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Posted: 13 years ago
#51
well written...👏 wating 4 the next update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow.. That is just awesome.. Loved it..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#53
awsum update dear...👏... very emotional...

very well written...👍🏼

i luvd indu' line "mujhe MERA RISHI chahiye" ❤️... awww she luv rishi sooo much...😳 😍

thanks 4 d PM dear...😊

plzzz contd soon...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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guys i know very short update but sure next will be longer one
part 8

doctor came from icu...indira went near doc and asked about rishi's condition...till then rahul and sana too came

indira- doctor kya hua hai rishi ko...woh thik toh hai na...plzzz doctor kuch kahiye na

doctor- dekhiye jis baat ka darr tha wohi hua...mene inhe tnsn lene se mana kiya tha...but inhone mera baat nahi mana...abhi inki halat ghambhir hai...kuch kaha nahi ja sakta...aap bas dua kijiye jo mein soch raha hu woh galat nikle...lekin use pehle mujhe unka ct-scan karna hoga

indira- kya matlab doctor...kya galat nikle...aur ct- scan yeh kyu doc...kya hua hai rishi ko

doc- acc. Ke baad mujhe daar tha ki kahi inhe brain tumour toh nahi hua hai...mene ussi tym ct scan karne ko socha lekin unke progress ko dekh ke mujhe laga ki shayad nahi hoga but aaj yeh dekh ke mujhe shak hai...aap ghabraiye nahi mujhe sirf shak hai...baki upar wale ki marzi

doc went from there...indira cudnot believe her ears...she was completely shattered...it was like whole world came to a halt...after a while nurses and doc came out with rishi on stretcher he was lying very peacefully...indira saw rishi cumin out and followed them to ct-scan room...after reaching in ct-scan room while doc was preparing for scan indira stood near rishi's bed taking his hand on hers...

indira- rishi...m sorry...plzzz wapas aajao...promise mein kabhi bhi aap pe haath nahi uthaungi promise bas aap aajao...

till thn doc n nurses were reading...they told indu to go out so they can proceed further but she refused...rahul n sana came there

rahul- indira chalo yaha se...inhe aapna kaam karne do...plzzz chalo indira*dragged indira out of the room*

indira- chodo mujhe rahul mujhe rishi ke pass jaana hai...usse meri zarurat hai...plzz mujhe jaane do...

sana ' rahul sahi keh raha hai inndira...doc ko aapna kaam karne do plzzz...hum sahi intezaar karte hai...

indira didnot have any option but to listen them...she stayed there waiting for rishi...thn indira stood n went sumwhere...she went there where she promised that she wundn't go again...she went to hospital's mandir...she went there for the first tym after her vidit bhaiya's death...she joined her hands n prayed

indira- bhagwan ji...mene wada kiya tha ki mein yaha kabhi nahi aaungi jabse aapne mere vidit bhaiya ko mujhse chin liya...mene jaise taise khud ko sambhala tha tabhi aapne rishi ko mere zindagi mein bhej diya...mere andar phirse umeed ki kiran jag uthi ki shayad...meri zindagi badal jaye par aap ko yeh bhi bardasht nahi hua...jab rishi ko mujhse chin na hi tha toh mere zindagi mein bheja hi kyu...aakhir kyu...agar aapne rishi ko mere zindagi mein bheja hai toh aapka zimmedari hai ki aap rishi ko thik karoge...

indira folded her hands and prayed for rishi...she was crying and continuosly muttering rishi...thn sana came running to her

sana- indiraji...rishi...

indira- kay hua rishi ko...

sana- rishi ko hosh aagaya...aur rishi sirf aapka naam bol raha hai..

indira- kya...

after so many hours there was smile on indira's face...rite now she was the luckiest person on this earth...she wid out thinking ran towards rishi's room...she opened the door there rishi was half sitted on his bed and rahul was standing next to him...seeing indira...rishi's lips curved into a smile and later turned into widest one...then within a sec indira towards him n hugged him...seeing this everyone in the room were shocked...indira hugged rishi tht too tightly...rahul n sana went from there giving them some private tym...indira still hugged rishi...rishi too hold his mmj...that hugged said everything that they want to say...

rishi- aab aap mujhe kabhi chod ke nahi jaogi na...nahi to hiss bar mein seh nahi paunga

indira-*still hugging* nahi, kabhi nahi bhul ke bhi nahi jaogi rishi...bas aap bhi mujhe darana band karo...

rishi- kya aap aisehi rahoge...waise mujhe koi problem nahi hai...

indira*releases herslf from hug*- woh mein..woh...*in scolding tone so that she cud remove awkwardness* mene kaha tha aapko ki medicines lelo tym pe par aap meri baat sunte nahi...

rishi*wiping tears*- srry...lekin promise mein ab aapko kabhi tang nahi karunga

rishi again hugged indira...but this tym it was shorter one coz rahul n sana interrupted in between

rahul and sana *smiling and said together*- ahem ahem

indira and rishi separated from there hug...indira blushed and was lil embarrassed...

sana- agar aap logo ki baatein khtam hogayi ho toh hum aajaye...

rishi- arre sana tum bhi na...

doc enters and indira remembered that till now reports didnot come now again fear travelled indu's body...

indu- doc report...kya hai report mein

doc- ghabrane ki koi zarurat nai report normal hai...he is allright...

indira and rest took breath of relief...it was as if they got rid from a very huge burden...indira mann hi mann mein thanked god...

it was rishi who changed her...loosing rishi made her belief again on god...n she knew now that there is god who helps their disciples...

indira- hum inhe kab ghar le jasakte hai...

doc- bas aaj bhar inhe under observation mein rakhenge phir kal aap inhe ghar le jasakte hai...

indu goes from there as she cudnot control her tears...this tym tears were of happiness...but didnot want to make worry everyone so she went from there...

rahul and sana went to buy medicines...doc was about to leave but turned to say something to rishi

doc- aapki wife aapse bahut pyaar karti hai...jabse aap yaha aaye unke aankhon se continuosly tears girre the...woh kafi chinta kar rahi thi...

rishi- i know doc.*thinking*bas yeh baat unhe pata chal gaye...

a sweet smile came on rishi's face...


Edited by girl_rocks - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#55
guys thank you so much for your sweet comments it really encouraged me...thank you once again😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#56
awesome dear..loved it..😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#57
Its just awesome.. Loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
#58
wow ! awsum update dear...😛 👍🏼

thank god rishi is safe...😊

lag he nahi rha story read kar rahi hun... lag rha hai real me ye sab

ho rha hai...ye inshi ka jaaoo hai ya tumhari witting ka...👏

anyways... thanks for d PM dear...😊

plzzz contd soon...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#59
wow very nice update, looking foreword to read next 😳

keep up the good work 👏👏👏

thank u for the PM 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#60
my heart almost stop beating when the doc said that he suspected brain tumor..juz love the way u end this track..it was an awesome update..great work once again..looking out for the next update..😊

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