Originally posted by: Neenzm
Part 1: mystery start. I m guessing here too the girl who took the signature mission is Anchal. Well, let's see.
Ranvir n Kabir talks too fishy fishy. Their game rules talk is foreshadowing of their future equation.
Once again u linked Anchal's dad death to Raichands. Nice twist this is.
And now AanVir meeting. Literally blazing n dhamakedaar face off. She spanked him already. This reminds me of the Anchal in first couple of episodes.
Kabir too seems like the promo one kabir. Impulsive and hasty but emotional too for his bade.
Now you built up the platform for the story. Really looking forward to some RACE kinda story.
Continue soon
Cheers
Neen
Hi Neen,
Good guesswork, but I cant reveal yet whether you are correct.
You mention "once again". Is there another fan fic with this premise? I might have missed some of the works posted here. Please let me know if you feel it's too similar.
Race is one of my favourite films. If I can draw this story of a level even near Race, I would be a very happy girl. I have never tried writing in this genre before. So any praise means mountains to me.
Thank you for your encouragement!
Cheers
Sharon