apke jaise hai and then pulls rishi's nose

Rishi: ouch… lagti hai. (both of them laugh)

Indira: Rishi yeh to decided hai ki inkae naam kya hoge par kise kya naam dena hai yeh socha hai kya?

Rishi: (confused) are yeh to sochna padega. Then suddenly an idea crosses his mind and he shouts idea!!

Indira: rishi dheere hospital hai yeh

Rishi: (whispers) abhi naam decide hojayega.

Indira: kaise?

Rishi: dekho to…… he comes close to the babies and whispers something in each of them ears.

Indira: Rishi kya karrahe ho bache hai yeh

Rishi: Shh….. meri aur meri beetion ke beech ki baat hai yeh

Indira: rishi inhe kya samah aya mujhe batayege ap?

Rishi: shh….an then calls out antra (the baby in indira's arm suddenly responds by moving her hands) he then calls out mantra to which the baby on indira's lap responds.

Rishi: lo ho gaye naam decide jis naam par respond kiya wo naam uska and takes matra in his arms. To ab decided iska naam mantra and kisses her aur (then looks at antra) aur iska antra and kisses her too and then looks at indira kyon theek hai na?

Indir: She was speechless at rishi's act and could say nothing except nod her head in agreement and then whispers the name antra mantra looking at her babies.

(I know this is quite long but I wanted to stess on their emotions so culn't keep it short though it didn't turn up the way I expected. Hope u guys will lyk it and forgive my mistakes)

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Posted: 13 years ago
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ye tumhara 1st ff hai?
bohot achcha likh rahe ho.It is so cute
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very very nice update.
❤️ it.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wowww lovely update 😊
waiting for next...!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi yamini aap next update kab dal raheho i cant wait (waiting for next update)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hi! i'm back with my update n here we go...

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CHAPTER 7

Indira and rishi for a long tym were busy admiring their daughters and playing with them. Both of them noted their slightest movement and features of babies and discussed infact cutely fought tht to whom they resemble. Rishi and indira did not keep their daughters away from their arms not even for a minute. After some time both realized thet they have fallen asleep.

Indira: rishi mijhe lagta hai ki antra so gayi hai.

Rishi: Are shrimatiji apki matra ko bhi need agayi hai. Then looking at both of them"haye meri pariyan kitni cute lagti hai sote hue"

Indira: ( admiring them) haan bilkul apne papa ki tarah and lovingly looks at rishi and rishi too returns the look. Indira tells rishi to put them in cradle as she herself was not able to get up.

Rishi put the babies in cradle and lovingly cradles them for some time and then comes at sits near indira and holds her from her shoulder and lovingly looks into her eyes

Rishi : shrimatiji itni tension main a mai apko theek se thanku bhi nai bol paya itni pyari pyari beeiyon ka papa banana ke liye and then without wasting a minute he pulled indira closer, lifted her chin and cupped her face and bend forward to kiss her. Indira also didn't say a word and blushing she closed her eyes and surrendered to the will of her patidevji.

Their lips were only a millimeter apart when they heard a voice" Oh! I'm sorry" and then a bang of closing door.

Both of them moved away from each other with a jerk and both of them were hell embarrassed that they didn't even look at each other and rishi quickly got up and moved towards the door cursing the person in his mind on the other hand indira tried to cool down herself

On the other hand outside the room the man cursed himself for muttering sorry "oh god! Why did I open my mouth? Why didn't I leave quietly? S**t how will I face them now?" while he was cursing himself the door was opened and he turned to see it.

Rishi: (as soon as he sees the man he pounces on him, he was none other then sanjay) abe tu!

Sanjay: ricky chod yaar. Phool kharab hojayege(pointing towards the flowers he had got for indira)

Rishi: (in low but angry voice)abbey mera fool bana kar tu phool dhika raha hai, teri to mai

Sanjay: kya kar raha hai yaar janede na aur yeh hospital hai mujhe kya pata tha ki tum….(sanjay stops saying further as sees rishi embarrassed) acha chod ab andar nahi bulyega?

Rishi: chal aja ab.

Sanjay enters the room where indira was sitting on bed, she was quite embarrassed and was not able to look at sanjay properly. Rishi sensed it and tried to make her comfortable by starting the conversation

Rishi: indira yeh sanjay hai mere bachpan ka sabse jigri dost. Hum school se clg tak sath padhe hai aur U.S. mai bhi sath the.mere bhai se badh kar hai. Do din pahle hi aya hai U.S. se aur jabse aap yahan hai us poore waqt yehi mere sath tha meri himmat badhane. Agar yeh nahi hota to mai to toot gaya tha.

Sanjay: trying to make things light "are bahbi ise to introduce karna bhi nai ata khair mai hi khud ko introduce karta hoon and in a filmy style(mimicking Sharukh khan) hi! Main Sanjay...naam to suna hoga and handed her the flowers he had got for her(beautiful orchids)and gave indira a mischevious smile

Indira on listening to this smiled instantly "Oh! Thank u they are beautiful" she said while taking the flowers

Sanjay: ab kaisehai ap bhabi aur han meri bathijiyan kahan hai?

