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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesomeee... This story is so interesting... Wonder wats in store for us in d next update... Luv the current track dear.. Thank you ;-)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thnx 4 the awesome update.Eagerly wating for the next update...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi there,must say you have quite an imagination.While I was reading it,I could visualize them;definitely lightened the mood.Although this would never happen in HD,because certain articles clarify that Indira will never get happiness in her life;and besides,the CVs are not going to bring a smile to her face so soon.Therefore,its only our imagination that could make us see what we want to see.So,you should continue writing and make Rishi and Indira love,smile and live a happy life in a different world.šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow I have wanted someone to write a ff on inshi for ages thankyou one q has the flash back ended?
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey! this story is awesome, i loved the way you wrote it! could really imagine Inshi in the story! fab job!! please continue soon!!

-Simran
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Earnshaw

Hi there,must say you have quite an imagination.While I was reading it,I could visualize them;definitely lightened the mood.Although this would never happen in HD,because certain articles clarify that Indira will never get happiness in her life;and besides,the CVs are not going to bring a smile to her face so soon.Therefore,its only our imagination that could make us see what we want to see.So,you should continue writing and make Rishi and Indira love,smile and live a happy life in a different world.šŸ˜‰


yeah i know..but reading this article i started dis ff...i really wanted to them to be together...but cvs are not in a mood to do this...i know so i stared to write ff so tht i can make them happy inmy imagination
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aishah8

Wow I have wanted someone to write a ff on inshi for ages thankyou one q has the flash back ended?

thank you so much...no flash is not ended but will end soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: -RaSu-

hey! this story is awesome, i loved the way you wrote it! could really imagine Inshi in the story! fab job!! please continue soon!!


-Simran


thankyou so much
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Posted: 13 years ago
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part 9

after a while rahul and sana enters inthe room. The rishi was in his dram thinking abt the hug he and indu had...he was smiling and was lost in his thought

rahul- dude...hogaya tera ki abhi aur baki hai

sana- rishi..tu gaya beta...

rishi- arre tum dono kab aaye

sana- hum...jab tu idiot ki tarah muskura raha tha...Sach bata indiraji ke bare mein soch raha tha na

rishi- ummm...ha unhi ke bare mein soch raha tha...kitni achi hai woh

rahul- achi toh woh hai boss...

rishi- rahul...sorry bro woh mein gussa mein na jane kya kya bol gaya...sorry

rahul- tnsn not...i didn't mind it at all...i'll go n see where indira is

sana*very innocently*- rishi...do you know you are in love with indiraji

rishi- ya i know...mera matlab...ek minute...kya???

sana- tu aise baat kar raha hai jaise tujhe kuch pata hi nahi...u know tht u luv her

rishi- are u damn sure sana???

Sana- are u a dumbo??

Rishi- u know what...yes i m in love...i love indira Sharma sorry sorry i love makanmalkin ji

Rishi was almost jumping out of happiness...he was happy damn happy...uske chehre se hassi toh jayi hi nahi rahi thi...aur jaye bhi kyu...aakhir he got his love of lyf...his mmj

Sana- arre yaar aaram kar aur bata usse kaise bolega

Then suddenly saari khushi ek jhatke mein challi gayi...da cheerful smile from rishi's face faded away..

Sana- kya hia abhi toh itna oochal rahe the

Rishi- i love her...but do she also love me..agar mene kaha unse aur unhone mana kardiya toh mein toh mar hi jaunga...kahi unka bharosa mere upar se uth jayega toh...no...no...i wont take risk...

Sana- are u literally mad rishi...jab tak tu usse bolega nahi usse pata kaise chalega..and rishi i bet she too loves you

Rishi- kya!!!mera matlab sach mein

Sana- haan yaar dekh woh tera kitna khyaal rakhti hai...aur jab tu icu mein that oh unki jaise saanse ruk gayi thi...sirf aur sirf tumhara hi naam le rahi thi...aur tere liye unhone ne mandir mein jake dua bhi maangi...ab yeh sab pyaar nahi hai toh kya hai...

Rishi- sach me???

Thn rsihi remembers the night wen they almost had lip lock n he was so close to each her and today indira hugged him n wen he hugged back indu didn't feel hesitated

Now rishi was in full confidence tomorrow n wen rishi was going to be discharged 1st thing was to propose her..make her his forever n evere...confess his love. Rishi was desparately waiting for tomorrow

Scene shifts

Indira was sitting in hospital's terrace staring at stars and tears was rolling down her cheeks

Indira*thinking*- aaj mene almost rishi ko kho diya tha...na jane mujhe kya hogaya hai bar bar rishi ko khone ka darr kyu laga rehta hai...uss barish wali raat ko bhi mein apne upar control nahi kar payi...aur mujhe rishi ke baton ka bura kyu kagta hai...yeh kya hote ja raha hai mujhe...

While indira was thinking rahul comes there

Rahul- kaha thi yaar...tymhe dhunte dhunte mera wajan aadha hogaya hai...aur tum taaron ko kyu ghoor(stare) rahi ho...chalo rishi tumhe puch raha hai...

Indira- acha chalo phir..shayad usse kuch chahiye ho

Indira gets up and starts moving wen rahul calls her

Rahul- ek baat puchu...tumhe rishi kaisa lagata hai

Indira- aisa kyu pucha tumne??

Rauhl- kuch nahi bas ainvayi

Rahul and indira enters the rishi's room there sana and rishi were abt tomorrow's plan...at tht tym rahul and indu enters and listens their talks but only last part

Indu- kaisa plan?

