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Sharon

@Sparkler8

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Posted: 7 years ago

Due to poor response, I am taking this story down as I dont wish to leave it discontinued.

Edited by Sparkler8 - 7 years ago

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anshvi

@anshvi

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Posted: 7 years ago

Liked it !

Update soon! 😃

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Sharon

@Sparkler8

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: anshvi
Liked it !
Update soon! 😃

Thank you anshvi.. Will try to update asap..

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Sharon

@Sparkler8

Dazzler

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
Interesting..

Hey Mystic, nice to see you here😊

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Sharon

@Sparkler8

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Neenzm

Update soon

Sure Neen.. will be updating soon..😊

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Sharon

@Sparkler8

Dazzler

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Rubygill528
Update soon 😳

Sure dear😊

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Rubygill528

@Rubygill528

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Posted: 7 years ago

Chapter 1,...very interesting. 👏 👏 . next chapter update soon dear 😊

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Sharon

@Sparkler8

Dazzler

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Rubygill528
Chapter 1,...very interesting. 👏 👏 . next chapter update soon dear 😊

Thank you dear.. I have assignments back to back until Friday.. So Saturday I can update..

Once I start uploading one everyday confirmed.. So do drop in here on the weekend😊

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Neenzm

@Neenzm

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

Hi sparkler (sorry don't know ur name)

Really nice start.

Epilogue: awww!!!!! A small kid was left deliberately at the station. My heart went out to the kid. Thank God the man took him to the orphanage though this is not good for any one.

You gave the nice touch to Ranvir's connection to the harmonica. Amazing creativity there.
I m sure this man would be the important link to the present.

I m guessing now this man might be Mr. Aditya shrivastva (Anchal's dad) coz he came mumbai too for his job.

Interesting

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Neenzm

@Neenzm

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

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Part 1: mystery start. I m guessing here too the girl who took the signature mission is Anchal. Well, let's see.

Ranvir n Kabir talks too fishy fishy. Their game rules talk is foreshadowing of their future equation.

Once again u linked Anchal's dad death to Raichands. Nice twist this is.

And now AanVir meeting. Literally blazing n dhamakedaar face off. She spanked him already. This reminds me of the Anchal in first couple of episodes.

Kabir too seems like the promo one kabir. Impulsive and hasty but emotional too for his bade.

Now you built up the platform for the story. Really looking forward to some RACE kinda story.

Continue soon

Cheers
Neen

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