Indira: I'm better now aur wo donowahan sorahi hai(pointing to the cradle)

Sanjay gets up to see them and takes out two small teddy bears from a packet and place it in their cradle by their side. "they r so cute! Thank god ricky tuj par nai gayi."

Rishi: kya matlab hai tera?

Sanjay: matlab yehi ki yah bhabi par gayi hai tabi to itni cute hai

Rishi: are wah! Bahabi se milte hi party badal li tune… marle jitna maska marna hai marle…akle mai milna mujhe tu phor bataoga .

Sanjay: looking at indira dekho bhabi kaise dhamka raha hai maine kuch galat kaha kya?

Indira on the other hand blushed on listning to sanjays comment and soon her hesitation was gone on seeing this friendly nature of sanjay and she joined him in pulling rishi's leg

Indira: rishi kya kar rahe ho ap? Kya galat bola inhone mujhe batayiye?(and folded her hands in hitler style)

Rishi: he knew that now he was trapped and if he said further it will enrage indira so realizing the situation "nai …a…..mine kab kaha ki yeh galat keh raha hai ab humari betiyan ap par nai to kya padosi par jayagi?"

Indira , rishi and sanjay then had a chit chat for a long tym and in between sanjay and rishi left no chance to pull each others leg and this was amusing indira a lot especially stories related to rishi and when sanjay was pulling rishi's leg she too sometimes joined sanjay in pulling rishi's leg and irritating him.

Soon it was noon and sanjay got up to leave

Sanjay: ok bhabi ab mai chalta ho. You take care. And then turning to rishi " bhabi ka khayal rakna mai kal milne aoga"

Rishi: are abhi itni jaldi kyon ?

Sanjay: wo yar hotel se saman bhi shift karna hai aj, wo company guest house mai mere rehne ka intezam ho gaya hai.

Indira: ap guest house mai therege, par kyon? Ap humare ghar kyon nai rukjate

Sanjay: iski koi zarorat nai hai bhabi, guest house acha hai aur phir ek mahine ki hi baat hai.

Rishi: indra theek bol rahi haitu humare saath humare ghar rahega aur mai tera koi bhana nai sunna chahta maine keh diya to meri bat man warna mai samjoga kit u muje apna dost nai manta.

Sanjay: aisi abt nai ahi richy tu janta hai. Abi bhabi ki tabiyat bhi theek nai hai tume apne problems hai aur mai tere ghar mai…nai.

Rishi: tera rehna koi problem nai karega ulta agar tu higa to mujhe bhi himmat milegi warna mai akele kaise manage karpaoga

Rishi convinced sanjay a lot and indira too supported rishi. Finally sanjay agreed on staying at their place. Rishi handed him the house keys and gave him the address and told him to directly take his luggage from hotel and that he will come to see him in the evening. Rishi then goes to seeoff sanjay till the hospital gate.

When rishi came back he saw indira lost in some deep thoughts. He quietly comes in the room and climbs up on her bed and hugs her from back

Rishi:kya soch rahi hai?

Indira: kuch nai bas yehi soch rahi thi ki agar apne sath ho to khushi manane ka maza dugna hojata hai. Aj apke friend aye to kitna acha laga. Aj itne dino bad ap bhi pehle wale rishi ki taharah has rahe the. Sach apne ho to pareshaniyan kitni asan lagne lagti hai

Rishi sensed the sadness in indiras voice and understood the reason behind it. He gets up and comes and sits in front of indira

Rishi: gharwalon ki yaad arahi hai na"

Indira: ( suddenly tears rushed down her eyes)Rishi hume pyar milgaya,khushiyon ne bhi humare ghar mai dastak di lekin apno ki bina har kushi adhori lagti hai and hugs rishi.

Rishi: (consoling indira )par jab apne hi bhool gaye ho to unhe yaad kar ke rone ka kya fayda?

Indira: par hai to wo apne na! unhe mai kaise bhoolon? Ishan, shar, bhabi., ma, bhaisa, mandira…socho yeh sab aj humare sath hite to kitna acha hota. Humari khushiyan dognihoti lekin bhaisa ke lalach ne hume sabse door kardiya

Rishi: aap kyon chinta karti ho….sab theek ho jayega, mai apse promise karta hon ki sab kuch theek kardoga aur apke pas bahut jald apka poora parivar hoga aur humari antra mantra ko bhi unki nanihal walon ka pyaar milega. I promise and looked assuringly at indira

Indira found the comfort and confidence in rishi's words and she was sure that her love will surely make things allright and she hugs rishi

Rishi: (in a seductive tone)waise shrimatiji in sab main ekkam to pura nai hua!

Indira: (confused)kaunsa kaam?

Rishi without saying a word further pulls indira closer tom and without further delay covers her lips with his for a long and loving kiss and when they drew away to catch some air to breathe rishi huskily says" ho gaya poora kaam"

Indira: blushing hugs rishi and feels secure in his arms and places her head on his chest as this is the right place for her to be. Rishi kisses indira on forehead and promices himself in his mind that he will definitely make things allright.

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