Rishi was shocked and tried to give answer but cudnot thn quickly sana spoke

Sana- arre kuch nahi...bas ainvayi

Sana n rishi gave eachother a huge amile this was seen by rahul n he was totally confused...sana indicates rahul to come out so cud say all da plans

Sana and rahul went out ...now rishi n indu were alone in da room

Rishi- mmj...umm...aapse ek baat puchu

Indira was busy in putting medicines on table she didn't hear him

Rishi- mmj

Indira- ji aapne kuch kaha

Rishi- woh mein puch raha tha ki..

Thn doc interrupts them

Doc-oh m sorry*checks rishi* yeh ab bilkul thik hai..kal aap inhe kal le ja sakti hai

Indira- thankyou doctor

Till thn sana n rahul too came inside

Doc- ab inhe aaram ki zarurat hai aur raat ko koi ek hi ruk sakta hai

Rahul- mein ruk jata hu..tumdono ghar jao..aur indu tum toh especially aaram karo...sana isse ghar le jao

Indu- lekin rahul mein...

Rishi- mmj rahul shai keh raha hai...aap jao

Both sana n indu goes from there...rahul sits near rishi's bed

Rahul- toh tera kal propose karne ka plan hai

Rishi- ha...bas woh bhi ha karde aur mujhe kuch nahi chaiye

Rahul- rishi...tujhse ek baat kehna chahta hu...indira bahut emotional hai...kisiko jatati nahi lekin mein jaanta hu, usne kafi dard dekha hai apni zindagi mein, parivaar ka pyaar toh kabhi mila hi nahi..usse sab kuch khud hi karna padhta hai...bahar se jitna hitler hai andar se utna hi soft and pyaari ladki hai...duniya isse hitler kehti hai lekin woh aisi bilkul nahi hai...usse halat ne aisa bana diya...vidit ke jaane ke baad toh usne jaise jina hi chod diya, khali saanse leti hai...lekin tere aane ke baad mene uske andar kuch changes dekhe hai...tu usse khus rakhega na...kabhi rulayega toh nahi..

Rishi- jaanta hu...issi wajah se mein unpe fida hu...aur unhe toh mein apne lyf se bhi zyada pyaar karta hu...hamesha khus rakhunga...kabhi nahi rulaunga...aaj se indira sirf aur sirf hasse gi ab unke aankhonmein aansu nahi ayenge...vaada hai mera...lekin bas ek bar rulaunga uske baad nahi...

Rahul- kya???aur kyu

Rishi- samjha kar..bidai k etym woh toh royengi na..ab mein usme kuch nahi karsakta

Rishi n rahul become frnds...they laughed and whole night went by waiting for tomorrow...night goes away freh morning peeps out..it was da day wen rishi was going to propose the lady of his lyf his love his mmj,indira too waited for this morning as rishi was going to be discharged now she can take care of her kiraydar...she now will not let rishi to stay a min in hospital...she reached hospital n was 1st to wish rishi

Indu- gudmorning kiraydaar ji...kaise hai aap...*a slight smile was there in indu's face*

Rishi- gudmorning...thik hu aur kyu nah u aap ka chehra jo dekha subah subah...bas ab puri din khusi khusi..waise aap kab aayi

Indu- *blushed n as well as astonished tht y she blushed*-abhi abhi

Meanwhile rahul went to clear all bills and complete all paper work...rahul and sana came to rishi room and after few minutes all four goes from there...leaving all da worries they had last nite...they reached Sharma niwas

Indira- ab aap aaram kijiye...emin rukna chahti thi lekin boss ne abhi bulaya hai...so jaana hoga lekin aap apna pura khyal rakhenge...promise

Rishi- ha aap jaiye...mein aapna pura khyal rakhunga promise...aap befikr hoke jao

After indu leaves all three gather in barsati for da discussion of plan

Rishi- yaar kuch socho...mein yeh sham indira ke liye yaadgar banana chahta hu...

Sana- chill yaar...mene aur rahul ne sab kardiya hai...indiraji aur tere liye dress leliya hai

Rishi- thats gr8...sach me dost ho toh tumlogo jaisa...lekin venue kya hoga mein nahi chahta ki koi restaurant ho ya phir yeh ghar...mujhe akele mein unhe saari baatein karni hai taki koi disturbance naho...

Rahul- ha jaante hai...isiliye tera jo south delhi mein office ka diya hua ghar hai na ussi mein garden mein sab setting kardi hai...

Sana- bas ek prob. Hai...indiraji ko kaise layenge...woh toh kabhi nahi aane wali...

Rahul- uski fikr na karo mein launga aur dress bhi pehenne ke liye mein manaunga woh meri baat nahi talegi...

Sana- thats gr8...

Sana n rahul hugs...

Rahul- mein bhi hoo na

Rishi- aaja yaar...tu bhi aa

Woh ghadi aachuki thi jiska rishi was waiting desparately..it was all set only indira have to come there..sana sees rishi's face n laughs

Rishi-mene koi joke mara

Sana- nahi...lekin tumhari shakal dekhne layak hai...kitna nervous ho raha hai...yaar sab thik hoga...tension na le

Rahul- all set...rishi u go with sana n will take indu n come...mujhe pata hai yeh duniya ka sabse difficult kaam hai lekin...i will dot it for u...n rishi u have to pay for this

Rishi- always there for u..lets go sana

As sana n rishi were abt to go...rishi stops...nervous he was nervous but more than that he had done a blunder

Rishi- yaar ek bahut badi problem ho gayi hai...trust me bahut badi hai

Sana- kya hua...ab tune kya kiya

Rishi*lookin at rahul n sana*- mene toh ring li hi nahi...unhe propose kaise karunga...

Rahul n sana- kya!!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome...šŸ‘šŸ¼
Waiting for next part of proposal..

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